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Din dihade nahi baby raat me in his own sweet time 😆 😉

Originally posted by: sagorika93

1st part was awesome dear . maan geet ki meeting was superb . story ka first part bohot Jada intense tha n isse pata chlta hai puri story kitni intense hogi😉I m sure maan din dahade imagin kar raha hai geet ko😛😉

Originally posted by: singh24

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same to u dear ❤️

Originally posted by: Dragon-Heart

Din dihade nahi baby raat me in his own sweet time 😆 😉

Bas imaging hi karta rehega kya ? 😉😛

So what u want him to do :p

Originally posted by: sagorika93

waiting for the next part...

PART - 4



MAAN returned to his cabin after searching his mystery girl in whole office. He was fuming,his beats were uneven and eyes filled with anger and insanity.



She occupying his mind and thought which definitely not good for his sanity. He was obsessed with her right now. In evening he took the same route where he saw her first. Maan stopped the car at the spot and come out of his car. Its dark outside. Nothing was visible properly and winds stroking whole atmosphere. Maan's urge to get her making his life out of his control. He cant even stop thinking for a second. His eyes was concentrating only on the empty roads.


His trance broke by his phone but not completely. Without glancing at screen he just pick up the call and start talking in his famous rude tone. He was walking while talking when a girl collapse on him and his phone falls down. Maan's all frustration turned into a rage which reflecting through his red turned eyes at the corners. Before her burst she bend on knees to pick up his phone.

"i am sorry for my mistake. But it wasn't intentionally. One dog is chasing me and was running blindly. So sorry Mr. Here is your phone." She raised her hand to gave his phone. Maan snatched his phone with a jerk,but she able to notice that his hand cutted with her cruvy bangel,in the dim light of his car's headlights. Blood was oozinf from his wound. Though it was minor cut but she felt guilty. "excuse me,your hand cuts." she said with all concern.


Maan only realised when she told. He just glane for a sec and avoid as nothing had happened. He was moving but she held his hand and stopped him. "hello dont avoid this. Atleast clean it." she advised which was more then his bearings. She dont have an idea what she was doing.

Maan glared her in return but she to avoide. She had one bottle of water in her bag. She quickly brought it out to clean his wound. Maan snatch back his hand. "stay away." he is threatening more then commanding but indeed she wasn't affected.


When he is doing tantrum,She quickly wrapped her henaky around his wound. "it seems you love shoing anger. But i only want to mend my mistake." she said while wrapping his hand and again vanished quickly in darkness.


Maan was about to open the henky of hers when he agai receieved a call and his mind divereted. Maan sat inside while talking and signaled his driver. He hang up and forgot about the girl who just collided with him.


Maan reached KM and went inside his room. He threw his clothes and went inside his washroom,where his hand gain his attention. Her henky remind him off their small meeting. He was thinking about that girl to whom he wont even able to saw because of darkness and mainly her covered face with her scarf. Only her eyes were visible.

"stupid girl." he remarked and opening the knot. His pace slowed down when he remind of her again. "damn she was there and i missed her. That eyes,i cant forgot." he fists the crimp and cursed himself. He was so close to him and he missed her.


Maan opened the knot and glance at her hankerchief. He fists it firmly. "aaj nahi to kal tume mere pas aana hi hoga sweetheart."



Complete Darkness alla round. One pair of shoes moved inside a dark room. Person turned on the dim light and moved on. One clean sheet was there waiting for him. He picked up his brush and start potraying one face on it. Soon one face appeared which he wants. He stared the potray.


"you belongs to mine only." he said strongly and cut his thumb to filled the space between the hairs of the image. His rough hands stroked the images. After tuned off the lights he come out of the room and locked it again.


Both Maan and Dev came for dinner. Maan glance at his thumb and noticed bandage. "what happened?"

"nothing bro subah office me knief se cut gaya tha." he explained.

"hmm. Be careful." he instruct and both talk over some bussiness issue.


Later on Dev recieved a call from Geet. She was cribbing so was Dev. "Geet dont do this stunt again only i know how i managed your escape today."


"Dev i wared you if you dont talk then i will come KM to and talk directly to your Monster Singh Khurana." Geet warned him.


"No way... Promise me you wont do this stunt ok. I promise i will talk to him about us." He assured her like always.


"but when? Dev trust me kal tak ka time hai tumhare pas bas. Parso subah main tumhare ghar pe houngi and thats final." She gave stress on her words and Dev knows she can do it like she arrived in morning.

"uski nobat nahi aayegi. I will introduce you by myself." Dev assured her. And now he was thinkng how will he make up. He have no choice left now.



SORRY FOR DELAY GUYS AND THANKS FOR SUPPORT. WAITING FOR YOUR RESPONSE.

wait what
who was the person
the one doing drawing
not dev
or was it maan
well evidence points to dev
but i think might be maan
or someone else
but was it geet painting
damn man
too mysterious
you are very naughty
giving us tidbits only
damn yaar this just gets more intriguing
keep at it though
there is fun to decode it
maan missed her again
dude if only you werent being so rude
you would have found her
but is that wise
dev and geet are together
or are they
geet or dev will introduce her to maan
and what happens when he does see geet
lets wait and watch
errr read i mean
this is gonna be fun
hmmm two obsessed lovers or just one
hope geet knows what she is in for
that she wants to be with dev
but she herself is hiding something too
geet is all ready to meet dev bro
but is the said bro ready

Yahoo me 2nd

Omg now what was that I'm totally confused richu wase he fever ki wajha se my head is spinning grrr then

this mysterious update whole update gone has above my head like what is happing ,who is chasing whom,
to much...
questions n no answer jisne answer karna h wo h irritating devil grrr ...

maaneet are so mysterious n confusing ...

n richu dare u show its dev...n dev was too obsessed for geet n all that n he is the real negative person in this story no way pakk gaye hu ye track read kar k ...n plss villain thora callassy n mast dena maaza aaye ga...

but I like this update so much...