MY INNOCENT SURRENDER 2 - New Thread Added

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Hello Dearies,

how are you all? I just finished my SS ''Parchhaiyan and very soon i will end KC to... Few parts are remaining only. So my two most awaited Fic are ready to come soon. Today i am posting CS and Prologue. But you guys have to wait till i update part 1 as i am not feeling well. Feaver, Cough and Cold all caught me together 😛

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PART - 2


SUN dawn but even its beam wont allowed to disturb the silent sleep of a man who ruling a world from his toe nail. His left arm raised and roamed on his luxurious bed. Those toxic eyes opened with a jerk,like he was searching for something. He was slept in trance and naked body was covered with a black satin sheet only. His jaw clenched hard andbrows knotted in anger. The girl he saw last night was missing and he want to saw her only. He inhaled sharp in frustration and come to from his bed. Truth of reality rosed his anger early morning.


Opening the knob he allowed water cool down his acrid head. But her thoughts not ready to leaving him. Again she was with him like last night,drenching with him and her wet form tempting him to arouse. He slapped a hand on each side of the counter,pinning her. Her lucious lips inviting him and he took them and nibbling to feed his hunger.


The moment with her was so soothing that he forgot wverything else but till he opened his eyes. Again he was all alone and she was vanished.


Maan get ready and came down for breakfast. Everything was in perfect order but he wont glance for once and just waved out. Someone was trying to catch him but he late. Maan already left his palace like mansion.


Trail of cars stopped in front of never ending building. Shuffer come out quickly to open car door for him. He step out and his guards come to cover him. He walked like wild wind who destroyed each and everything coming in his way. His eyes radiating heat of anger due to which no one can able to made an eye contact with.


He signaled and his guards left after opening his cabin door for him. As he entered his PA came inside to remind the schedule. She was shivering like a dry leaf. No one knows when his bad temper destroyed whom.


Suddenly one middle aged man in a three piece suit, entered in his cabin and though without his permission. Maan's eyes spitting fire seeing that man. 'how dare you?' he gritted his teeth.


He rushed to him and bend on his knees infront of him. 'Please Mr. Khurana,show some pitty on me. I will beg you.' He hold his leg and begged. But nothing effecting him. He was stand like a statue.


'please Mr. Khurana dont do this. Just show some mercy on my family. Main to road pe aa jaunga.' he was begging continously and a wicked smile came on his perfect sculptured lips.




'Ye tume mere against jane se pehle sochna chahiye the. What do you think that i will never got about your betrayal.' he was like concerete,fixed and immobile. No sign of forgiveness. 'and you. I think you dont need job any more.' he galed his PA and threatened her.


She got and quickly called the security incharge. He was begging when three men came inside. The clenched him and dragging along them. Same time one tall boy with well shaped form,having a sharp features entered inside. He saw the view and his killing smile which he used as his weapon to charm any girl come in his contact,vanished quickly. He was none other then but a young heir of Khurana's. Maan's younger sibbling,Dev Singh Khurana.



'next time if this happen again then i dont need to explain the consequences.' Maan addressed to her PA and signaled her to leave.


She gulped her saliva and moved out with pace steps. Dev staring him in confusion. 'bro what happened? Mr. Saxena k sath aisa suluk. I mean our company dealing with him from a long time.' Dev asked in a low voice.


Maan smirked as nothing had happened. 'we dont need his services any more Dev,so just forgot it.'


'bro sometimes you scared me alot. Bro dont you think you are so rude to everyone. Aise to koi aise aapke nazdeek aayega?' Dev's heart pounding with unknown fear and tension.


Maan ent near him and placed his arm on his shoulder. He took him to window. 'ye height dekh rahe ho Dev? Everyone wants to reach there but they dont have which i hold. Maan Singh Khurana ko ye height pasand hai no matter at what cost. I want ppl carry my fear so one can courage to came infront of me. And about you. You are very lucky Dev,because you are born as my sibbling. So you dont need to scare of me. I will do anything for you.' Maan said roughly,but in last he gave a smile which was for Dev.


He cares for him but Dev 's heart and mind alerts him. 'i think this not the right time. I have to wait.' he said to himself.


'where are you?' Maan asked seeing him lost. Dev changed his face expression quickly and smiled back towards his brother. 'by the way what you want?' Maan asked sitting on his chair.


'nothing bro.' he replied.



'then why so early in office. Your day start at 12 right? Or today your all girlfriends are busy somewhere else?' his said sarcastically.


'bro...,i leave all this.' Dev defends.


