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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



of course.. done done hai 😆



acha tho bol kya pehna rahi ho?? micro se mini kya?😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



acha tho bol kya pehna rahi ho?? micro se mini kya?😆



Arrey courtesy ke liye BAbbie ko puch toh lu 😆

Karugi wo hi jo maine thann li hai 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



Arrey courtesy ke liye BAbbie ko puch toh lu 😆

Karugi wo hi jo maine thann li hai 😆



😲 😆 acha hain ... i too want to read ur imagination😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
hai babbie

abhi tak nahi aayi tum?

will come after some time

i hope to meet u then

cya
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! Yash n Rashi question Geet abt Manu n his dad! Geet dreads the question bt answers! Yash sad tht she was all alone! Geet says Manu is a US citizen n she will get her green card! he reveals that she is alone n happy! Yash tells dadi n Maan hw much she suffered cos of them! updater soon! superbly written!
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi babbie
nice update
waiting for next
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OH SHE LIED ABT MAANU KA PAPA...SO SHE STRUGGLED A LOT FELT BAD...FOR HER..NOW SHE IS SETTLED AND A g...CARD HOLDER TOO...

OKAY NOW AM CURIOUS TO KNOW WAT WENT WRONG ..DAT DAADI TOO HAS CHANGED...

LOVED MAANU PART..AWW JOJO BECHARA...
HEHEHHEEHEH...

OH PRECAP...CANT WAIT...COLLIDE...BT WIT WHOM PAST OOR GEET OR SOMETHING ELSE..


WAITIN DI...WAITIN..
CONT SOON..
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Posted: 10 years ago
aaj maineaayi hoon tho sab gayab kyun hai
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 30
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4210147/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-4-updated-pt-36-pg-120-9th-nov?pn=31


Part - 31

Rashi placed his hand on Yash's shoulder to calm him ,, dadima nd Maan wr quietly listening him ,, time proved both of them wrong nd now they wr ashamed at their behaviour towards Geet ,, but after yrs their regret cn't heal Geet's wounds nd d rejection she felt in d house which made her to live a banished life ,, Maan was feeling guilty for his bad behaviour for Geet but now he was adamant to give her all respect ,facing all her rejection nd taunts.

Maan: i'm going with her , plzz don't worry about them .

Yash : i'm not saying u to do that Maan , I cn send Adi with her to help her , but i've a request plzz don't hurt her again .

Maan: I won't, plzz trust me Dad.

Maan got up nd went to change ,, he changed nd came in Geet's room to take manu ,, he entered in d room nd his heart skipped a beat seeing Geet in a beautiful white dress with open curls ,, both mom nd son complimenting each other .

How cute ! who cn say that she is a mom of a child,, She was buckling Manu's shoes, next moment he slapped his head inwardly saying,, Maan what's wrong with u ? stupid u r checking Geet ,, r u mad?

Maan: Geet mai help karu ?

Geet: bas ho gaya ,, Mr Khurana aap ku pareshaan hote hein ,, mai manage ker lungi ,, aap plzz apna office skip matt kijiye .

Maan: Geet plzz , no argument on this , let me come with u ,, it'll be tough for u to handle Manu alone there .

Geet: mr Khurana i'm handeling him from day one nd u wr not there for us ,, I cn do that .

Maan: I know u cn Geet , but plzz let me come , at least I'll get more time to spend with Manu .

Manu: mommy let him come ,, we'll see many things ,, he plo mise me .

Geet helplessly nodded her son was taking advantages nd she cn't deny in this situation ,, she took manu's baby bag with her hand bag nd went out ,, she prepared manu's milk to carry with her for d day , filled his water bottle nd ready to go ,, Maan held Manu's hand nd all come out to go ,, Yash settled in his car after loving nd biding bye to manu ,, this lil cutie made his day .

They reached in embassy nd Geet went to meet s officials nd Maan remained with Manu in waiting area ,, it too near 2hr to Geet to deposit some documents which her lower gave her to deposit personally for quick action coz if he sent them from US it wd take few weeks in process but now it reduced d time , these papers wr for verification ,, when Geet came manu was sleeping in Maan's arms nd she gave a sorry look to him but he was feeling contended having him close to him .

Geet : pareshann kiya kya kaafi ?

Maan: nahi ,, he was nice ,, kaam hua ?

Geet : haan ho gaya bas ab verification ke liye ye log apni team bhejenge aur report ready kerke bhej denge .

Maan: Geet kya tum sach mei yahan wapas nahi aana chahati ?

Geet : jab yahan kuch hei hi nahi to aane ka kya fayada ? Manu ka sab kuch wahan ka hei to mere liye bhi yahi suitable hei .

