ON THE DANCE FLOOR#2 UPDATED LAST PART,EPI@81 ON 13/2/15

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#351

Uff.. this was because of Ayaan.. but he was lil one.. his lil heart felt bad first.. but then he wished to them be together.. but this big ones they are worst than children.. n I know why did Maan come to guhati.. 😉 Amazing part.. love it.. n I know Ayan's secret too..

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#352

finally they met

very emotional

beautifully written

nice part dear loved it

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

Yaaarrr seriously u r on a roll to make us cry

Sooo sad especially d start

D lonliness pain everything is jusy unbearable

Seperation is more painful than death i believe

Dats wat is happening here

Again dey come back to d square one

Maan d same lonely sad person with lot of pain

N geet has become worse than dat atleast she was living nw she is only pretending for d sake of ayan

Start was touchy n i cried over maan's scene even having his friends hez having no one

N geet she has lost herself though she has cried out her pain she has ayan but still she has turned cold to emotions sooo painful

N seriously yaaar i hate seperation though i dnt blame it was needed here

But in real life i believe its better nt to hav relations if v cant keep dem with us till eternity

Ufff nw coming back to d update

Ayan is really good yahh even being so small he understands every emotion person n situation so perfectly n he acts according to it

N especially geet der bond is just beyond anyones reach its like eternity

Ahaaan i c do i smell all d planning n plottiing frm ayan n naina

D talks with d photo i guess maan

Maan is nw nt even der active on media just explains hw broken he is

I actually wanna thank u thank u thank u for taking only 6mnths leap coz if u wud hav taken sum big leap den i feel dey wud hav lost so much

N i hate such a big seperation

Dis was just perfect

Hawww d final meeting n confession uff really touchy

Really geet tried her best to avoid it but pyaar chupaye nahi chupta

But again ufff MU i c maan is thinking she doesnt trust him enough

I hope he knws watever happened back den

So only he can win over geet again n make her trust him over ayan

Saddest part is no one is at fault bas waqt

Mindblowing part yaar

Nw dying to read moree

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harman12

@harman12

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#354

i think ayaan called maan in guhati

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#355

awesome update
waiting for next update

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#356

HOW CAN HE MAKE A TRUSE..
😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕
.AISE KAISE JA SAKTA HAI..
I THOUGHT HE LL FIGHT MAKE HER UNDERSTAND DAT HE CAN TAKE CARE OF AYAN..

AWW I LOVE DAT CUTIEPIE..HE IS SO UNDERSTANDING...😃
AM SURE D PIC HE IS HAVING IS OF DD

OH HOW COME ...MAAN CAME TO KNOW GEET IS HERE..
AYAN NE BATAYA KYA...
Y I THINK...MAAN KO AYAN NEY BATAYA WERE DEY ARE...ND STILL DEY ARE IN TALKING TERMS

OH..BY D WAY ..LOVLY PENNED GEET KA HURT..DOSE LONLINESS HER FEAR..HER PAIN..
SO NOW NOT DAT ANGRY WIT GEET...
AB AM ANGRY WIT MAAN...HOW CAN HE SO EASILY ...BACK OUT..OR DIS IS HIS

ND CHAMP KA PLAN..
AM WAITIN TO KNOW IT..
NEXT PART..DE DEY YAAR...

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#357

Emotional update
The parted for six months and in this time both suffered remembering each other
They met again to be parted hope ayan will meet maan and that little secret of him will come out how he accept maan as his daddy
Continue soon

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#358

awesome... Superb ...

Thanks for update..

Thanks for pm ..

Continue soon...

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#359

nice update
maan aur geet dono dukhi hai aur ek dusre ko miss karte hai.
ayan maan ke photo se hi baat karta hai na?
maaneet apna pyaar bhi kabul kar lete hai par baad mein geet piche hat jaati hai
maan pehle toh geet ko manane ki koshish karta hai par baad mein geet ki baat man jaata hai aur geet se dur ho jaata hai...maan ki woh smile, joh dard bhari hai woh mahesus hoti hai...ab ayan hi dono ko milayega...

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#360

6 months hogaye geet maan ko dekhkar. poor maan kaise hogaye.😭😭but finally maan ne geet ko pakad hi liya and he confessed his love. but now after hearing geet's words maan going back leaving geet.😭😭i think the pic which ayan kisses daily is none other than maan's picture😉hope after seeing the love ayan has on maan may change her thinking.

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