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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part

feelings arising in geet's heart after their dance
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet realise karo apne pyar ko...

superb update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...



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Posted: 10 years ago
maan is possessive n caring
he cant c monty with geet

he sucessfully avoids monty being with her
in party too he dances with her
his love is growing up
n geet too has started to feel it
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
so cute
maan accept his love feeling for geet
geet is still to find it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 48

As they enter the hotle Geet tries to get in faster but Maan is always right behind her...

Even in the elevator she clings to one corner making sure Maan doesn't hear the thumping of her heart...she isn't able to look into his eyes now...

She knows that Maan is good at reading her eyes...he will easily read her mind from her eyes...

She keeps her head down...but Maan doesn't need to look into her eyes any more to know her feelings...

He can feel the changes that's happening inbetween the two of them even with his eyes closed...

As they enter the room Geet rushes in to her safety...

Maan locks the door behind and turns to see Geet had vanished...

The sound of the door locks give relief to Geet and she comes out of the darkness to see if she is out of danger...

To her astonishment Maan is still there...

Geet then remembers asking Maan not to leave her alone last night...

But that was last light and there is a huge difference between the 24 hours...

Geet curses herself for being a coward and depending so much on Maan...

Look at what her dependence has lead to...Maan turning into this Ranjha...

She was just so comfortable the previous night sleeping along side Maan sharing the same bed...

But today she is scared of the same man...what's the matter with her?

Babaji ye kaise musibat hai? aur kaisa ehsaas hai?

Ek taraf dar lagtha hai ki koi galthi na ho jaye aur ek taraf dil chahatha hai ki aaise hi har idn, har raat Maan ke saath hi guzar jaye...

Jaise aaj ka din raha waise hi zindagi ke har din Maan se shuru aur har raat Maan se katam...

Babaji, ek boli bali ladhki ke mann mein ye kaise ehsaas ho sakthi?

Geet, tummare mann mein shaitan gusgaya...ye bahut bhuri hai...

Nahi Geet, yahi toh har ladhki ka sapna hotha hai, apna ek Rajkumar aur apna ek humsafar...

Maan has been her savior from the moment they met at Hoshairpur...

After that Maan has rescued her from her ill fate time and again...

He has shown her the right path, always supported her to be independent and to follow her dreams...

He has persuaded her to stand on her own legs and never to be dependent on someone...

But what has she done? She has always looked up to him for help...

Kept demanding his services...still dependent on him for everything...

She couldn't even stay on her own at this place without Maan...

Though she knew Maan is right next to her she isn't convinced and she wanted to have within her sight...or you may say she has become addicted to him now...

She keeps finding fake reasons to stay close to Maan...

But this Maan is a completely different man, he has lost control of himself now...

He is acting as if he is intoxicated and out of his mind...

May be he had drink or two in the party, but even Geet is in the same state of intoxication even though she didn't consume any hard drinks...

Geet could sense his piercing looks even in the darkess...

Suddenly she feels scared to be alone with Maan and it's suffocating for her to stay with him in a closed room...

Geet moves to the balcony to get some fresh air and Maan could see her beautiful face glowing in the Moonlight...

Geet looks like some angel who has descended from heaven...

Geet looks out side hoping that there would be someone down...

That way she can be confident for they are not alone any more...

But there is party at the pool side tonight and the silence of the night scares her more...

The cool breeze of the night embraces them gently arousing their desires...

Geet avoids turning and looking at Maan and keeps staring the reflection of Maan in the pool...

She is shivering in the cold and Maan makes his move towards her...

Geet starts feeling nervous and she starts shivering in the cold...

Her pallu flies in the wind exposing her dangerous curves...

Maan admires the marvels of nature that he has witnessed for the first time...

Geet doesn't know what to do...

She has stopped thinking...she is lost in the ramantic air around her...

Maan inches forward and reaches her pallu...

Geet senses it and turns around...

Maan looks into her eyes...maneet eyelock...mahi...

Geet is startled and she tries to escape...

Maan stops her pulling her pallu...

Geet had no escape...

Maan keeps pulling her pallu making her move closer and closer...

BGM...

"Roop tera mastana...

Pyaar mera deewana...

Bhool kahin humse na hojaye"

Geet had reached her destination...Maan ke bahoon mein Geet...

Maan covers her with the pallu...

And he isn't ready to let her go...

He is still holding to her saree...

This sends shivers down her spine...

Geet is still shivering in the cold but now she feels the warmth of Maan as he is standing almost touching her...Geet freezes...she folds her fists tight and tries to control the sudden rush of adrenalin...

Maan slowly moves her her away from her back and makes way for himself...

Both of them could hear each others heart beating faster and faster...

