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congratzz for te new thread
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wow lovely superb update..te way geet ki pain and my maan consoling her but her words hurting my maan and they eyes showing so much feelings which they lips shutting it was lovely emotional..te way my maan showing his right on his geet and his manu shuting his geet was lovely emotional..te way rashi and dm was shock to know tat geet accept his sory and going out with him was lovely..i love te update
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Congrats for the new thread...
Lovely update Babie..
Maan is turning in to MSK and I m loving it now...Ye geet ko bhi to pata chalna chahiye na ki he is MSK..😆
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 91


Part - 92


It was a pleasant day for Maan nd Manu ,, both wr very happy coz they wr going out after many days ,, Manu was enjoying nd jumping nd playing in Maan's lap ,, watching out nd asking many Qs ,, even U&A Sam wr enjoying sight scenes nd Maan was describing them about d local places ,, he eyes wr falling now nd then on Geet who was looking very beautiful in yallow suit ,, she let her hair open which made her more attractive ,, it was a bright sunny day nd she only wrapped a shawl around her to keep her warm ,, Maan admired her beauty inwardly .

Geet was listening quietly nd sometime passing faint smiles ,, she was watching Maan nd Manu's bond nd thinking about Yash words which she overheard about his marriage ... one side he was adamant to accept his responsibility nd forcing her too nd on d other side his family was searching a perfect match for him ,, a beautiful girl from a rich nd respectable family ,, they wanted to discuss d matter in front of her unknown to d reality ,,How she wd face this ? D father of her child wd get married in front of her eyes ,, he too knew d truth ,, wd he agree ? Geet felt a blow in her heart nd burn in her eyes ,, she turned her face nd wipe d corners of her eyes secretly , but Maan's sharp eyes got that ,, her single tear pinched him .

He wanted to share all her pain but she was not allowing him bcoz he was solo reason of her pain ,, today she was hurt again ,, though she was showing that those talk didn't bother her but he knew they did ,, he wanted to make her understand that he cdn't think about moving on with someone else ,, never ,, how cd he leave them ? They both r his parts nd he want them with him , close to him all d time .

Their chain of thoughts broke when driver parked d van in d parking nd informed them that they had reached .

They entered d fair ,, U&A Sam liked d colourful surrounding ,, it was a fair where all d Indian states participate showing their cultural heritage nd arts ,,Geet too was very excited ,, she was watching this 1st time ,, Maan visited once with his friends ,, Manu trying to run here nd there to watch d things nd Geet was catching him .

Maan: Geet let him enjoy ,, I m with him .

Geet looked at him worried : kitna crowd hei ,, kho jayega .

Maan smiled at her : darro nahi aur enjoy karo aur usse bhi kerne do ,, mai uska hath nahi chodunga ,, tum U&A ko dekho ,, humm .

Geet: aap acche se sambhal loge na ,, Plzz , haatha nahi chodna uska ,,, hum aapke sath hi rahenge .

Maan: OK ,as u wish .


They started moving slowly ,, watching shops ,, art pieces nd traditional dances of diff states ,, U&A sam purchased many art pieces ,, they wr very excited seeing diff types of cultures , dances nd dresses . Manu started feeling tired nd Maan took him in his arms ,, they took their lunch from a south indian stall nd then from a Kahsmiri stall ,, then sit at a place nd watched dances ,, Maan held Manu in his lap nd Geet gave him his milk ,, she was sitting close to Maan ,, their hands touched while caring Manu ,, they didn't show but this small closeness was affecting Maan nd Geet ,, both felt a sweet tingling sensation .

After taking some rest they started again nd saw few more glimpse of diff states ,, Manu was ranting about swings nd roundabouts which wr at side way ,, Maan noticed that few college boys wr walking behind them nd looking at Geet ,, he saw that Geet kept her hair aside nd her lil deep cut neck of suit was exposing her creamy white skin ,, he inwardly groaned in anger nd shoot an angry glares at d boys ,, who turned their faces nd stopped at a shop.