Maan glance up before bowering in his files. 'really and exactly when it happened? Two mins ago?' Maan taunts him again.


'no bro. Bro...' he wants to clearify but same moment his phone rang which only gifted him a threatening glare from his elder brother. 'i am sorry bro.' he apolozised and quickly left his cabin.


He went to some peaceful corner where he answered the call. But its too late. Call ended and whe he tried to call back the other person cut his call.


'aaj ka dinn hi kharab hai.' he remarked and left the office in hurry.


Enchanting music of temple bells. All devotees came and pray. In between the mob a beautiful girl,having perfect curves, sharp features,glowing smooth skin, fair complexison,long cascading hairs till back,peeping through her scarf as she covered her head for prayer,stand closing her eyes with joined hands. Priest singing aarti and all indulge in it.


Dev's lavish car stopped in front of temple. He quickly removed his shoes and cout the steps in full speed. He just manage to reach and stand next to that girl. She opened her one eye to glance him. Dev too joined hand and pass a smile to her but she twitched her lips and turned her face to another side. Both closed there eyes again.


After aarti,temple's priest came to give aarti to all. When her turn came,she took and gave Dev to as he was not use to it. Priest moved to others and she left quickly. Dev followed her but she was angry with clearly reflecting through her gestures.


He too run pacefully after and sucessdedd catching her. He grasped his arm and pulled to him. 'stop it Geet please. Let me explain at least.' He apolozise to her and seeking for forgiveness,but she aint in a mood.



NOTE: GUYS I NEED COMPLETE 200+ LIKES.


I know so many doubts are banging your head. But i cant explain anything right now.


Only one thing which i thought was much needed is that Maan is not casanova. He doesnt have any kind of relation to any woman.
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PART - 1




Its only 7 pm,and whole clouds were darkned like a smoke. Today whole city was drenching under the shower falling from the sky. Roads were conjucted and cars chasing to reached first to their destinantion. It wasn't a rainy season so no one is prepared for this. Traffic jams make life more hell. In this whole a luxurious car came and joined a long que of cars,waiting for light to turn green.



Driver scanned the whole and asked for the permission. 'sir there is a long jam,would i took aother route?' his voice is dim but enough for the one who was sitting on a back seat.


While tapping his long fingers on the keys of his laptop,he granted a permission. 'hmm.' His dark choclate brown eyes were laid on the screen but he was fully concious about his surrondings.


Driver with his permission took another route to reached their destinantion because he knew his boss doesnt liked to reached late. He took the route which is quite lonely,so its easy for him to drive in a pace.


Nature also doing its work. No one can rule her. Suddenly car stooped in mid way. He tried his level best but seems it wasn't ready to start. Those pair of eyes who were earlier laid on the screen of Laptop now glaring from behind. Driver saw the view in front mirror and his throat dried with fear.


'i am sorry sir. Let me check what happened.' He apolozise fearly.


'no need to touch my car. Call the expert mechanic from the company.' He commands rudely. Veins of his forehead turn promenient due to his clenched jaws.


Driver paniced and quickly called the mechanic from the car company. He was frustrated and angry on weather. He loved to rule his surroundings but weather is uncontrollable which frustrate him to its peak.


Maan Singh Khurana is the another name of attitude. Or better say attitude itself has no value infront of him. No one in this whole world had a courage to mess with him. He was coming in the top list most rich bussinessman. Not only in India,his bussiness webbed on whole world and he was struck in mid way because of bad weather.


Suddenly one ball came and splashed against his mirror. It turn muddier and grew his anger which had no limit. His jaws clenched hard and he come out of his car.




Slight stubbled face, sharp nose, dark intense rage filled eyes,perfect sculptured lips and petite form. His appearance grabbed anyone's attention but here no one cares about him. He glance and found one girl,not less then an epitome of beauty,sculpturedd features fare complexion was madly playing with some kids.


Her white suit glued to her wet body and gave him a full view of her curvious body. She came and pick up the ball quickly. 'i am sorry.' She said in a swift moment and stirred like a top. Her long cascading hairs slapped his face and he forced to clenced his eyes for a sec. Her chimming voice echoing in his ears.



Maan's whole anger was flee away like a water. His intense gaze glued to her only. Almost for an hour he stood stand in rain just to stare her.


'sir car is ready.' Driver informed and broke his trance.


Maan turned and Driver opened the door for him. He went and about enter but stopped and slanted his neck back to catch her view one last time. But she was all vanished like a dream. He ran where she was playing but in a flip of moment they all were vanished.


