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Vinsh23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#901

thanx for the pm :)

going to read it :*

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Vinsh23

@Vinsh23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#902

hope we get maaneet part in d set :)

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
part 15
wow just wow...
maan facing so many rush of emotions..fight btw mind body and heart...
i dont know why this line appealed to me :
My heart may be with her but my pride is well and strong within me

they were together thru the ride...he shud have enjoyed being with her..budhu maan aise mauke dubara nai milte...
loved how he notices her choices..how her opinion matters to him...
also how he compares his parents' story with his...
loved how he distracted her with the info about the city...
jitna bhi try kar le...his heart will always win regarding her

he started with the diary...
loved how he doesnt want to write her name...and also hope if ever she reads it...maan babu ur wish will come true...she is actually going to read it in future :P

the ending of the part...where he realises the disgust was for the girl and how he fears that she may not talk to him anymore ( not like they talk much) but then seeing her smile feels relieved...was awesome///
loved how she trusted him with those drunkards...guess these few instances are so magical in their story..it gave him confidence too/// what cud be better to find that ur love trusts u...

loved the last lines..:
We are left with what we always have between us, our silence, yet I am strangely content and feel overwhelmingly blessed with it.
and the song is again so beautiful...so apt for their story..
looking fwd to more of it..
cont soon

I wanted to thank you

You have no idea how happy it makes me to have my own words quoted back to me.

It feels special when someone takes the time to do that.

Thank u😃

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#904

part 16

hey first of all thanks for letting us know the time frame...

wow what an update ...also long one..thanks for that

istar and dev..

i already said am reaaly loving dev with each update...his business sense..power to change the situation according to his wish is worth applause...

naintara is surely affected by him...considering the dream she has that day and also the recent changes...i really liked wen she stopped with the spices in the lunch but later on added again///:P

also what i like about naina is that she appreciates good...just because she doesnt like his working attitude and behaviour...she is ready to be typist for him for the profits he made..shows how strong her character and values are...

really curious to know what made her so...strong headed and no nonsense girl...

i am really liking devtara

Edited by sahibasharma - 10 years ago

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suni_104

@suni_104

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Posted: 10 years ago

#905

Thanks for pm
I will read it and comment tommorow

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: dqno1

I wanted to thank you

You have no idea how happy it makes me to have my own words quoted back to me.

It feels special when someone takes the time to do that.

Thank u😃

i can surely understand that...

also really like the secret pm thing...

because i believe if u cherish something...u must credit the creator too...

if we so enjoy maaneet stories thru u writers' imagination...we surely need to appreciate the effort and time u put on it..

really loving this story...

also glad u noticed my comment...u noticing and replying to my comment made me happy so i very well can imagine what u feel when ur work is noticed too...

love u dearie...

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#907

part 17

oh back to maaneet..lovely

loved loved loved it so much...

geet notices him...checks him out was so cute...

the song has already taken me to the dreamworld..:P

If we get to talking I would love to argue with you one day.

haha...maan u r a gone case...

oh she was in his arms...almost...chal he can manage with that for now..nahi??!!:P

the shawl selection...cool

aww they talked...omg...am so happy and doing just that yaay dance of geet...

maan yar hmm k age to kuch bolte

that dua thing was superb...chalo he got to know her connection wid babaji..:P

Meri har dua tum ho Geet.

oh her talk with her friend...

Zaroori Toh Nahi ke Mohabbat Ko Lafzon Mein Bayan Kar Doon,

Idhar Dekho, Kya Meri Aankhen Tum Se Kuch Nahi Kehtin

lovely yar...so true...all the feelings need to not be vocalised...some are meant just to be felt...

the conversation made him think about his progress with geet...and he said hi...so cute yar...

they are so damn adorable..the best birthday gift..her leaning on his shoulder..wrapped up in shwal..putting the earring for her...all these moments were so special...

loved the shayaris...

loving it way too much

Edited by sahibasharma - 10 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#908

Originally posted by: BloodDiamond
Chapter 11

I cried reading it . Darji took care of Geet since a little girl and now he is unwell so Geet decides to finish her degree from HP👏 super ⭐️part from Geet
She felt it its her responsibility to take care of the man who stood by her fulfilled all her wishes 👏

Darji's character is based on my Dad so I cried writing it too. Since my Mom passed away he has been everything to us. This chapter was one that I was perhaps most proud of.

Thanks😃