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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hay!

lovely start... u write so well thanks to all those people who inspired u to pen down your thoughts!

so waiting for the next!😃

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EllenaStarlet

@EllenaStarlet

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Nice character sketch and part 1

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

interesting start...

waiting for next update

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Really different ff... starting itself is too gud making geet independent is very nice. This update u have showed the interaction between the family simply over a breakfast. That was very nice. Would like to see more faces of geet. And wat has happened? Who was the guy in geet's life? And wat happened later? Eagerly waiting...

And abt other ffs... I started with the rain by dia, later I read opposites attract, both are awesome though rain is still to be completed. Muskan di's all ffs are good. U can try pregnant with player's child by nandy bru...and a lottt more...😉

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

I m really liking it the way u have written
very wekk done
geet still did not come out fromthe past
may b she is still in love with her husband and totalky heartbroken now

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

interesting update! Geet's past nt allowing her 2 move forward! update soon! well written

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Women drowned in her own life!

Interesting...

so it Maan indeed!😃

would wait for the next set ofintroductions😊

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Nice story with a different concept..Prologue and CS interesting.. Geet as an independent woman and has a daughter other than her Dad and her sister..Read all 3 parts..Its superb and captivating..Will wait for next..