As Maan moves closer and closer Geet feels his hot breadth ticking her senses and kindling the fire of her untamed desires...

It's getting out of her control and she has reached the stage where there is no stopping...

She has given up her urge to control herself and the overwhelming desire triumps...

She gets ready to give herself to Maan, she is ready for a complete surrender, and she is ready to succumb to there is wildest wishes...

Maan holds her by her shoulders and gently turns her towards him...

She turns around and unable to look into his eyes she immediately hugs him tight and conveys her wish...she has tossed the ball into his court and it's Maan's will to go ahead and take their relationship to the next level...

Maan too hugs her and helps her ease the mounting pressure of her adulocence...

Maan kisses her forehead and still finds her struggling to meet his eyes...

Maan: gud night Geet

Geet is surprised at this reaction...Maan steps away from her releasing his hold...

Geet is embarrassed...she feels guilty...has she done anything wrong?

She is afraid that she has crossed her limits...

But luckily Maan had some control over himself for he knows very well that all this is his fault to have aroused her feelings and considering her tender age and vulnerability, it's not her fault to have reacted to his passions like this...

But Maan knew better and he is angry with himself for corrupting her innocent mind with these unwanted thing...

She is still very young and has no clue what this whole thing is about...

It's a completely new experience for her and considering the circumstances that lead to this juncture it's absolutely Maan's fault...

He knew the consequences of his acts yet he didn't bother to check his emotions...instead he let his desires take over not only himself but also an innocent girl...

And to be more precise Geet is the one who has received the maximum effects of his untamed desires...and she is the one who is now left with a sense of guilt though she has not done anything wrong except to trust Maan blindly...

It's only natural for her to behave like this b'coz in her point of view Maan is no stranger but he has all the rights to do anything with her...

Only Maan knows the reality...he knows that he is trying to take advantage of her innocence and in the name of granting her freedom he is trying to enslave her with his most effective yet dangerous weapon, secuction...

Yes, this is absolute seduction, as you know Maan is the master here and Geet is a poor victim of his seductive deeds...

And he was about to commit a crime with a minor girl...

Maanhas decided that his life is with Geet only and she is the one who owns him, she has the privilege to take control of him just like she has done at present, and also Maan is happy to loose this battle for he always wants her to win...

But this is not the right time or place for their union, this is a life long commitment and Geet is too nave to understand the nuances of a relationship, she is very innocent for her age and still has to mature a lot to understand things better inorder to make such important life changing decisions...

She is too young to decide her life partner and she has every right to reject Maan...

Yes, as much as she has the right to accept him she also has the right to reject him...

Maan knows that she can never say no to him, but right now she is not ready or she is not big enough to accept or reject his love...

She needs some more time, she needs to know many things before she could decide her future...

Geet is shocked at her own behavior and she rushes to the washroom to escape as she is ashamed to face Maan...what has she done? Babaji, ye mujhe ho kya raha hai?

Mein aur aaise? Ye nah ho saktha...nahi...kabhi nahiii...

Actually Maan should be guilty for pushing her into such a situation, yes, he is also feeling guilty for dragging her unnecessarily into this mess...

Geet splashes water on her face to get out of this intoxication and get back to her senses...

But this is not going to be easy for her...

Realizing something like this for someone is special and you should feel happy about it and not guilty...

Geet is yet to recognize her feelings and then she has to accept that she is in love with her DD...

One thing is clear, her DD is also going thru the same kind of feelings but he is the MSK, he can openly flirt with her, poor Geet she is the who has to suffer, ye kaisa insaaf hai babaji?

Geet ko abhi bhi patha nahi ki Maan Geet ke barein mein kya sochtha...

Jo bhi ho, iss naya ehsaas ka kya matlab ho saktha?

Kya isse hi pyaar kehthe hai? kya yahi ek rishthe ki shuruwat hothi hai?


Part49

little busy...won't be regular...


Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Geet so scared to be with maan
Maan being so nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
both are pulled towards each other like a magnet
geet surrenders..failing to f8 with herself
but maan too took control on himself at last sec making her guilty
he must say his love to her
poor girl still fighting with her new emotions
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely part.. Maan decided to give time to Geet to understand their relation.. Geet not able to recognise her feelings..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ud
geet feeling guilty fr hr new feelings
she not yet knows she failing fr dd
how will she recognized this wat
isvthis feelings
but maan is sure abouts his feelings
and wat he did with poor geet and wat dilemma
she facing right now
that was maan who convey this feelings to
geet and now his magic is working on geet
abvtu adat si ho gai thi regular ud ki
but never mind everyone have some duties
b waiting fr nxt

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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update..Both are attracted towards each other..Geet wants to surrender but Maan being understanding decided to wait ...Loved it..

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