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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.


Part - 20



Part - 21


She was not in peace, d fear was eating her nd she was walking to nd fro in her room ,, a lil sound made her jump at her place in fear that he had come ,, eve passed like this ,, a servant came to ask for dinner , Geet asked to him about Maan nd Dadima nd he informed that Dadima took only soup nd chote saab wd come late ,, Geet took a sigh of relief but she thought again those ppl who wanted to trap him ,, she knew but she was helpless , nobody is here to trust her .

She came in kitchen nd took her dinner unwillingly ,, help Nakul in some works nd went saying that she cn't help him much for few dats coz of her exam after that she was free nd help him full day ,,, Nakul nd other servant satish knew her humble nature nd Yash nd Rashi's care for her so they too wr caring for her ,, Geet respect them nd helped them .

It was mid night ,, all wr went to sleep ,, servants retired to their quarters ,, strong dusty winds wr blowing (these wr hot summer days of north India nd strong dusty winds r common) ,, Dadima was sleeping peacefully in her room while Geet was studing in her room but her fear was disturbing her nd to her badluck her presumption took place of reality ,, her door broke opened with a strong kick ,, d small nail fell near her feet nd she looked at d opened door horrified .

There was he like an untamed beast ,, red eyes , tightened jaws , ruffled hair ,, lose shirt whose upper 2 buttons wr opened ,, he was standing middle of d door placing his hands on both doors nd looking at her like wanted to burn her alive .

Geet gulped hard nd stood from her chair ,, looked around to save her nd find d washroom door opened ,, to save her from his wroth she thought to shut herself in d washroom , but he was following her every move ,, came inside nd closed d door loosly behind him ,, Geet stepped back trembling nd run towards d wash room but he jumped over her bed nd held her in mid way nd caught her hair,, threw her on bed ,, she yelp in pain nd looked at him terrified but tried again to get up ,, Maan knelt on bed , grab her open curles again in his hand nd groaned .

Maan: u spoiled my eve ,, my nd sam's party ,, u insulted me nd my friends nd now u have to pay for that ,, I warned u but u dare to interfere in my life .

Geet was wailing in pain ,, she tried to make her free her hair form his grip nd from one hand pushing him back from her ,, she realized that he was drunk ,, d strong smell of alcohol coming from his breaths ,, she spoke hardly in pain.

Geet: I,,,I told u d truth , , ,, plzz trust me ,, leave me ,, plzz .

Maan groaned: u B***** curse ,, u told me to whom I trust ,, who d hell r u ? she was my GF ,, MSK's friend, who choose d best nd u raised finger at her , u who is nothing , a useless burdon, whose family threw her out from their life nd now u r spoiling our happiness ,, my happiness ,, u made my sam cry nd I'll make ur life hell .

Geet: pllzzz ,, leave me ,, i'm sorry , sorry ,, I ,, I won't do this again ,, chodo mujhe ,, aahh !!

She tried to push him nd he was applying his force in anger ,, in her pain nd dismay Geet started to slapping his shoulder nd pushing him saying ,,,chodo mujhe ,, but Maan was blind in anger nd d hard drink jammed all his senses of right nd wrong ,, there wr only few thing which wr hammering his dull mind ,, she insulted nd accused sam infront of all nd he wd teach her a good lesson .

Geet: leave me ,, u r drunk ,, u r hurting me ,, leave me . she grappled , pushed him , punched him on his shoulder but he was nowhere to live her hair .

Maan: u r crossing ur limits ,, i''ll show u ur place .

To stop her moving hands nd lags he grab her wrist nd pinned that on bed nd pressed her legs with his almost towering her ,, she feared more nd used her other hand to push him , dug her nails in his chest ,,, he caught that hand nd pined that to ,, now he was fully over her ,, their bodies wr rubbing to each other nd both wr applying their force against each other ,, one was in fear nd wanted to be free nd other was full drunk nd wanted to punish ,, these rubbing nd prussurizing started provoking his manly senses ,, his tensed body , drunked dull mind ,, female body's fragrance nd touch , her soft prompt mounts wr attracting his eyes ,, d cremy white blugs of her b***** wr clearly seen , he felt d softness of her full mounts against his chest with her heavy breaths.

