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aachal20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#381

chapter 3 interesting dream of naintara.her story and thoughts are given beutifully love her strong will.and she slap dev on the first day only very interesting.

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aachal20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#382

chapter 4 geets thoughts and her internal talks to maan.her thoughts on darjee and how she becoms dadimas pa and about dev and naintara all her thoughts are write in beutiful manner love it.also the dadi,dev and geet scene in geets pov.her happiness and thoughts on maan returns all are beutifuuly written amazing.love this ff.

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aachal20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#383

chapter 5 love this chapter.its the starting of past.the college maneet first meet and the moments.maan in office and imagining geet and romace.also the way he handeled bussiness like his father.love song also picture.

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aachal20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#384

now have commented seperately plz don't stop updating.love this ff.will always comment seperately now.plz plz plz update.

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#385

Thanks for reposting the locket again
Prologue
lovely prologue
this story seems have a completely different concept
the song selected is really good

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#386

part 1
lovely update
loved devs point of view towards maan
loved his point of view towards him
loved the way he described himself before he met a girl in his office who has actually changed his entire life style
so it was actally difficult for him to propose her or to go near her as she was not easy to reach girl
so maan was dev's twin brother in this story of yours great
waiting to know who that girl is actually

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#387

part 2
lovely update
so her in this story annie is the elder sister already married to arjun and as usual dev the prankster and maan the quiet one
loved the band maan shared with his mom
poor fellow lost his main support of life when he was a young boy
i think he has a strong telepathy with his mother as she use to understand the kind of day maan spend just by his footstep great
but why was he sad after returning home
poor dadi was also not able to understand

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#388

part 3
naintara's dream was interesting
you have also explained her thoughts beautifully
loved her strong will power
her day started with a wrong start
who was that man in her dream because of which she took such a resolution
aww she slapped dev on the frist day itself and later came to know that he was her new boss
interesting

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#389

Will comment per chapter hence forth

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rost

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Posted: 10 years ago

#390

Chapter 5. Maans dream song with Geet is very beautiful. It's one of my favourite. The way he covered up his folly was too good. Even after goofing up he managed to come out not only clear but also gained respect from his employees.