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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Part 16




So Muskaan and Maan met. And as any innocent child would welcome a stranger presence introduced by either of your parents, she accepted Maan.



Maan already feels that fatherly love towards Muskaan since he has realized that he wanted a child of his own. So it came far more naturally to him to be playful around her and let his guard down.



But the more time MG are spending they are realizing the seriousness of it. Geet obviously can't let Maan get attached to Muskaan. She has already lost a father's constant presence that every child deserves, so Geet's protective instincts are natural. She can't risk breaking Muskaan's little heart. She can't risk her daughter being vulnerable to anyone new if that person plans on leaving.



Maan wants to spends time with Muskaan as she is filling the void left in his heart and soul but what after that? Of course since this is a story I know where all this is leading to, but will he be able to accept Dev as Muskaan's father if he and Geet does decide to take that leap of faith for themselves? Will he be satisfied filling the role of a step father in Muskaan's life? I know there is a long way to go for that. But I can't help worry cos here an innocent life is attached to their lives. They will have to contemplate and think through their decisions so as to not harm Muskaan in any way. Like Geet said she can't be irrational like she was that night. She was able to forget Muskaan for a time being and be selfish but now she has bigger responsibilities.




My heart goes out to Paris the most I think. There are people who let go of their love so easily and then there is Pari who I think would give away the world to get a single moment with Yash. Life is so full of irony.




-Sanjana!



Hey, Yes muskaan accepted Maan pretty easily. And they all had their own family time kind of. But of course reality seeps in and they think about future. But your questions cannot be answered except to say wait and watch because I myself don't know their answer. After all none of them are thinking of any kind of relationship at this juncture. Pari truly has the worst of all . I am happy you are back asking me tough questions again.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

So Geet got a call from Dev post midnight and it made her throw an attitude. Not that I blame her. She is still hurting and obviously she can't go back to being acquaintance so easily. It'll take some time to be cordial. But Dev wasn't any less either. He didn't take a single minute to throw back at her that she cheated as well. And his attitude did piss me off. Especially when he is in the wrong more.



Yeah, his story has finally been out and like Geet I truly felt it was more disgusting than what I had initially assumed. My guess that Meera was always in love with Dev came true. So I wasn't surprised. But that did make me angry cos it means she purposely came btw the couple. I want to know why she came to stay in Darjeeling when she knew she has feelings for Dev? Shouldn't a girl avoid a man who is happily married to your best friend and who has a daughter? Her betrayal is far more worse. She went to stay with her parents in Delhi and Dev started visiting Delhi frequently for business purposes. Did they meet there? Cos Dev said he tried not to fall for Meera. And that made me want to know if visiting Delhi was strictly business or did it become personal?



And his thoughts of having a dependent wife cracked me up. So is Meera is a submissive girl? Who isn't independent? Or is it that she is not that great as Geet? Cos Dev made it sound like Geet was too good for him. Too prefect. Which makes me wonder about Meera's personality and character strength now. Dev has inferior complexity with Geet cos she too awesome of a woman. That made him crave for a woman with whom he can feel equal. So basically his male ego couldn't take that his wife was a good person. A good wife. Good mother. Good friend. Has a career. Helps people and stays with them in their crisis. He really is an idiot then. Gosh! People turn old searching for such woman and here he got one but sadly didn't know how to treasure her. He was one lucky bas***d who made himself unlucky. But he did a big favour on Geet. As now she will get a mam who will love her for herself. For the amazing woman that she is and cherish her. Dev's loss really.




Also, even though Dev and Meera weren't physically cheating Geet. They did cheat on her emotional level. Meera by hiding her true feelings for so long. Dev by hiding them for so many years when if he wanted he could gone and be truthful and honest about it and all this mess would have been avoided. The heartache that Geet suffered would have been avoided. And maybe Geet would have that respect for him at least as a father of her child had he come and talk. But now he has lost even that. He has lost a best friend too. Pity.




Dev guessed Maan to be the man with whom Geet was. And now he has entered Muskaan's life as well. And since this update revealed how insecure Dev had always been and how low he thought of himself, would he feel inferior complexity around Maan now? Cos sure as hell that man has already made a home in Muskaan's heart. How will Dev take that if couldn't take his own wife's strong individuality? I'm so curious about that now.




-Sanjana!



Hey, that was one big comment. I loved reading your take.Dev is despicable man, no other word for it. Dev is also the type of person we are mostly surrounded with. You are right, Dev has inferiority complex and was highly egoistic. A bad combination really. About Meera, I won't comment right now about it all. Geet was too good for him and he lost her. But then, he never really deserved her in the first place. About Maan and Muskaan and regarding Dev's feelings about them, I say to wait and watch.😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

dev n geets talk over phone upset her
geet asks him to be with muskan n went to meet dev
dev s explanation over cheating her...grrr
but de got geet with her one look on maan
he is the one
nice part



Hey dear!! Thank you for the lovely comment!!😊😊 Dev is a weak and despicable man, one who never deserved Geet in the first place.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful update! superbly written! Dev calls Geet! she is upset hearing him! Maan sees she is upset! she reveals y! Maan says he will b happy to take care of Muskaan! Maan arranges breakfast! Geet n Dev talk! Dev explains y he cheated on her! So Dev n Geet clear the air! Dev sees Maan n coments that he is the one Geet slept with! update soon! hope r u well!



Hey dear!! Thank you for the lovely comment!!😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: latecomer

fabulously written...
it was worth waiting for..



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Brilliant update. Dev called Geet at midnight and he wanted to meet Geet. Geet did not like his calling so late but he wanted to clear few things and Geet agreed. Next day she asked Maan to take care of Muskaan as she had to go to see Dev. Dev tried his best to explain his weakness and how he fell for Meera. But any of his clarification is not genuine. The reasons that he told did not give him right to cheat Geet. He dropped Geet to hotel. Maan and Muskaan were playing. Dev asked her that was Maan the guy with whom she had one night stand. She nodded.



Hey dear!! Thank you for the lovely comment!!😊😊 Dev was wrong but then that's what he is, a weak selfish man. He never really deserved Geet in the first place.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu5

fabulous update...confrontation between dev n geet ws superb



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Posted: 8 years ago


Hey dear!! Thank you for the lovely comment!!😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
how are you..?
how is your health now..?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

Chapter 17...

Awesome... Superb...


Thanks for update...

Continue soon...

Interesting update...

Geet n dev conversation was interesting... Dev is a real selfish person... N a big time looser...

Everything cleared n sorted... N good that it was all done in a sensible manner...

They really needed this for a closer n to move on in their lives...



Hey dear!! Thank you for the lovely comment!!😊😊 I love what you say about Dev.😉

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