He called to his secratory and told her to cancelled the meeting he was going for. Driver took him back to his mansion,which not less then a palace. Maan entered furiously towards his room. He threw his belongings here and there and went inside his washroom.


In whole route he was only think about that girl. Till date no girl can able to got his attention. His life only revolves around his bussiness. He love power. Power to rule. Power to control others. Girls, love, emotions are not meant for him.


It wasn't that he never got proposal from high profile families but no girl had a charm to woo Maan Singh Khurana. He was of 29 but never had a thought of desire. His only desire was to accuire power. More power then anyone had. But she lignite something which was buried deep inside him. She was not the only beautiful girl he had met but she had something which made him restless. Her every geture was fresh and clear in his mind.

WARNING: 18+

Maan was standing under his shower when her soft palm roamed over his toned body and hugged him from back side.



Sharm hata de jo shab gira le aankhon pe
Pyaas mita de.. wo nami chura le honton se
Main jalti raatein teri
Tu wo subah jo bujha de
Bheeg loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein
Bheegh loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein bheeg loon

Maan felt her warm body rubbed against him. Naked contact of both drive him crazy. Lust swarming in his blood. She step back leaving him but Maan catch her and pulled to him. Her wet hairs covering her beautiful face. Maan raised his hand and caressed with his tips. He puleld back all the hairs and encircled her sleek waist to crush in him. Her baby pink lips inviting him to taste.

Aa honton pe tu khwahish tu bun le
Baaki jo hasrat wo chun le
Bikhre hain jo katre mere[B]

Maan leaned over her face and bite them vivaciously. She moaned in esctasy and he deepend the kiss. She fists his broad shoulder. Her taut peaks stroking against his peaks,begging for his attention. Maan devour every ounce gradually. His tongue played with hers and he suck her saliva. He aroused and found her touch unbelievably erotic. He palmed her one bossom and squeezed harshly. Thumbing the taut peak before kneading them. Maan pulled her up and she quickly encircled her legs around his waist.

[B]Ho.. haan tan se tan uljhale zara
Phir se mann sulga le zara
Chakhne to de tukde tere
Main jalti raatein teri
Tu wo subah jo bujha de
Bheeg loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein
Bheegh loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein bheeg loon

He adjust her against him and elicting a loud moan from her at the depth of his penetration. He began to move inside her. He staring her hungrily. He come out to going even more deeper. Both kissed again and again.

Aa ye raatein lambi tu kar de
Chingari rag-rag mein bhar de
Sharmon se tu sharmo haya
Ho.. haan rakh le tu lab ko labon pe
Main guzru meri hadon se
Thehru kahaan kuch tu bata
Main jalti raatein teri
Tu wo subah jo bujha de
Bheeg loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein
Bheegh loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein bheeg loon


After drying her he took her to his bedroom and made her laid on his luxurious bed. She rolled to other side,wrapping her in a sheet but Maan wasnt enough of her. Her naughty and gleaming eyes tempting him. Once again he removed the sheet to got her view. His lips taste every curve of hers. Covering her underneath him and kissed passionately all over from her face to cleavges. Nibbling the soft flesh on her neck he moved to suckle her bossoms.


Once again he filled her with him till he exhaust. When he done,she wrapped him in her arms. He rested his head on her soft chest and sleeped peacefully...




NOTE: HI guys, so here is first part of season 2. I hope you all enjoying it.😉 Please give your response. Coz if i wont get good response i will shift it to to Blog and only share with those who are intrested. So please let me know about your views.



And yes let me clear one more thing Maan is not a casanova...



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PART - 3



Dev was running to catch her. He scape two three stairs and quickly grabbed her arm to face her. Her furious face complementing her natural beauty. Her almond hazles spitting fire this time due to which her sharp white nose fluffered in anger. Her creamy white cheek was turned into a cherry red. Dev got to know he was in danger sawing her temper.


'Geet i am sorry.' He addressed her softly.


She glared him which was a signal for him to leave her arm and excatly he do it. She crossed her arms near her chest and glaring her. 'kya time hua hai?' She asked in a threatening way.


Dev glance his watch and gulped his saliva. 'i know sweetheart,i had to present much earlier but what to do? You know na aaj bro se baat karni thi?' He defend himself.

She staring him. Trying to find out weather he was lying or not. Her fingers playing on her forearms. 'so had do done it?' He was again in trouble. Not finding answers. 'again lying?' she said briskly and moved.



Dev chased her and obstruct her way. 'Geet please listen to me.' he pleads.


