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anime_gal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1341

Originally posted by: dqno1

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The rule is

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ONE COMMENT PER CHAPTER

NO COMMENT NO ACCESS

Pehle hi bataya tha..

Only those who are re-reading are allowed to comment for 5 chapters in one comment, NOT FIRST TIME READERS.

Surely when my 5 chapters are 80 plus pages in word, you can make an effort.

I hope my comments are enuf now ... For you to give me the next set

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anime_gal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1342

Chap 16 was ... I don't like the way fb is womanizing .. Hate reading about heros womanizing wen we know x and y are gonna end together .. Last time I for got to mention .. Loved the Bambi comparison for our sweet Geet .. And this Tara's Thot about Bambi is in the hands of the wolf ... Lol .. Either the chopra is stupid or easily convinced .. Who would think of chocolate building or skyscraper .. Tara and her rules .. God is she stiff ..

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anime_gal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1343

Ooh part 17 Geet pov is something which we can understand .. It's easier to get inside a Girls head than guys .. We can understand their way of thinking .. The trip .. What can say .. It made them closer .. In her case it was veer Zara song and the atmosphere.. And get to know her drooling on him in his wet state .. And her disgust over other girl on falling on maan and showing the unspeakable a lol .. Forgot to mention loved the way it was said innocence was lost in office premises in ladies since Dev joined ..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1344

Originally posted by: anime_gal
I missed mentioning .. Some songs are not familiar with me .. Such that I couldn't enjoy it much ... Hope these comments are enough ..

Songs are based on the scene and in the later chapters I did add translation because a lot of people don't know them

Yes, thanks

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anime_gal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1345

She talked to him .. And that saving from drunkards and that lose standing .. Breadth falling ... Lol I liked his thinking him not Geet hands would be is last breath ..

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anime_gal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1346

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Songs are based on the scene and in the later chapters I did add translation because a lot of people don't know them
Yes, thanks

Yea I noticed .. In veer Zara song in chap 17 u translated ... It's not like I didn't understand them .. I was not familiar with the songs .. That's y

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1347

Hi everyone!

Do read this intensely beautiful piece of writing from my friend Nisha

It is mindblowing...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4325442/paarijat-a-tale-of-desideratum-final-and-epilogue-88-feb-13-2016

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spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1348

NAHI!!

Ye nahi ho sakta kabir maan ko competition nahi desakta

uskI dukh bhari dasta wo apne pass rakhe

Guest appearance ka bacha main villain ka role nahi le sak tha

this is against the rules n the contract yaar writer kuch action tho lo

dhere dhere apni role bada raha hai😡

Ab hero heroine pe aate hai

hayyeee dono ne chai pi☺️

Kal sandwich khaya uss se pehle dinnar kya ulta system hai inka

so romantic

Cho hum chorus k saat ready ho jaye

Kuch kuch hota hai k background ka time aagaya hai shayad😉

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spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1349

Originally posted by: dqno1
Hi everyone!

Do read this intensely beautiful piece of writing from my friend Nisha

It is mindblowing...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4325442/paarijat-a-tale-of-desideratum-final-and-epilogue-88-feb-13-2016