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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#000099">please update soon </font>



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Originally posted by: Monikaarora

nice part dear...but emotional too...geet and her daughter talks are painful...now waiting for maaneet first meeting...continuee soonnn dear...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Emotional Updates but Awesome Indeed
so Geet's husband died and now she has to raise her little daughter
all by herself .
While Maan in New York is all alone has no family besides his cousin
sister
Looking forward to next update

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Pyar ka bandhan

PART 2

Maan came to his new york office in his MSK style. His bodyguards following him. He walks in attidude. maan walks into his office

There is perfect silence and no body dare to raise their head in front of the MSK ..Every one on red alret. Only adi and sasha wishes him

sasha - good hellow MK.

Adi - good morning sir.

maan nodes his head and enter in his cabin. His secretary went after him with his coffee and files of project.

Secretary - sir ur coffee and files of mall project.

Maan - ok and budget file of mr. thomsan project.

Secretary (fearfully) - sir I don't know sir.

Maan (angryily) - so for wat work I am paying u?

Secretary (meekly) - actually sir yesterday I was on half day leave so I don't know who take the file in afternoon.

Maan (shout) - now u will have full day for urself becoz u r fired.

Secretary - sorry sir plz give me a chance.

Maan - in my dictionary there is no word like sorry, forgive, forget and second chance. Now get out of my cabin right now.

The secretary came out from maans cabin with tears in her eyes. This is the 8 secretary which maan fired after he came to lonndon. Whole staff knew one mistake from their side and they will out of khurana group. Maan right hand adi goes to maan's cabin after few minutes and knock cabin door.

Maan - come in

Adi - gud morning sir, this is the the file u ask ur secretary sorry ex- secretary.

Maan shot him a glare and adi shut his mouth. After few minutes adi again spoke.

Adi - sir kya mein nayi secretary ke interview ke liye advertisement de du?

Maan - nai

Adi - hehehe par kyun sir?

Maan(irritatedly ) - nai adi uski koi jarurat nai hogi. Hamara yaha ka kaam pura hone wala hai fir hume wapis india jana hai toh tab tak tum hi meri meetings ke schedule dekh lena.

Adi - alright sir. Now I'll take ur leave sir. Have a good day sir.

After coming from maan cabin adi take a long relief and went toward his cabin when sasha stop him to ask wat happen.

Sasha - today wat happen in cabin adi?

Adi - wahi jo har baar hota hai kuch khaas nai bus muje ek aur kaam mil gaya muje Maan sir ke secretary hone ka.

Sasha - but why mk ko nayi secretary kyun nai chahiye?

Adi - kyunki iss project ke katam hone ke baad hum wapis india ja rahe hai toh jab tak hum interview karke secretary choose karege usse phele hi hum india mein hoge.

Sasha - acha hai muje yaha jyada maza nai aaya. I miss our delhi branch.

Adi - me too.

Sasha - sirf office ko ya pinky ko bhi.

Adi - stop sasha aur apna kaam karo warna maan sir next hum dono ko hi fire kar dege.

Here in delhi at night

Geet is crying holding raj photo and complaining to his picture.

Geet(crying) - why raj why? Kyun muje akela chod diya? Tumne toh muje promise kiya tha hamesha sath nibhane ka toh ye promise kyn tod diya.

Geet (sobbing) - tume mera khayal nai aaya toh tekh hai par tumari mahira kaise rahegi tumare bina tumne ye bhi nai socha? Maa, papa, mahira aur mein hum sab tume bhut miss karte hai plz aa jao.

She slept holding raj picture close to her heart. In her sleep she saw a dream where geet is sitting on a swing with raj keeping her head on his chest in a garden and he is telling her something but she only listening his heartbeat.

Raj - geet tum meri baat sun rahi ho ya nai?

Geet - hmmm

Raj - acha toh batao mein kya bol raha hu.

Geet - hmmm

Raj - GEET

Geet - ha kya hua aise kyun chilla rahe ho?

Raj - kyunki tum meri baat nai sun rahi thi issliye.

Geet - mein tumare dil ki baate sun rahi thi aur ussme kho gayi.

Raj - acha ji aur mein itni der se jo bol raha hu uska kya? Jao muje tumse koi baat nai karni. Mein jar aha hu.

Suddenly the garden change into a desert and raj is nowhere which freighted geet. She start to call his name.

Geet - raj! Raj kaha ho tum plz samne aa jao muje dar lag raha hai.

Geet - raj plz aa jao mein aage se tumari har baat manugi.

She can hear raj voice but can't see him

Raj - pariyo ki kahani jaisi hai raj ki rani.

Geet - ha ha tumari rani tume dekhna chahti hai plz samne aao.

Raj - nai raj ki rani muje jana hoga par tum ghabrana mat aur meri rajkumari ka bhi khayal rakhna.

Geet - nai raj ruk jao. RAJ RAJ

Geet woke up from her dream shouting raj name. she is sweating and feeling thrusty. Her water jug was empty so she came to kitchen for drinking water. While returning she saw the light on of the study room. There raj father ram is working and raj mother asking him to sleep.

Shakshi - ram plz aap kuch der ke liye aaram karlo. Aapki tabiyat karab ho jayegi. Raat ke 2 baj rahe hai.

Ram - nai muje ye project study karna hai iski meeting hai kal.

Shakshi - app itna tension mat lo sab tekh ho jayega. Office mein baki staff hai who dekh lege.

Ram (in choked voice) - kaise tekh hoga sab. Raj hum chodkar chala gaya, humari geet bhi kahi kho gayi aur mahi who toh sara din bus apne hero ko yaad karti hai.

Shakshi - plz calm down aapka bp phele hi kafi high hai.

Ram - kyun shakshi muje itna dard ho raha hai jo beta humari jaan hua karta tha ab humare pass nai hai. Kyun?

Shakshi(crying) - aap sab toh apna dukh bata dete hai par mein kisse batau. Koi mera dard bhi samjo kaise mein sabko samal rahi hu.

Geet couldn't hear there talks. She is angry on raj and herself but she decided something and waits for morning becoz her sleep is far from her eyes now.

MORNING AT DINING TABLE

Shaskhi - ram slow breakfast kijiye itni jaldi kya hai.

Ram - muje mahi ko playschool chodna hai fir office jakar meeting attend karni hai.

Geet - papa aap aaram se breakfast kijiye mahira ko mein drop kar dugi aur uske baad office bhi aa jaugi.

Both ram and shakshi got surprised with geet talks and ask for reason

Geet - bus muje ghar par acha nai lagta toh socha aapki hi help kardu raj ke dream project mein.

Ram - uss meeting mein abhi time hai bete.

Geet - pata hai papa uss company ke owner out of country hai par prepration toh karni chahiye na.

Ram - tekh hai.

Geet drop mahira to her school and went to office to help ram. One month pass after geet join office and meeting is coming near so they are working hard.

PRECAP - MAAN BACK IN INDIA AND MAAN-MAHIRA FIRST MEETING.

I KNOW IN THIS UPDATE THERE IS NO MAANEET BUT ITS IMPORTANT FOR STORYBASE. PLZ BEAR IT.

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT AND DO COMMENTS.

CHAHAT

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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: taahir004

Emotional Updates but Awesome Indeed
so Geet's husband died and now she has to raise her little daughter
all by herself .
While Maan in New York is all alone has no family besides his cousin
sister
Looking forward to next update

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice ud
maan coming back
geet soon meet with maan
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lovely update waiting for more nice story
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nice part dear...good to see geet coming out of her shell slowly slowly although it talk tym but she realised her responsibilities and join office...precap is interesting...continueee soonnn dear...

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