'kya sunu Dev? From past one month you daily giving me excuses ki aaj baat karunga kal baat karunga. But you ever sucessded? no. Muhe to lagta hai you dont even want to. Dev tell me honestly, is i am only a time pass for you,like your past Girlfriends?' She gave stretch and her eyes filled with sudden fear mixed with doubt.


Dev embraced her quickly. 'no never. I love you truly.'

she come out of his embrace. 'then why you dont tell your brother about us. You know my family. They searching good match for me. Till i am suceeded to reject but how long will it go. One day i have to bow down againt my Uncle's wish. Dev he is my Uncle not my parents. I am his responisibilty and he want me to settle down as soon as possible.' Her voice carry both disappointment and fear of loosing her love for forever.


Dev cupped her face and made to look at him. 'Geet i understand your problem but you too try and understand. I was trying in morning but bro was so upset and angry.' He told his problem.


Geet flinch off his hands. 'ye kab nahi hota Dev? Your hitler brother always stay angry. I just dont understand what kind of a person he is. You scared from him like he is a some kind of a monster. Dev it wont goes like this for long. You have to talk to him about us,if you want me in your life.' Geet pressurising him for their sake as she found his fear was baseless.


'Geet you dont know him...' Dev dont even able to complete she cut him in between.


'or mujhe janna bhi nahi hai. He is just a freak monster and trust me his behaviour taking him towards lonliness. Soon a time come when no one is with him. Itna gussa or akad kis baat ki hai?' She snaping getting frustrated from Dev's fear of his elder brother Maan singh Khurana. Though she never saw him but somewhere she start hating him,after listening about his stories from Dev.


'He is not bad Geet. Bas thode strick hai. And i think if he dont then we are not here were we are today. Bro work hard thats why he is India's top most rich business tycoon.' Dev defends him.


'ya ofcourse.' she said wrly.


'Geet bro is alone. I am sure when some girl came in his life...' Again he cut by her.


'Really? Do you think so? The way you described his nature,koi akkal se padle hi hogi jo us bull head se shadi karegi.' again Geet snap back sarcastacilly.


'ok leave. I promise i will talk to him as soon as possible.' Dev dont want raise her temper.


Same time she got some call and Geet go at some distance. She amswered the call. 'nahi abhi kaam nahi hua. I think it will take more time. Jitna maine socha tha usse zada time lagega.' she told the caller in disappointment,bitting her nail. Dev to come closer to her and she quickly cut the call. 'you there. Main bas aa rahi thi na.' She fummbled.


'kiska call tha?' Dev asked casually.


'my Uncle.' she replied quickly. 'ok i have to go now. I have some pending work.' she told him and got ready to leave. 'Dev jo karna hai jaldi karo.' She remind him last time before leaving.


Dev pulled her in his embrace again. 'dont worry i dont gonna loose you any how. Waise b aisi ladki roz thodi milti hai jo first meet pe hi slap kar de.' He gave a teasing smile and she pout staring him in anger. Geet again slap his arm continously. 'hey hey relax i am just joking.'

'bye.' she said and leave quickly.

Dev smirked and wore his shades back. He to moved in his car.


Its 11 when Maan was sitting in his private baar,sipping his drink. His mind wasn't ready to leave her thoughts and tormenting him. With every sip he dizzy and toxic eyes saw her infront of him.


That mystery girl walked towards him. Maan stood and went closer to her. She raised her soft hand which fists firmly by Maan in air. He pulled her to him with a strong force.


She bumped on him and a groan electing from his throat. He aroused,and his hands roaming over her fabric. He loosen her shirt and allow his rough hand to explore her skin. She made a groan sound which pleasured him more. He held her hand and placed on his shaft getting hard and protruding against his jeans. He glued her,leaving no space between. 'see what you had done to me.' Maan said huskily and kissed on her bare shoulder. Soon she was on floor laying on her scattred clothes and Maan came on top of her. He claimed her again and again.


Sun dwan with MSK's terror. He entered in his cabin and call someone. Soon one well dressed up man present in his office. He dont even sat before him because he dont asked for it. Maan commands him.


'but sir how will i find her?' He doubted and got deadly glare in return. 'i am sorry sir. But neither we have her pic nor any clue. Not even her name. Ab aap hi bataiye aise kaise...' his words died before he completes when Maan came to him.


He clenched hard his shoulder. 'mujhe na kehne wale log pasand nahi hai. You got that.' he threatened him.


