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Hello my dear
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.


Part - 24


Part - 25


Few days slipped like this everty evening/morning Maan talked to Manu ,, Geet handed d phone to Manu seeing Maan's number but she never say a single Hi to Maan ,, she didn't want to ,, she didn't know what made Maan to change his mind nd behaviour for her , he was never like this but she was d same Geet nd she remembered everything so avoid to talk him .

Geet never wanted to visit India but Prem nd Heer's marriage nd few of her works forced her to go ,, few formalities for changing d passport nd to closed d bank account which was on her name ,, d money which YSK deposited in her account (55 lacks) was still untouched nd she had to return that to YSK ,, from last one yr after getting her job she was depositing half of her salary in nd now did all formalities to transferre in that account tafter reaching Delhi ,, she did all her homework nd ready to go in next 2days ,, she was in touch with Heer nd Prem ,, both wr busy but talk to her nd Manu almost every day.

There Maan quietly decorated nd arranged d room for his cutie at night ,, he shopped in lunch brake or eve nd hide that in his SUV then at night after sleeping all he worked nd it took nearly 10 days to finished that , he gave an admiring look to d room nd locked that ,, he lied that he kept some of his stuff there so locked that.

The chirpy manu gave him all d info regarding their shopping , packing nd day of reaching Delhi ,, 2 days before Geet nd Manu's departure Maan told manu to gave phone to his mommy .

Manu: mommy uncle Maan ,, talk to him .

Geet: why baby ?

Manu: he said .

Geet took d phone nd hesitantly say Hi to him .

Maan: Geet , aauuumm ,, give me ur flight number nd departure time ,, i'll be there to receive u .

Geet: mr Khurana plzz don't trouble u ,, i'll manage ,, Prem'll be there to receive us , we r staying with them .

Maan: but why with them ? Geet plzzz ,, I know u don't want but for dad ,,plzz it's a request , plzz Geet .

Geet: i'll come to meet him nd aunty ,, actually i've some more work to finish nd have to attend few functions of Prem nd Heer's marriage ,, so it wd be good if I'll stay with them .

Maan: u cn attend from here too ,, i'll drop u at Prem's house but plzz stay in KM .

Manu heard that her mommy was planning to stay with Prem uncle nd that was against his nd Maan's plans .

Manu: mommy , i' ll stay with Dadu nd Jojo , peezzz mommy .( Maan overheard manu's words)

Maan: Geet plzz for manu too ,, I planned many things for him .

Geet: why r u taking pain mr Khurana ? I have packed week nd lots of work ,, I told u that we'll surly come to visit KM .

Maan: but why r u not living here with Dad n Mom ,, Geet I know i'm d reason behind all this ,, i'll go some whare but plzz stay here with dad ,, plzz .

Manu: mommy ,, I'll stay with dadu ,, peezz ,, I want to play with jojo ,, mommy peezz .( manu starting his chanting , he was very excited to meet them nd his Jojo , so how cd he tolerate that his mom planning to go some where )

Geet: manu baby , we'll go to play with jojo ,, don't worry .

Manu ,, no ,, u lying ,, ( he started crying) I 'll stay with jojo , dadu nd uncle maan.

Geet's heart cried seeing her child tears nd there Maan's too ,, he became restless .

Maan: Geet , plzzz don't make him cry for me ,, Geet plzz for manu , for dad ,, he is missing u a lot but never shows ,, I don't know when u'll come again but for once plzz come here .

Helpless Geet made manu calm saying OK, we'll stay with dadu nd Jojo ,, now stop crying baby . she took him in her arms nd consoled .

Maan: Geet do this favour for me ,, plzz.

Geet: OK , mr Khurana , but I don't want to break ur family ,, plzz don't leave ur house bcoz of me , it'll be an insult for me nd it'll hurt uncle ,aunty nd dadima too .so for few days I cn manage for many ppl , specially for uncle nd Manu.

Maan took a sigh of relief : thanks a lot Geet , plzz sent me ur details nd informed me before boarding .

Geet: OK ,,, Manu baby now smile we'll stay with ur dadu nd Jojo ,, happy .

Manu: thank u mommy , love u .

Geet: love u too baby ,, happy now.

Manu: yeah ,, so o o happy .( he spreaded his arms with a wide smile)

Maan: thanku Geet ,, thanku so much .

Geet: it's OK mr Khutana ,, mujh per ehasaan hei us ghar ke ,, aur uncle ke liye mai kuch bhi ker sakti hu ,, he is a father like figure for me ,, if i'm doing something good today that is all bcoz of him ,, he is my God father ,, i'll send u d details ,, GN .

Geet bit her lower lip but tears dropped down from her eyes ,, coz of her child's smile , happiness nd for uncle she had to visit that place again ,, she took Manu in her arms nd went to prepare dinner for both nd U&A sam ,, then she had to pack their luggages ,, sat , sun was off so she had booked sat morning flight nd there was only one day in between .

There in Delhi Maan was watching d manu's pic in his phone sitting in his Gym with pained eyes nd mumbled... agar manu ke aane se mujhe etni khushi mil rahi hei , to Dad ko to mujhse bhi jyada milegi ,, shayad ab mai kuch khushi de pau Dad ko unki Geet ko umke paas lakar.

Geet msgd her flight details to him nd informed Prem too ,, both knew that Khurana's wr her guardians in Delhi so they didn't make any fuss but insisted her to attend all d rituals with manu ,, Geet agreed nd next day she nd Manu wr in d plane ,, it was Manu's 1st long journey nd he was very excited in start talking about what he do after reaching Delhi , but after few hrs sitting on same place he became super bore though Geet made him play games on her lappy but for how long ,, poor soul started feeling bore ,, both slept for few hrs, but not properly .

After a tiring journey Geet nd Manu wr at d exit of airport ,, she was with luggage trolley nd manu was sitting on a big bag ,, Maan was waiting for them , saw nd rushed towards them calling Manu name , he went close nd manu opened his arms for him ,, Maan lifted him in a blink nd hugged him tightly to him ,, pecked his both cheeks ,, i'm so happy to see u baby ,, how r u ? Hi , how was journey Geet?

Geet: hi , fine but tiring nd boring for manu ,, it was his 1st .

Maan: thanks Geet ,,,, come , let's go home baby .

Geet followed him with a faint smile but her heart filled with many emotions , pleasure seeing her Manu's happiness nd bitterness remembering her past.


Precap - welcome in KM ...

Part 26



Note.. maan'll remember that night after some time...


sorry for d mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

babie kaha ho green tho dikh rahi ho



🤗 Hi priya..
net bahot slow hei..

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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

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🤗 Hi Valli ..
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🤗 Hi lakshu ..
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🤗 Hi priya..
net bahot slow hei..



thodi der baad update dene chalijaana

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