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part 32
awesome dear...
nice...
so Maan has come to know that Geet wanted to save him and his family...
Manu is so cute...
cont soon dear...
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hai padma
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no one came... bas mein akeli

na na aap akeli nahi hoo
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 32
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4210147/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-4-updated-pt-36-pg-120-9th-nov?pn=56

Part - 33

It was decided on BF table by all that Geet wd go to attend d function in d morning nd Yash,Rashi nd Maan wd join her at reception then all came back together ,, Maan left Geet at venue which was booked for all d functions nd left for KC ,, he didn't come office from last 2 days so he thought that in absence of Geet nd Manu he cd use d day to finish his office work ,, he was hell busy whole day but didn't forget to call his cutie at lunch nd eve .

Geet attended all d function , she saw nd enjoyed all d rituals, though she was very happy for Heer nd Prem , but felt a pang in her heart thinking that these happiness wr vanished from her life.

She was attending a marriage 1st time,, d Jaimala , pheras with vows nd vidaai made her sad ,, Prem made Manu to sit on horse with him nd manu was overjoyed that he sat on a horse ,, all went well nd started preparation for d night party ,, Geet wore a lahanga nd looking very stunning ,, her kiddu Manu was full busy in playing nd eating with other kids ,, Geet had a hard time to handle him in this gathering nd she was feeling tired now running after Manu ,, she change his dress for d party nd packed all d belongings in d bag ,, she was going to call Maan to ask at what time they wr reaching but got his .

Geet: hello GE, Geet here .

Maan: hello Geet.

Geet: when r u all coming ?

Maan: we r ready nd in an hr we'll be there .

Geet: OK .

Maan: how is Manu ?

Geet: he is giving me a tough time ,, sab mis manage ho raha hei .

Maan: handle him some more time then we'll there to look after him ,, it happens in these type of functions .

He cut d call with a smile remembering how manu made him run after him when he was with him last night.

D party started ,, guests from both sides wr coming nd wishing newly wed couple nd their families ,, Geet spent few min with Heer nd then excused bcoz now they had to meet lots of ppl ,, she took her bag nd Manu nd sat away from crowd ,, she was talking to manu nd watching d guests from far ,, she felt a jolt when she saw a face on d stage with Prem nd Heer ... OMG!!! she is also here ,, but who is with her ?

It was sam with a man nd wishing d couple then they met with Perm's parents ,, it seems that they wr known to prem family ,, both took drinks from d server nd then stood away ,, Geet realized that after coming here she never saw Maan to going out nd to talk Sam .. Why? He was not a person who stayed at home full day , but now he was totally changed nd now this sam with diff man ,, it showed that they r not together ,, Maan's soft behaviour towards her nd saying sorry for his past ill treatment clearly indicating that something had happened in last 3 yrs .

Her chain of thought broke with d Maan's call ,, she recived nd he asked about her ,, she told him where is she sitting ,, She saw them ,, they went to wish Prem& Heer nd met their parents nd then came to join her ,, Maan's face showed that he didn't see Sam ,, Manu jumped from her lap nd ran towards Yash , who picked him in arms nd loved him , then Maan nd Rashi .

Rashi: Geet beta tang kiya esne.

Geet: bahot aunty ,, he is seeing all this gathering 1st time ,, running nd playing with other kids ,, no time of meal nd sleep ,, I caught him nd he ran away in min.

All wr pampering manu d gr8 nd he was describing what he had done nd specially his horse ride with groom ,, after passing time Manu became drowsy ,, Geet tried to gave him some milk but he refused nd soon slept in Rashi's arms ,, all wr sitting there nd having lil snacks nd hot/cold drinks ,, Geet too was very tired nd refused to eat anything .

Yash: Maan lets have dinner nd then go ,, Geet nd manu need rest .

Geet : I don't want to take anything , plzz u all go nd take nd i'm waiting here .

Rashi made manu sleep in Geet's lap nd all went ,, Geet was looking at them nd got d fact .

When Maan , Yash nd Rashi came in dining area ,, they caught d sight which made them stunned nd angered ,, all gave looks to each other nd then glared at her .

Sam ,, she too looked at them nd turned white ,, all wr shunning ,, Yash gave a hard look to Sam nd then to Maan ,, he said something to Rashi nd moved from there ,, Rashi nd Maan followed him with tensed ,, Maan's eyes wr red nd jaws tight ,, Geet saw them nd turned her face other side not to show that she witnessed all .

Yash : Geet beta chalo , meet with ur friends nd let's go home .

Geet: aapne kuch khaya ya nahi ?

Rashi: he's not feeling well beta , med lena padega , ghar chalty hein .

Geet worried: meds ,, aap theek hei na uncle , prob jyada ho to pahale dr ke paaschalty hein.

Maan: no, we have meds at home , come , give me Manu nd took ur belongings .

He held d kiddu nd Geet took her bag ,, she was worried for Yash now ,, they wished again d couple nd took leave .

Now geet was sure that there was something big which had happened nd disturbed d whole family ,, otherwise d break up of Maan from a girl cdn't disturb Yash uncle like this ? What did that girl do which shook d family , changed Maan nd Dadima ?

Geet knew that that girl sam nd her friend wr planning something ,, but Maan didn't trust her when she tried to warn him ,she got reward of her loyalty ,, he tore her , broke her to no extant nd she choose banishment for her for d happiness of this family .

Yash was very disturbed nd went in his room straightway ,, Rashi nd Maan wr worried for him nd looking at each other now nd then ,, Maan made Manu to sleep in d bed nd went to his Dad room ,, Geet was also worried nd wanted to come with Maan but he stopped her saying that manu is alone here nd he wd take care of dad ,, he went nd Geet went to change her dress nd then changed manu's.

She saw that Manu was restless nd folding legs in his tummy ,, she caressed his head nd patted but next he coughed nd then pucked ,, geet took his nd rushed in d washroom where he pucked more ,, he was coughing nd started crying ,, she cleaned him nd brought him back in room ,, made him sit on bed nd rushed take out his other dress to change ,,but he puked again with cough ,, she became tense now ,, rushed to washroom , cleaned ,, changed his dresses then clean bed nd room ,, Manu was laying dull on sofa ... Hell ,,, she panicked .

She took out d cough syrup from her med bag nd gave him ,, she checked his diaper nd saw that was dirty ,, symptoms showed that he had stomach infection ,, she cleaned him nd gave him a change but his condition was becoming worse ,, he puked again ,, now Geet alarmed , she called Maan nd told him ,, with in sec he was in her room nd held Manu worried .

Maan: suddenly kya hua esse Geet ?

Geet tensed: pata nahi ,, shayad infection hei ,, khana -peena sab disturb hei kal se , aur aaj to bacchon ke sath pura din raha hei ,, unke sath khela aur khaya .

Maan looked at manu's face who was coughing nd again going to puke ,, Maan rushed to washroom , Geet followed him ,, they cleaned him ,, Maan at once called Rashi nd told her about Manu ,, soon Yash nd Rashi wr there , hell worried for d kid .


Precap --- Manu nd Geet in hospital ...

MSK d gr8 gave sponze bath to Jojo...😆


Part -34



sorry for mistakes ...
Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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