'i got it sir.' he was wincing but agreed on his terms. 'sir i had one solution. I called sketch maked from our agency. Aap us ladki ki detail use batana or wo sketch bana lega. Isse hum use aasani se dhoondh payege.' He still wincing as Maan's grip was firm and hurting.


But when he gave a hope he got relief for himself. "two days. You had only two days. After that i want all details about her." Maan's fire emitting eyes and commands clearly told him that his countdown starts. He quickly called sketch artist from his office.


Maan went outside for some work. He entered in lift and same time next lift's door open and a girl in white suit come out. Maan saw her back and meantime his door closed. Suddenly his concious mind alerts him and stop the lift on next floor. Maan quickly come out and ran over stairs to reach his office. His eyes scanning all around as he was searching something. He asked from his staff about the girl entered few moment ago but no one sees her as all are busy in their work. Maan got frustrated and ran madly here and there in her search.


Dev was working in his cabin. His door opened jerkly and his eyes popped out. 'Geet what the hell are you doing here?' he panicked.


'aint you happy see me here?' she asked pouting angrily.


'Geet marwaogi yaar. Bro office me and if he saw you,i am dead. He wont like entertaning guests at office. Pls go.' Dev pleads.


'tumse to baat hoti nahi so i thought ye kaam b mujhe hi karna padega. Where is your monster singh khurana tell me. I will talk to him. Main b to dekhu konsi top hai wo.' Geet was very determined and confident to. Her fearless approch not digested by Dev.


'Geet its not a joke. Pls let me handle this situation at my own. Why creating problems for us?' Dev hold her arm and tried to took her out. But as he opened his cabin door he found Maan coming there only. He instantly locked the door. 'damn bro is coming.' he worried.


'good see god also want us to meet.' Geet said fussily. She wants to meet her any cost.


'Geet dont you dare. Come with me.' Dev thinking where he hide her. And when he found no place he hide her under his table.



Same moment Maan entered like a wind wind. Dev alerts and tried to behave normal. 'bro you here? Mujhe bula lete.' But Maan unlisten him and start scanning his cabin. He checked every where except his table. 'kya hua bro aap kuchh dhoondh rae hai kya?' Dev asked and broke his trance.


'nahi..ha..' he gave two ans and make him confuse. Maan step towards exit. 'Dev sis you saw any girl in white suit,just coming here.' He asked and Dev gulped his saliva.


'dam bro saw her.' he whispered in his mouth. Seeing him mummering in his mouth Maan asked again. Moreover Geet raising her head to come out but Dev managed to push her down. 'nahi bro. Main to kabse cabin me hi hu. Or yaha koi nahi aaya.'


'hmm... Wait a min ye female perfume ki smell kyu aa rahi hai tumhare cabin se? Did you brought your GF here?' Maan asked strongly.



Dev's heart was almost ready to come out. 'trust me bro. I wont.' He was praying that Maan leave as soon as possible so he would made her exit to.

'ok.' he said and scaned all around before leaving.


Precap : Maan met Geet...
NOTE: guys I think you were not taking Intrest in this FF. So thought of either closing it or shifting it to blog. I am looking for this update and If I dont get proper Likes and comments then I will make my decision according to that
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PART - 4



MAAN returned to his cabin after searching his mystery girl in whole office. He was fuming,his beats were uneven and eyes filled with anger and insanity.



She occupying his mind and thought which definitely not good for his sanity. He was obsessed with her right now. In evening he took the same route where he saw her first. Maan stopped the car at the spot and come out of his car. Its dark outside. Nothing was visible properly and winds stroking whole atmosphere. Maan's urge to get her making his life out of his control. He cant even stop thinking for a second. His eyes was concentrating only on the empty roads.


His trance broke by his phone but not completely. Without glancing at screen he just pick up the call and start talking in his famous rude tone. He was walking while talking when a girl collapse on him and his phone falls down. Maan's all frustration turned into a rage which reflecting through his red turned eyes at the corners. Before her burst she bend on knees to pick up his phone.

"i am sorry for my mistake. But it wasn't intentionally. One dog is chasing me and was running blindly. So sorry Mr. Here is your phone." She raised her hand to gave his phone. Maan snatched his phone with a jerk,but she able to notice that his hand cutted with her cruvy bangel,in the dim light of his car's headlights. Blood was oozinf from his wound. Though it was minor cut but she felt guilty. "excuse me,your hand cuts." she said with all concern.


Maan only realised when she told. He just glane for a sec and avoid as nothing had happened. He was moving but she held his hand and stopped him. "hello dont avoid this. Atleast clean it." she advised which was more then his bearings. She dont have an idea what she was doing.

