ON THE DANCE FLOOR#2 UPDATED LAST PART,EPI@81 ON 13/2/15 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
Okkaaay so finally dono padh liya maine
I guess sabhi stories mein dono lead ko thodi pila deni chaiye dono apna dil halka kar lenge
I love talli geet yaar
She beacomes more cute than she is
I can totally c d same geet v saw in d show emo cutey aft ML wala track
Loved it yaar
Finally maan ko geet k past k baare mein pata chal gaya ufff relieved yaar atleast ab assume toh nahi karega šŸ˜†
Rulaaa diya yaar sachi mein it was seriously emotional n painful to c her so saddd n lonely
Totally zoned out n pressurised she was living
Never having tym for herself
At dis age girls just chill n work towards der future
But she had to work for fer present
Live for ayan
She became mom dad maasi n everything she can
But never let him feel alone
Hats off yaar
Finally she has got sumone in her life whom she can rely n depend upon trust sumone with her life
N i love maan for being dat person
He never had prob with ayan even if he thot him as geet's son
Ab toh nothing to ask
Ailaaa finallly first kiss yahan pe bhi
But geet toh talli i hope sab yaad rahega usse i hope warna memorable kaise rahega first kiss
But yeah dat was truly magical
Love dis cutie childish geet
Ahaaan chori chori chupke chupke wali jassoooss wat d kutte ki doom hai yeh kuch bhi karo tedi ki tedi hate dis minal
Sab dekha kafi nahi jo pics bhi kheeche
But lets wait n watch if dis also goes in favour with maaneet or her
I guesss uve planned sumthing for d next part
Kinda dhamakaaa
Wait for it
Excited yaar
Nooo words ur writing yaar just a big šŸ¤—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update... drunk geet...very cute..
Waiting for d nxt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
OH MY...DAT WAS EMOTIONAL...FUN FILLED ...WIT ROMANCE IN AIR...😳
DAT KISS WAS SO PASSIONATE ..YET SERENE IN A WAY...😃

MAAN IS SO RT...WEN HE SAID...HE WOULD LOVE TO KISS HER WEN SHE IS IN HER SENSE..šŸ˜†
WANT TO SEE GEET KA REACTION WEN SHE GETS UPP...

OH I HOPE DAT MINAL😔😔..WONT CREATE A MU BTWN MANEET WIT DIS PIC...ND HOPE GEET TRUST MAAN...

GEET KA PAST AND MANEETS EMOTIONS WERE PENNED BEAUTIFULLY...

LOVLY UPDATE CRAZY...
PLEASE PLEASE CONT NEXT PART...SOON.

LL BE WAIITN...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update..Geet blurted out everything about her and Ayan to Maan...Loved it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely Sweet Update 😳
Aww..Maaneet First kiss though geet was not her sense but still they kissed 😳 Loved it
Geet told about her past..her jiju n di died in airplane crash...so sad
Meenal😈 Ab ye kuch na kuch karegi revenge lene ke liye
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting part ohh lovely kiss
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Posted: 10 years ago

WOW!! fantastic update... Loved it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful superb emotional update! Well written! Geet drunk! Maan shocked! She is difficult to handle! Geet reveals abt Ayaan! Maan admires her n assure her he will nt leave her n Ayaan! Geet insists on a kiss! Maan refuses n he kisses him! Maan stunned! Maan promises never 2 leave her n Ayaan! Maaneet leave! Minal vows revenge! she realises Maan loves Geet! she took pics! Oh no! wt will happen nw?? update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet has shares her all the feelings with maan...
huh..that witch can do whatever she can do..but that only helps maaneet to come closer...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved Love Loved the update!!
Geet getting drunk and bursting out the truth was awesome... So Ayan is not her son rather her sisters...but hes cute...
their kiss was breathless... what do I say the whole update was AWESOME!!!
And Minal abh kia drama karne wali hai...??
Will be waiting for next.

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