MG #2 Vivaah..Adhura Bandhan/pg138/16may - Page 2

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Part 12

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He held her wrist & twists her hand around back & held her hairs

tightly...

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Her curves were pressing against his chest..She felt her heart began

to race & her body grew hot. She felt strong sensation of arousal...

with pain...he held her so harshly... tear slip down from her eyes...

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He don't know why he not see her in pain and why she affect him so

much..Why her words open his past...

She tries to push him but his hold is tight... he sees she struggling to come out from his grip...he hurting her in own anger...


he loose the grip & he brought his hand from her hair to shoulder then waist ...

He realizes what he doing in anger...he takes step back...

Maan : tum tyaar ho jaayo

Mein bahar intzaar kr raha hu

.

He seeing her last time before going ...and take step back near to

her...and tied the dori & left...

*******

geet sari

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Dekha babaji aapne

Mujhe ignore kr rhe hai

Aaj inka birthday hai aur ye

Saddu mood mein hai

One voice came from behind... "kaun saddu mooh mein hai"

Bhai aap yaha

She so happy to see, hugged him tightly...

Aap yaha kaise

Bs yaha kuch kaam tha

Socha tumahri bhabhi ko bhi sath le aayu

Geet : oh ho

Short honeymoon

He : badmash

Geet : bhabhi kaha hai

He : usse koi patient mil gya honga aapna

.

Raman

Raman : lo aa gyi

Ishita ye geet hai

My sweet girl friend

He winks geet ...

Ishita : girl friend

Geet : yes

He is my best Boy friend

Maan hears geet last line & stop at the point & mummers "boyfriend"

Geet slides hand around raman...

Can we have dance together...

Raman : why not sweetheart

Ishita : raman

Aapko saram nhi aati

Raman : geet lets go

Maan not sees all this, he also not getting why he feel restlessness...

.

raman turned geet making her back slam against his chest and fixed his gaze on ishita and slowly said "she looking so cute in anger"

bhai aapko bhut mehnga padne wala hai

raman : chill geet

us madam ko bhi pata chale jealousy kya cheez hoti hai

geet : why you want this

raman : are buddu simple hai

I want she say to me " I love you raman"

Geet : kya jealousy mein bhabhi ye kh dengi

Raman : of course

She don't see me with anyone

.

raman swiftly brought geet closer to himself to match up with the beats which made maan's or ishita blood boil...

geet (think) : kya maan ko bhi kuch feel honga mujhe kissi aur ke sath dekhke

She sees towards maan , seeing his angry eyes...

Now why he is angry...

Babaji kya ye bhi jealous hai...

.

Geet too increased her pace getting the hint of maan's escalating envy. She knew maan was feeling something, but denying...

Raman : not bad geet

Dance tum acha krti ho

Geet : you too bhai

.

Bhai bhabhi khi dikh nhi rhi

Khi wo jyada gussa toh nhi ho gyi

Raman : ye kaha gyi

Geet mein dekh ke aata hu

He kissed on her forehead & left to searching geet...

Geet going back but he pulled her to himself by force trapping her in his stout chest like stage like she was his life which was going away from him...!!

Geet : maan sir aap

Maan : sshhh

Geet : you drunk

Maan : why you always asking questions to me

She was dying to see the same craving in his eyes for her, which she has for him and his turmoil was quite visible...

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Geet : that's a illusion or reality

Maan : what you want to believe

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Geet too sneaked her arms around his waist tightly...Maan felt so pleased to finally have her in his arms so close to him which instilled a new spark and energy in him ...

They danced with full dynamism and chemistry burning the stage

and making the audience dazed with their dance performance...

. ************

Maaneet come back to delhi ...& engrossed in work...

One month more passed, something changed in maan , now he

calling geet her name nor miss khurana ...now she is geet for him..

Geet is happy; she successful on first step ... but her manzil is far

away...

.

Us raat ke baad

Kuch toh badal gya inme

Par kuch acha huya

Toh kuch bura bhi

Now he talks minimum with her...

Humesha wo km hi bolte the

Par na jaane ab toh phle se bhi km ho gya

I trying to irritate him

Trying to fight with him

But he ignored her...why

*************

Hey geet

Hello

Sorry maine aapko pechana nhi

Geet am ishita your raman bhai wife

Geet : oh bhabhi

Ishita : ya

Geet : bhabhi us din job hi raman bhai ne kiya

Ishita : mujhe toh starting se sb pata tha geet

Am also enjoying his drama

Geet : kya ha

Ishita : actually raman se mein us waqt phone pe baat kr rhi thi

Jb unhone tumhe dekha

Wo phone cut krna hi bhool gye

Mein phle se hi jaan gyi thi

Tum unki sister ho

Geet : bhabhi aapne kuch nhi kaha

Fir bhi

Ishita : ravan kumar ko bhi kbhi - kbhi enjoy krne ka mauka dena

chaiye

Geet : bhabhi aap bhut achi ho

.

