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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

part 14 - loved the talk bet mother & daughter...she knew that geet was hiding something from her...she suggested that she should not leave ronan for man but geet told about her fake engagement b'coss of sudden appearance of maan...

maan was pretty well doing in convincing her with his promises...she was still not believing on his words...

sam again warns maan

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JeweledCrown-

@JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Part

15 Oh no he leaves again😭 Geet all this while knew he will leave her heart broken and she is right it seems . Wish to know why he left ?

Loved all three chapters

Thank you for updating ❤️

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

part 15 - superb part...loved it...she was so frustrated with his slow moving, she decided to take things in her hand and planned accordingly...but her plan failed when her father came on wrong time...that was funny when her father told maan to kiss her...omg...and she got another 'brotherly' peck on her cheek...lol...

tease ronan, very much tease...I liked when he asked her the comparison bet his peck & maan's peck...lol...I liked him so much...

I liked how she took out her frustration on him venting up all on him...finally he won in his mission ..she want no gentleman and all this what maan wanted...he again left after their making out...and geet knew all the time that he will again leave her...what is the mystery...has he really left her or something must be there behind this..

update soon

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Three Delightful Updates

Ronan telling Geet that her parents are planing an engagement party and she needs to talk to them .
Geet getting frustrated that Maan is giving her pecks on her forehead while he feels this time he will not rush things he wants to take his time and cherish every moment because second chances are rarely given and he does not want to lose it .
Geet knows that Maan will hurt her yet she seems to be falling again for him and she knows if she has her heart broken this time it will really be difficult to pick up the pieces .
Geet tells her parents that the engagement is called off but she tells her mother the truth that she and Ronan was never in a relationship and her mother ask her about Maan .
Sam warns Maan he if hurts Geet this time but Maan ensures him that he'll never hurt Geet .
Geet going to Maan and telling him that no more gentlemen tactics from him and she kisses him before she can even leave his yard Maan takes her in his arms and this she knows that they will make love Maan will leave and she will deal with whenever it happens but what actually happened why now did Maan again leave he was so adamant on getting a second chance and that he will never hurt Geet but just one time been with her and he leaves now this certainly does not add up to the person that he became he is the one that wanted her again he was the one asking her to believe him than why did he leave the very next morning

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

everything was so good

all three updates

but the end ... why ??

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

hi thanks 4 da pm n triple updates! well written! Oh no! he left n she sensed it wld happen! Y did he break her trust again? they get intimate! he wanted a second chance! Ronan warned him n Maan assured him! Hope he didn't leave her n js went out! update soon

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Sudha

@babelicious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

He left?!! Dafuqqq !!!! Wat the hell how and why did he leave again! Omg i cant bear this suspense !! Please update sooonnn

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Oh,why he left ,that was cliffhanger aura .how geet is going to react .plz update soon

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Deleted1

@Deleted1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

This marks the end of the story. A long short story if anything. I plan on editing this next week onward. Reading the chapters, making some additions. I'll be adding some chapters in the initial parts about him... his five months in the hospital in particular. The story may be complete, as a rough draft. It's needs a lot of fleshing out and that's what I will do in sometime. For the same reason I'll be removing the story from the forum in two weeks. Thank you, all the readers for sticking by even with my lousy update timings. Thanks a lot :)

please find the story here: It Had To Be You

Edited by Aura. - 10 years ago