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Posted: 10 years ago
So that was Geet sis Payal
Now safe but lost her baby
Rahul was there he came early morning
His bhai raj get angry
Maan kids not listening him
His bhabhi very well managing kids
Waiting fr next wen Geet is coming

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

So that was Geet sis Payal

Now safe but lost her baby
Rahul was there he came early morning
His bhai raj get angry
Maan kids not listening him
His bhabhi very well managing kids
Waiting fr next wen Geet is coming


Thank you so much.

I think the confusion of women who attempted is clear.😆 me relieved

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: idunno

now got it, payal is sister of geet and due to too much torture in sasural try to commit suicide,and rahul khurana saved her ,nice go.most appreciation for last dialogue by Anvita 'mujhe pyal ho gaya' it so cute and hilarious.


Thank you dear, Glad you liked. You will get more of her antics in near future.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Great update..

Will read it again tomorrow dear...I want to clarify some parts.


Thank you. Take your time. pm me,😊 will clarify your doubts.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: JayaR

oh so that was payal and not Geet...but 4-5 months pregnant n suicide attempt...????
B*****ds like Dev should be clinically castrated...
Omg the two cutiepies r even more cute... and am already liking anvita...very naughty one...
but why was Maan angry?


Ufff...The women has created lot of suspense behind that suicide.😆

Glad you like it. Thank you so much.

Maan was angry because og Anvita's antics
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you to each and every one who took time to read my story. Feeling overwhelmed seeing your positive response.



Teaser for part 3'


Person1 on phone call" Ha , Geet is fully trapped in my love. As we planned. She feels I am here true love. She doesnt know she has no escape. Maine tumhare mama se baat kiya "

Person2: Wo mera mama nahi hai😡, Chal, main phone rakhta hu. Be Careful, 5 saal se plan kiya hain hum sab.

They end the conversation.


Person 2 to his father. Papa hum jaisa socha waisa he hogaye. Ek baar shaadi honede, ...

His father nodded. But there is some who had heard about them with out their notice and ...gonna play important role in saving geet.

phew... long teaser. Socho...socho... 😆 😈

Geet intro tomorrow...
Edited by svani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part it was payal who jumpd 😲
nd rahul was d one who saw her 😊
2 devils r so cute bt maan simply shout on dem 😡
anvita ko pyaal hogaya 😲 😆
nice teaser geet is in trouble nd smbody heard it nd ill save her 😊
waitng 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: svani



Ufff...The women has created lot of suspense behind that suicide.😆

Glad you like it. Thank you so much.

Maan was angry because og Anvita's antics


oh and I thght pata nahi kya hogaya jo achanak gussa hogaya bechari naughty pe...
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Posted: 10 years ago
love it
the girl iis payal thank god muj ko laga geet hai
waitng for more

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtypie

Nice part it was payal who jumpd 😲
nd rahul was d one who saw her 😊
2 devils r so cute bt maan simply shout on dem 😡
anvita ko pyaal hogaya 😲 😆
nice teaser geet is in trouble nd smbody heard it nd ill save her 😊
waitng 4 d nxt part


😛 Thankyou pie.

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