He lifted his eyes a lil nd there wr her pink supple quering parted lips which wr inches away form his ,, her warm breaths wr touching his skin ,, his throat went dry , whole body tensile in desires ,, his eyes wr on her tempting lips nd she was looking at her with fear , steered to make her free but her these tries started arousing his beast ,, he felt a tension nd hardness in his m***** nd to eased him he grinded his pelvis over her .. disaster ,, that created a havoc in him nd burnt him ,, he groaned nd grinded again dipped his face more , his nose tip touched her ,, she gasped in fear seeing his state ,, struggled her body to make her free but failed nd in next move he grabbed those soft petals ,, he started sucking them thirstily ,, he forgot everything in those burning desires which made him completely blind .

She was hell shocked with all this nd froze ,, eyes widened , breath stuck in her throat ,, he entered his tongue , to explore d sweer world ,, this was all new for him nd his s***** desires made him more in d effect of alcohol ,, he was rubbing , pressing his pelvis over her core , groaning in pleasure ,, his hand started moving on her body , squeeze her soft mount ,, giving her a shiver , then other nd after that there was no stopping ,, he lifted her short kurti nd started playing his hands , squeezed them, kissed them , bit them again nd again he was turning wild every passing second ,, she cried nd try to protect but her every attempt lost in his wildness ,, he sealed her mouth with his nd started opening her lower nd slid down , her soft warm skin arousing him ,,, his hardness touched her warm softness nd then there was no struggle from one side for saving nd other one was going wild nd fast for satisfying his torturous desires ,, in start there was pain nd tears then numbness in shock ,, both lost their chastity .

Nobody cd thought that it wd ended like this ,, unpredictable nd unbearable ,, she way lying like a cold dummy with blank eyes staring at d roof ,, he flooded nd slumped over her tired consumed in extreme pleasure nd satisfaction ,, in his drowsiness he didn't part , hugged her , gave few kisses ,, min passed but he didn't leave her ,,, d sense of pleasure stuck him there forcing him to drown more nd more in that pool of ecstasy ,, he started moving again in slow pace , tingled her raw body ,,he was kissing nd groaning in pleasure in her ear ,, sucking her skin of shoulder nd blug ,, he touched d o***** nd after few strong thrusts he flooded again giving her bits ,, she too felt a contraction in her core ,, dug nails in shoulders nd upper arms ,, few min passed ,, tired nd satisfied he slided a lil nd slept ,, she felt his smelly heavy breaths on her neck .

She was lying like a torn rag doll with blank eyes , lost ,tired nd broken to no extant ,, with in an hr she lost her last possession ,, her pride , her purity to a person who didn't know what he had done ,, mins passed , she gathered herself sat nd tears rolled down from her eyes seeing her torn state ,, she hardly got up , closed d door with other bolt , took out her dress ,, switch off d light to hide d ugliness of d room nd went to washroom .

she cried out heart for long then change ,, wash her face nd came out ,, in d partial light of of washroom she saw him on her bed half n*** nd all around .


Precap --- corollary...


Part - 22




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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for new thread and waiting ...
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😊 Updated ;;Pt 21... Pg ..3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb part ... maan came home all drunk and in anger and alcohol effect he claimed geet breaking her to bits ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Arey waah aaj 2 updates 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭

do din se mujhe ignore kar rahi ho

going to kona and 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😔omg never... ever i have thought maan would be doing this now i'm hating maan feel sorry for geet now why does maan want to know manu ...does he forgot what he did to geet ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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read both the parts now...
how could maan blame her for all the things..how rude..
ughh..he...he is manu's father...well i m happy for that..but i hate him..for doing this to her...
how could he just...

plz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread di
Last few updates me maan I want too kill mean n his super big fat ego n ha dadi ko bhi
BT after this update m pakka going to kill maan
N poor geet uses kya kya sehna pada grrr
Hate maan soo much...
Par an maan itna kyun badal gaya apne mean rude natur se !!
Feet is right in her behavior
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Ah! I hope she doesn't forgive him Babbie!
Ab kyun aaaya back in her life😡

He does not remember his disgusting behavior, I am sure of it.. 😡


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