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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

wow nice story but who try to kill him and why?

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

superb ending he didnt left her this time just his mother met with accident so he had to go aww he proposed her in a way that geet never imagined ten years ago he lived without her but now he cant think that beautiful ending thnx 4 update

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

ohh...he came back within three days

you scared the hell out of us

hw got caught ...lol

and then he proposed ...and she said yes ...wooohhhooo

lovely

awesome work dear

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

super, loved it. Written beautifully. Good thought to improve upon it. But i love this version as it is. Waiting for the new aditions and to read it onece again.

Thank you.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

last part - she was so much hurt that he left again, she was so rude to him...and didn't give him chance to explain himself...

so sweet that he wanted to sneak in her room but caught by her father...father's worry was justified...and her mother's trust in him gave him that chance...

her father was at last number in punching him as already three people were there if he hurt again...lol...I liked that line...

so he was also got shot but luckily that boy saved his life...

so he left a note that he had to go as his mother met with accident...that explains why he left so suddenly...

she already forgave him after listening his side of story...loved how he proposed her and she accepted...

lovely story

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

sent buddy request

pl accept it

and sent pm whenever you update or start new story

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ramarora

@ramarora

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

thanks for the happy ending dear😃

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JeweledCrown-

@JeweledCrown-

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Last part

Maan left Geet as his mother had an accident ... another fact revealed he was in hospital after that shootout . He left a note that Geet did not see but Maan explains he returns now for good . Lovely confession ❤️

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bimi

@bimi

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#159

nice update, finally they are together

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 10 years ago

#160

hi thanks da excellent SS! superb emotional end! well written! he returned bt she was to angry! he sneaks in to her room 2 explain n is caught by her dad! he explains wt happened n why he left the first time! he loves her bt his parents marriage influenced his decision! he left this time as his mom met in an accident! he proposes! please post epilogue! will u b continuing your other stories??

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