Maan glared her in return but she to avoide. She had one bottle of water in her bag. She quickly brought it out to clean his wound. Maan snatch back his hand. "stay away." he is threatening more then commanding but indeed she wasn't affected.


When he is doing tantrum,She quickly wrapped her henaky around his wound. "it seems you love shoing anger. But i only want to mend my mistake." she said while wrapping his hand and again vanished quickly in darkness.


Maan was about to open the henky of hers when he agai receieved a call and his mind divereted. Maan sat inside while talking and signaled his driver. He hang up and forgot about the girl who just collided with him.


Maan reached KM and went inside his room. He threw his clothes and went inside his washroom,where his hand gain his attention. Her henky remind him off their small meeting. He was thinking about that girl to whom he wont even able to saw because of darkness and mainly her covered face with her scarf. Only her eyes were visible.

"stupid girl." he remarked and opening the knot. His pace slowed down when he remind of her again. "damn she was there and i missed her. That eyes,i cant forgot." he fists the crimp and cursed himself. He was so close to him and he missed her.


Maan opened the knot and glance at her hankerchief. He fists it firmly. "aaj nahi to kal tume mere pas aana hi hoga sweetheart."



Complete Darkness alla round. One pair of shoes moved inside a dark room. Person turned on the dim light and moved on. One clean sheet was there waiting for him. He picked up his brush and start potraying one face on it. Soon one face appeared which he wants. He stared the potray.


"you belongs to mine only." he said strongly and cut his thumb to filled the space between the hairs of the image. His rough hands stroked the images. After tuned off the lights he come out of the room and locked it again.


Both Maan and Dev came for dinner. Maan glance at his thumb and noticed bandage. "what happened?"

"nothing bro subah office me knief se cut gaya tha." he explained.

"hmm. Be careful." he instruct and both talk over some bussiness issue.


Later on Dev recieved a call from Geet. She was cribbing so was Dev. "Geet dont do this stunt again only i know how i managed your escape today."


"Dev i wared you if you dont talk then i will come KM to and talk directly to your Monster Singh Khurana." Geet warned him.


"No way... Promise me you wont do this stunt ok. I promise i will talk to him about us." He assured her like always.


"but when? Dev trust me kal tak ka time hai tumhare pas bas. Parso subah main tumhare ghar pe houngi and thats final." She gave stress on her words and Dev knows she can do it like she arrived in morning.

"uski nobat nahi aayegi. I will introduce you by myself." Dev assured her. And now he was thinkng how will he make up. He have no choice left now.



SORRY FOR DELAY GUYS AND THANKS FOR SUPPORT. WAITING FOR YOUR RESPONSE.
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PROLOGUE



Every coin have two sides. One is brighter and visible to eyes. But other which was laying in darkness not shown to anyone. One can only saw the appearence which is present to our eyes. But what about the hidden side. What if that side come in front and changed everything.

All human beings on this earth tried to hide that side but inside everyone aware of its darkness...

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CHARACTER SKETCH



MAAN SINGH KHURANA:
Errogance and Attitude are the words to describe him. Very ambitious and most eligiable bachlor in town but no girl is able to turn him around.







DEV SINGH KHURANA:
Second heir and sibbling of MSK. Playboy and famous among all girls.







GEET HANDA:
Simple living high thinking. Live in present. Down to earth and straight forward.



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INDEX



CS AND PROLOGUE : SCROLL DOWN

PART 1 - PG 11


PART 1

P 2 - PG 56

PART 2

P 3 - PG NO 88


PART 3

P 4 - PG NO 127

PART 4


THREAD 2



THREAD 3


THREAD 4
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BANNER PIC






A VERY SPL THANX TO CHERRISH FOR THIS LOVELY BANNER 🤗 ❤️
Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
wait what
who was the person
the one doing drawing
not dev
or was it maan
well evidence points to dev
but i think might be maan
or someone else
but was it geet painting
damn man
too mysterious
you are very naughty
giving us tidbits only
damn yaar this just gets more intriguing
keep at it though
there is fun to decode it
maan missed her again
dude if only you werent being so rude
you would have found her
but is that wise
dev and geet are together
or are they
geet or dev will introduce her to maan
and what happens when he does see geet
lets wait and watch
errr read i mean
this is gonna be fun
hmmm two obsessed lovers or just one
hope geet knows what she is in for
that she wants to be with dev
but she herself is hiding something too
geet is all ready to meet dev bro
but is the said bro ready
Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

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