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Posted: 10 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: kaamchorni
Just saw my name on a previous comment 😳 I didn't realise how bad my memory had gotten. Can I have your blog link, please? (Full on narcissist, I know 😆).

(Can't start re-reading the story until Friday, by the way - so feel free to wait until then to give it to me, lol.)

How could we forget your Jimmy Choo's😆

It was so much fun to write it

😃

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: dqno1

How could we forget your Jimmy Choo's😆

It was so much fun to write it

😃

It's going to be so weird reading it this time. I'll be torn between the story and a truck load of nostalgia 😆 And so many of us gone these days :(

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#753

I am again falling in love with this Maan. Jitni baat bhi locket padho, utni baat lagta he. Kash he was my prince charming... And Dev Tara ki jodi ka to kya kehena...

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ramarora

@ramarora

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#754

hi avi dear
thanks for the pm;
before i start commenting on the parts i want to say this to you:
rereading the locket has made me realize that you have an exceptional talent for writing
be it expressing emotions;be it expressing romance and so on
under no circumstances you should quit writing;do write new ff or ss as well😃

now coming to the parts:all parts are lovely and make an interesting read
first of all a loving and caring Darji and an equally loving geet:beautiful relationship😃
then a funny tussle between dev and tara😆 frankly there is no other story where i have liked dev and tara so much
then comes our handsome maan singh khurana who just wants to see his love smiling!!!!!!
story so rich with emotions... and our shy geet:...love it yaar😃

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#755

hello avi

what to say about the 6th part..

it doesn't seem like i am reading it for the second time..it felt so fresh and new.

i was grinning throughout the part..

only one word i would use to describe ur Dev...wow...

i am so fond of him now..he and his naughty look...humorous talk..pulling i-star's leg and driving her wild was amazing to read..

and the one line i just wanted to mention..

"Sir is too formal and makes me look for someone's Dad behind me".

i was like 🤣while reading those line..

and Dev mentioning her as Tara..which i found something cute and lovely..

awesome 6th chapter dear.

only u could make me to enjoy the chapter even without my maaneet...😃

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#756

chapter 7

oh my..oh my..

what i would say about this part..i am just speechless...

u r an amazing writer avi...there is no doubt about it..

you know how to hook the readers to ur story..

actually i was with MG walking alongside in rain..i can visualize the scene so close...

maan's longing to spend a time with geet..their walking under one umbrella without a word..

their eyes met through the window..and maan's heart jumped with joy where he was fully drenched in rain..all were so poetic..and so touching ma..

unbelievable writing...

and i even like ms.iyer..the warden should be like this only...

eagerly waiting to read what geet think about maan..

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#757

chapter 8

wow pinky and adi...

nice cute couple...

here adi is hesitant to reveal his love to his parents..and pinky's cousine is having no trust on him for the same reason..good substory ma..

i don't find this one sided convo throughout the chapter...as they talked only about maan..😉

so in farewell party Geet has not shown up so our lover boy was dishearten..

poor maan..

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#758

Hello my dear Avi

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#759

chapter9

again NT and Dev

i liked Dev'S professional side..he had proved that he is not only a easy going,rich freak..silver spoon baby...but he has his inherent talents in marketing and business..ur portrayal of the situation was complete professional..nt's anger and Dev's explanation to his act was very nice..but it seemed I-star doesn't buy his reasons..😆and dev's cute prank of sleeping on i-star's shoulder was hilarious...

pari seemed to be a nice girl ..

don't know in future what she will do..

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#760

chapter 10

maan missing geet..

that was very nice..and aisha seemed very nice girl..

her helping maan's to understand his actual place and responsibility in his business was nice..

sometime in our life we will learn important lesson from the strangers only..sometimes it might be a life changing event..that's what happened to maan as well.

u have brought up the track so well..

He would love her until all her defenses crumbled, even if it took him a lifetime.

what a line ma..!!!!!

nowadays which youngster would be like this..loving a girl unconditionally without any expectations..?

if a girl refused to love him.he will go to the extend of killing her...what are all we reading in the newspapers have trembled our heart..in this condition ..i felt maan's love was so divine and sacred ..

i love this lover boy a lot..and also the creator of this lovely boy..

Edited by kalabhas - 10 years ago