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vandana73

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Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: dqno1

no

I wrote the story after 11:30 each night while working 6 days a week and taking care of my family abroad (which means no servant and help)

mera dil nai bharta to read 2 line responses, main kya karu?

it feels like a slap on my face for being stupid enough to waste my time for my love for Maaneet and this forum.

i will comment seperately for each chapter !! Please do not feel disheartened .

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: singh24

Avi dear

chakki peesing ...😆

haan yaar🤢

kal raat 11 pm tak aur aaj subah se

i want to crawl into my bed😆

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#403

hai avi

overtime leke kyu pees rahi ho chakki par?

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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 10 years ago

#404

chapter 1

Dev

He is such an emotional person ,as he is happy he wants to share his happiness with his bro not being able to guess his brother's turmoil . His falling for a picky girl seems to be unbelievable even to himself ,he is so happy had his heart is overflowing and the best part is that he is in love with a person whom he can respect as a person too .

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai avi

overtime leke kyu pees rahi ho chakki par?

Hi Lakshmi

khud kaha kar rahi hu re

job hai😆

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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 10 years ago

#406

Chapter 2

Dadima

not too well physically but happy in her heart can describe the pillar of Khurana family whose name is Savitri Devi ! Missing her dead ones but enjoying her grandchildren is so much evident in her thoughts . As much as she loves all her grandchildren equally but Maan is her fav. she is so much tuned into him that she can guess his mind set in a moment !!

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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 10 years ago

#407

Chapter 3

She has been shown to be a very strong women ,so secure mentally that she did overstep with her boss!!! OOpps!! her bus incident slipped over into the lift and Boy did she over react !! Fireworks !!

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singh24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: dqno1

haan yaar🤢

kal raat 11 pm tak aur aaj subah se

i want to crawl into my bed😆

😆 apne boss ko pees daal..

bacchi ki jaan lega kya..?

etta kaam... grr.😡

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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 10 years ago

#409

Chapter 4

Geet

The dreamy ,shy, sensitive girl come women who is very shy to come out and speak to Maan but holds conversations with him in her head ,she loves with all her heart but is so insecure ! in fact while playing cupid for her beloved Tara di she did help create a misunderstanding for herself and her love . Now both Geet and Maan being so shy wonder how long will it take to clear the air ?