~pari~ THREAD 3 updated new thread 29th april

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 7 years ago

#551

awesome update

daadi also said same thing what his father told him

maan is feeling more guilty

hope he come out of his confusion n guilt soon so can see real geet n be with her for life time

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@Endgame

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Posted: 7 years ago

#552

hope he can feel her pain
she trying everything don't want his ego to destroy the beautiful feelings between them

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 7 years ago

#553

part 35-36,

Muski you are one of the most versetile writter, the flow of story, knitting around emotions of each charecters, and threading each pearls of dialouge in to the garlend of story, pacing each incident in beautifull hevenly embiance with sad soul searching knotes,pouring musical sur in main cherecters song to show how she feels for the man she loves, which shows her passion, hurt, love, ikrar, complain, dard, and the ego of the man who wants her but not comming out of his inhibation and determind to end this relationship because she is geet handa and supirior than him that is what he thinks, his ego hurts by seeing her in other man's arm and without clarifying he took dicision of leaving her, and is not ready to understand hisownself, he feel jelous because he loves her but is not ready to admit and loose his big fat ego.beautiful but sad update.continue...!

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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Posted: 7 years ago

#554

Beautiful update Muskan 👏I feel sad for both of them here . Maan is realizing what Geet is trying to convey to him but his male ego is not letting him to go and embrace her .

I loved the song you have selected for Geet . Very aptly she conveyed her feelings .

She got chocked inn the end 😭 Maan I hate you for this .😡

Their heart is crushed with heaviness .Maan Needs to say something . She came all the way here . Also announced her marriage plans , calling his mother MA what else do you need man .the girl is breaking 😭

I am feeling bad for Geet .She has done everything possible to make him realize that she loves him unconditionally .

Maan 😡please go and tell her that you love her too .

Why I want NT 's entry ??????

Continue soon

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 7 years ago

#555

Amazing part. Could feel the pain of Geet and web of confusion Maan is caught in. He doesn't dare to believe what Geet's every gesture is telling him. Loved the song.

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

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Posted: 7 years ago

#556

Geet is in love but there is some pain that she is hiding from all..

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

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Posted: 7 years ago

#557

Nice update dear Mann what to tell he has is idiot not understanding anything daddimaa told what is in his mind and heart and told to accept it but he is like always confused soul

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maanshi

@maanshi

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#558

awesome update
fully emotional part

maan's family expecting so much from maaneet relation ... happy to see maaneet happy

feeling sad for geet ... she is in pain coz of maan's stupidity

not like maan is not in pain but its all his deeds

dadi told everything clearly still maan is not clear about his own feelings ... god help this men

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#559

Very emotional update
My heart is going to Geet
She is in so much pain
Hope Daadi ma ki baate khuch sense jaggye iss buddhu Maan mai
Beautifully written

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#560

He really needs to see that her seeing him with Pari was just as painful as him seeing her with Aryan who was probably just consoling her. Like he feels this connection and the emotion but his fear and whatever else letting him withdraw from something that is beautiful.