Fir bhabhi apne bhai ko sb bta diya

Ishita : itni jaldi kya thi

Thoda hum bhi enjoy kr le

.

Geet : hmm

Bhabhi aapne aaj phone kiya achanak

Ishita : oh ha

Wo ek choti si valentine party rakhi hai

Tum delhi mein hi hu

Kyun na tum bhi join karlo hume

Geet : par mein kaise

Wo toh couple party hoti hai

Ishita : so what

You are our family friend

Upar se tumhe raman apni bhen manta hai

So come

Mein raman ko bhol dungi

Wo tumhe pick kar lenga

Geet : bhabhi

Maine koi tyaari nhi ki

Party dress

Ishita : I manage

Tum aa rhi ho

Geet : ok bhabhi

Ishita : apna address message kr do mujhe abhi

Geet : bhabhi

Mein abhi office mein hu

Mein khud aa jaayungi

Ishita : raman aa rhe hai tumhe lene

Wo direct office se pick kar lenge

Geet : ok

*************

Raman : I want to meet geet handa

Pinky : sorry sir

Yaha koi geet handa nhi hai

Raman : kaisi baat kr rhi hai aap

Usne mujhe yhi address diya hai

Wo yhi kaam krti hai

Aap geet ko bulaiye

Pinky : sir yaha koi geet handa kaam nhi krti hai

Par ha ek geetanjali khurana hai

.

.

Another side

Maan : dad ye itni awaaz kyun aa rhi hai reception area se

Mein dekhta hu

Dad : maan tum cabin mein jaayo

Mein dekhta hu

Waise bhi mein ghar hi jaa raha hu

Maan : itni jaldi

Dad : aaj valentine day hai

Tumhe bhi apni girl friend ke sath manana chaiye

Maan : dad meri koi GF nhi hai

Aap jaaiye

***********

Ram : what happen pinky

Pinky : sir mein inhe kbse samjhane ki koshish kr rhi hu

Yaha koi geet handa work nhi krti

Par ye hai ki maan hi nhi rhe

Ram (mummer) thankgod mein aa gya

Maan aa jaata toh

Raman : sir

Geet yhi hai

I try to call her too

But she is not picking my call

Ram : what's your name

Raman : raman

Ram : raman come with me

.

Come

He takes her to geet cabin...

Raman : sir

Ram : relax

Go

Geet andher hai cabin mein

Wo meeting mein humare sath thi

Abhi free huyi hai

Raman : par wo

Ram : forget about pinky

**********

Raman : geet

Geet : bhai aap aa gye

Raman : geet ye kaisa office hai

Jaha receptionist ko itna tak nhi pata

Yaha kaun kaam krta hai

Kaun nhi

Geet : bhai kya huya

Raman tells her all thing...

Geet (think) geet aaj toh babaji ne bcha liya tujhe

Ydi dad ki jagah maan aa jate toh

Aur tu bhool kaise gyi

Ye baat

Raman : ab tu kha kho gyi

Geet : kuch nhi bhai

You forget

Mera full name geetanjali

Aapne geet bola na isliye pinky confuse ho gyi hongi

Raman : par usne geetanjali khurana bola mujhe

Handa khti toh mein jaan jaata

Geet : bhai wo kuch kaam kr rhi hongi

Confuse rhti hai wo

Aap ye sb chodo

Hum chalte hai

Raman : hmm

***********

Maan coming from opposite side & sees her again with Raman...geet

holding raman held tight...

He can't stand any more for sees her with another man...

Precap : valentine party

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Aur ab maan kya karenga

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Give some idea's friends...

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Ha ha aapko yeh question kyo pushti hai Geet that u r drunk or not...yeh aapka favorite shonk hai n her question...loved the passion between then and dance...beautifully wriiten dear...and waiting for more...😃

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Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

Ha ha aapko yeh question kyo pushti hai Geet that u r drunk or not...yeh aapka favorite shonk hai n her question...loved the passion between then and dance...beautifully wriiten dear...and waiting for more...😃

Sonia


😉

THANKS
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
hi thanks 4 da amazing update! Well written! Mana hurts Geet! she is in tears! Maan wonderrs y he cant see her in pain! her leaves! Raman arrives! Geet n Raman talk! Raman is like her bro! Ramn trn 2 make Ishita j! so he n Geet dance! bt Maan j ! he drinks n then dances with Geet! Maan nw calls her Geet! Ishita calls Geet n invites 4 vday party! she knew Raman was tryn 2 make her j! Geet n Ishita chat! Raman arrives at KC! he wants 2 meet Geet Handa! Pinky says only Geet Khurana! Ram intervenes! Geet n Raman meet! Maan sees them n is angry! update soon!
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Very nice update
Maan jealous
Maaneet dance was good

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