Maan insisted Geet to come at children zone so that manu cd enjoy his rides ,, they all went there nd Maan went with Manu in swing nd round about he asked Geet too but she scared nd remained down with U&A Sam ,, Maan nd Manu was watching them nd waving their hands ,, Maan saw that those boys wr again there nd eying Geet from back ,,his whole burnt but he was away nd Geet was oblivious ,, after few min when Maan came down he handed Manu to U Sam for some time ,, he came behind Geet ,, adjusted her hair backward to cover her open back.

Geet startled with his touch nd gesture ,, she looked at him confused nd Maan gave a hard look ,, he was angry at boys nd again gave them glares ,, after few min unknowingly Geet again kept her hair one side ,, Maan saw that nd stopped her ,, she looked at him nd he gave her too an angry look .

Geet: What happened ?

Maan: keep them like that ,, why u wore this deep neck dress ,, kuch aur nahi pahan sakti thi ?

Geet was staring at him confused thinking... kya hua enhe ,, kya kharabi hei ess dress mei ,, she checked her dress nd didn't find anything wrong .

Geet annoyed : kya burai hei ess dress mei ,, acchi to hei , aur kya pahanti .. Mini skirt or off shoulders dress like ur Friend .

Maan knew where she hit ,, he sighed nd looked aside ,, d boys wr still looking at Geet from distance ,, he wanted to beat them blue nd black eying his Geet like this but gulping his anger coz he was with d family nd two elderly ppl nd a kid was with him ,, he tightened his fists nd looked at d boys with red eyes ,, Geet sensed his restlessness nd followed his gaze ,, she startled seeing a group of boys nd understood his concern ,, she opened her folded shawl nd wrapped around her properly ,, she was touched nd surprised seeing his possessive side nd concern ,, she pressed his arm to console his anger giving him a faint smile .

Geet: plzz chalo , ab ghar chalty hein we r tired .

Maan: sure .

Geet: humm .

Maan: Ok ,, come .,, Geet there is a lake near by , want to see ? u cn enjoy boating in that .

Geet: I know , but keep quiet ,, don't say anything in front of manu ,, he'll start again to go for boating .

Maan: so what .. let him..

Geet: ssshhh,, chup ,, abhi nahi ,, dare u say anything to him ,, bigaad rahe ho usse .

She glared at him nd complaint ,, Maan chuckled nd enjoyed her bossing over him ,, he forgot all his anger , encircled her shoulders with his one arm in a protective way nd followed U&A Sam who wr walking lil ahead,, Geet didn't mind that coz she knew he was doing this to protect her ,, Maan called d van driver nd with in 2 min he was there ,, they settled in d van nd started back , Maan told d driver to stop near lake for sight scene ,, Geet glared at him twisting her lips ,, he smiled with a blink nd gestured at her to look at manu who slept in his arms ,, they wr watching d views from inside ,, Maan settled manu in seat nd covered him ,,Geet opened d flask of boiled water nd prepared black coffee for all ,, gave some snacks nd juice pack to driver also ,, they all enjoyed d lake view of eve nd then move back ,, all wr feeling tired nd lazily resting in their comfy seats closing their eyes .

Maan was looking at Geet who was sleeping in front of him nd her open hair wr falling on her forehead nd cheek ,, she was looking so alluring .


Precap ---- OMG!!! ...Maan , what was all this ?

Part - 93




sorry for mistakes ...




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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😡ghussa hoon tumse

katti. wada kia aur nibhaya nahi😭😭
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Abhi updating bol kaar raat ke 2 taak jagati
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congrats on yr new thread... awesome update
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Congrats dr ... Lovly update lovd it continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm 4 Part 91. fab update! superbly written Geet upset! Maan tries 2 explain! Maan shows his authority! Manu is so cute! Maan will gng with them! Manu happy! Geet scolds Maan bt Maan makes her understand! Maan tells Rashi n DM tht Geet is fine n he apologised! they r confused by his behaviour! lovely precap

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