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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan trying to console her and asking her to compose herself for her and manu was lovely emotional..te way manu crying seeing his mom crying and my maan consoling was lovely emotional..te way my maaneet preparing coffee and milk and taking care of them, but wat ever geet cant digest wat my maan did was lovely emotional..even after knowing he only took care of her still she cant accept his deed was lovely emotional..te way my maan felt hurt seeing his geet and cursing him for ruining everything was lovely emotional.yes atleast manu is happy without knowing wat is going around him..i love te update so much
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lovely update
manu is so cute
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hi thanks 4 da pm n marvellous update! Well written! js read Pt 67 nw! Geet being indifferent! Maan upset! Manu so happy with his gifts! update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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atleast she realised dat maan was really carrin for her and had no ill intention...
both are emotionally hurt ...nd hurtin other...
aww manu baby cute...

cant wait for next part..waiitn
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congrats for new thread
awesome parts
geet hurt so much.
maan asking sorry. for everything
waiting for next
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aaj updt nehi hai kya?????
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Hello my dear friends 🤗




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Updating



vydehi, soniaforever, aswini, yashvijaysingh, krishna., aaahsapca, zil143, sdg26,



😊 my in-laws came ystrdy,, ,
sorry for not updating sweeties...









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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 67



Part - 68


Manu got busy in play with his newly found gift ,, Geet was still in bed nd looking at manu quietly ,, her face was showing her inner disturbance ,, she was struggling with her mind nd heart ,, though Maan's care for her nd her child was affecting her heart but her mind was nagging her to keep Maan at bay ,, d closeness has started giving problems , which she didn't want ,, today he threatened her to say uncle nd aunty ,, she didn't want any Khurana member close to her nd to keep them away she had to talk Maan clearly ...esse pahale ki baat aura age bade ese yahin per rokna accha hei ,, aur uske liye usse maan se clealy baat kerni hi padegi .

He got d truth but without her acceptance he cdn't stand ,, so it wd be better to talk clearly nd show him his way ,, if she cn't hurt his parents then how cd he ? He had to accept her decision .

There Maan was also feeling very bad ,, he didn't want to hurt Geet any more ,, but her rejection to talk on their past ,, not clearing d murk of that dreadful night was killing him day nd night ,, though her outbrust had hinted him that it was he who broke her in his rage but he wanted to know d all truth ,, everything which happened between them ,, d truth was hurtfull for both nd for d family too but it had to come out , , how to make her agree to talk ? Maan looked at Geet nd find her staring at him ,, there eyes met nd felt an urge to talk with each other .

Geet decided something inwardly nd came out from her bed ,, she was going to arrange her bed but Maan rushed to her nd stopped her .

Maan: Geet , nahi tum nahi,, i'll do that ,, go nd change then we have to go for ur check up ,, we need to consult d dr ,, go .

Geet gave him a cold look nd went quietly ,, Maan sighed nd folded d blankets ,, brought Manu in d kitchen nd made him to play there in front of him ,, maan prepared d BF nd placed that on table ,, he brought Manu in guest room removed his lower nd made him sit in loo ,, he came out in living room nd call Geet's Dr ,, told him about Geet's condition of last night ,, took appointment to visit him ,, in between Geet came out from her room nd went in kitchen to make BF .

Maan: Geet , tum baito yahan aaram se ,, BF ready hei just need to make coffee for u ,, I m going go see manu , he is in WR.


Mommy , see ... I m cow boy ,,

Geet nd Maan looked at him nd next moment they laugh out loud ,, d cutie was looking at them with a smile thinking that he did a gr8 job ,,, Maan nd Geet wr laughing holding their tummy at their cutie ... OMG!! Manu ...

Maan/Geet: manu /baby what is this ?

Geet: from where u got these things ?

Manu: hehe,, mommy flom that loom .

Maan: manu I made u sit in washroom nd u come out ,, why u removed ur clothes in cold ?

Geet: who taught u this ?

Manu: T&J mommy ,, I saw in TV .

Geet smiled : manu u r becoming naughty day by day ,, go nd bring ur dress .

Maan laughed : come my NPM I dressed u otherwise u'll catch cold ,, N P cow boy ,, did u finish ur routine ?

Manu: no .

Maan: humm ,, doing this thing ,, naughty . ( he kissed hi cheek , gave a playful pat on Manu's bump nd made him wear his upper dress ,, brought him in his WR nd clean his teeth,, set him for routine nd then gave bath ,, )

Geet took out Manu's dress nd then dressed Manu ,, Maan went to take bath nd got ready ,, they had their BF nd Maan told Geet to come for hsptal ,, they went nd consult ,, Maan said that she didn't take proper rest nd Dr strictly warn Geet to take rest otherwise they had to keep her in hsptl again ,, he checked her nd gave few more meds ,, Geet agreed nd all came back at home .