Maan: hum sab hein na yahan .

Geet: wo to pahale bhi thy ,, aur dheere dheere sab bhool jatey hei apni life mei busy hoker .

Maan: kabhi-kabhi bhoolna bhi mushkil hota hei .

Geet: haan hota hei , per bhoolna padta hei .

Maan: Geet , plzz don't cut off ur self from ur roots .

Geet: I can't ,, our roots r very much here nd nd hope they grow more .

Maan: shall I hope that u'll be in touch with us , will u allow us to visit u nd Manu in future ?

Geet: I told u that I cn't deny coz i'm obliged nd what i'm today is all bcoz of u nd this family ,, I don't have anything of mine ,, everything of mine belong to this family ,, i'm only physically there otherwise i'm nothing without this family ,, u nd anyone from d family cn visit us anytime .

Maan: thanks Geet , thanks a lot .

Geet: don't thank me plzz ,, chalen ,, bhook bhi lagi hei , it's lunch time nd I have to purchase few bangles for me .

Maan: bangles ? why?

Geet: matching with my dress for d functions ,, in US there wr very few choice, so decided to purchase from here ,, sorry it's boring for u .

Maan gave a smile to her nd nodded in a no ,, he got up from d sofa having sleeping manu in his arms ,, Geet asked to take but he denied ,, both come out nd Maan called d driver to bring d car , settled in nd Maan mentioned to driver d hotel name to stop there for lunch ,, after few min they wr in a well known restaurant ,, Maan took a corner table with long sofa so that manu cd sleep there ,, he lie down manu there comfortably nd went to freshen up ,, after that Geet went nd than they ordered their meal ,, Geet ordered meal keeping in mind to feed Manu ,, he need a change to so she woke him ,, manu was up after few efforts ,,Geet took him for change in between their lunch was placed ,, Geet came nd settled manu near her nd asked him what he wanted to eat but in his way he saw a child with soft drink can so he too demanded that .

Manu: mommy I want that juice ( he indicated towards d coke can)

Geet: no baby , no soft drink , i'll give u juice .

Manu: no juice mommy , that .

Geet: Ok 1st have ur food than i'll give u .

Manu: plzz mommy nd then he looked at Maan , aaawww ,, soft target .

Maan melted at once nd took him in arms to go on counter ,, Geet frowned .

Geet: mr Khurana plzz , let him eat 1st ,, he is manipulating .

Maan smiled: no prob , he is asking just for a soft drink Geet ,, wait we r coming nd he went with super happy Manu who gave a reward kiss on Maan's cheek saying thanku nd Maan was on cloud 9 ,, they wr coming back ,, manu was in Maan's arms nd sipping his soft drink from d can ,, Maan was busy on a call with sasha discussing some matter ,, suddenly he bumped with someone nd .. Disaster ... Oops ,, Sorry ,,, ouch .

That was a girl in a short mod dress with noodle strips nd Manu's soft drink did d job well ,, from top to her shoulder to d vally of her B**** chilled soft drink cooled her nd she was like O ,, Maan cut d call at once ,, 1st he wanted to laugh but suppressed that nd next moment when he saw d very person his eyes turned red in anger ,, d girl was in mess nd cribbing .

G: what hd hell is this , cn't u see .

Manu: solly .

Maan : but u have d capability to see d double of others , miss.

D girl looked up nd her face turned white for a sec nd froze at her place .. U ???.

Maan: send d bill of ur dress at my add ,, u got d good chance to fetch some more money .

She was going to open her mouth but d other person who was with her came close nd circled his arm in her waist.

Man: Sam darling what happened , let's go,,( then he looked at her dress ,wet with soft drink ) Oh no , how this happened ?

Sam: I bumped with this kid nd his soft drink spilt on me ,, it's ok , let's go to refreshing room to clean it.

Man: don't feel bad darling , i'll buy u new one right now , come.

Maan: u must be mr , nd miss,, send d bill to me . he glared at her vilely.

Man: it's OK mr ,, I cn pay .

Maan: u have to some day, good luck.

D man looked at him puzzled nd Sam dragged him with her hurriedly.

Sam: come honey , I need to clean it 1st.

Both moved towards d lobby nd Maan gave a hard glare to them nd whispered inwardly..B****.

Manu: uncle my dlink ,, he made a puppy face .

Maan: awwee my baby , don't feel bad , we'll buy another one .(he kissed Manu's cheek)

They again moved to d counter nd he asked for a can ,, after taking that both came to their table where Geet was waiting for them ,, Maan thanked his stars that Geet was not with him that time otherwise she felt really bad nd got d ugly fact which he didn't want to open.


Precap --- Maan mesmerized ...😳

Part - 32



Sorry for mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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