It was a tough time for Geet she was in tension ,, she was alone but living a peaceful life from last 3 yrs ,, d life which she decided for her nd her child ,, away from all accusations ,, she was happy in her small world but her life turn up side down when Maan bumped her months back nd after that everything started to move back ,, she was again bearing d same pain nd d solo reason was same person ... Maan.

Maan : Geet , u take rest nd i'll take care of all ,, do u want anything ?

Geet : yes mr Khurana ,, I need to talk u clearly .

Maan was staring at her nd trying to get her intention ,, she was looking at him with pained face .

Geet: it's needed ,, I cn't tolerate this hanging situation ,, it's better to talk for a peaceful life for all .

Maan gulped : Geet u r not well ,, 1st take rest nd we'll defo talk when u recover completely .

Geet: no , it's hurting me .

Maan: we'll Geet , but u need to be cure 1st . ( he knew she was disturbed coz of mrng issu )

Geet: don't worry about me ,, I saw worst .

She moved in kitchen nd prepared coffee nd milk for Manu ,, Maan settled Manu in living hall nd rushed to her .

Maan: Geet , ku etni jidd ker rahi ho ,, dr ne kya kaha tumne suna na ,, go nd take rest ,, i'll do that ,, go inside.

Geet retort : enough ,, nd don't try to rule me ,, I know what is good for me nd other ,, just wait here .

Maan startled : Geet u r making things difficult ,, we'll talk ,, OK , but u take rest ,, sit here , nd let me do .

He forcefully made her sit in chair ,, filled manu's milk bottle nd handed him to drink ,, poured coffee for both nd sit infront of Geet placing d mugs for them .

Maan: have it nd say what do u want to clear?

Geet garnerded her self : Mr Khuran , listen clearly ,, I don't want u near us ,, I bear u enough ,, u know me nd I was in KM , that was an old story ,, time has changed now ,, d formal talk is enough to maintain d old relation ,, u felt bad or good for ur past behaviour that is ur personal matter ,, I m not interested in that ,, I have my own life away from all nd I m very happy in that ,, u helped me a lot ,, thanku very much ,, u took responsibility to care us in U&A Sam's absence ,, I respect that ,, but everything is bounded by a limit so plzz maintain that limit ,, it's a humble request to u ,, plzz.

Maan gave a painful look to her ,, he was hurt but he was sure that it wd come ,, she deffo try to distance herself ,, wdn't accept d truth openly nd d reason was his family ,, her respect for his parents nd their favours ,, d draggers of his nd DM's accusations had wounded her deep ,, time cd heal d wounds but not d scars .

Maan's heart drown in deep sorrow nd guilt ,, there was no way to run away from d reality , d reality which affected their past nd now affecting their present nd future ,, how cd he keep him away from them ,,, it's impossible ,, he cn't .

Maan cleared his throat : aamm,, Geet ,, thanks u decided to talk ,, but right now stress is not good for u ,, ur condition was very bad last night ,, don't think about me nd u , think about Manu , who needs u more then anything .

I know u r hurt coz of mrng issu ,, i'm sorry for that ,, but trust me I ,, I didn't think wrong for u ,, how cd I ? Geet i'm already drown in d pit of guilt nd shame then how cd I think to give u more pain .

Geet , I understood that u have reason to keep me away but I also have to keep u nd manu close to me ,, we cn't run away from d truth , I did wrong nd I m ready to face d consequence ,, any punishment , any accusation .

Geet was looking at him coldly though her heart was feeling Maan's pain but mind was refusing to bend ,, a lil softness cd put her trouble nd broke many hearts ... No.

Geet: nd this is d consequence mr Khurana ,, face it ,, stay away .

Maan : G e e t ,, how cn I live away ? cn u live away from Manu ?

Geet: don't rope Manu in this talk ,, mr khurana , u have ur life , ur family nd future ,, they need u ,, it's better for all that u go back India .

Maan painfully: nd what about u nd Manu ,, why r u stopping me to think about Manu nd u ,, now d whole truth is out then why r u not accepting that openly ,, I m saying that I m ready to bear anything ,, he held Geet's hand in him which was on d table to assure her ,, u have to accept openly Geet , don't hide anything .


Precap ---- Geet's decision , put Maan in a quandary .. ..


Part - 69

sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


😊 updated ..Pg...20


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