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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
welcome bacy yaar..very nice pro..cant wait for update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Nice beginning!

I can understand Maan's point of view but I wish he was not so mean and heartless.

I like this characterization of Geet. She seems very strong and I am sure she must be very capable of taking care of herself. Someone who is independent.

I am sure Maan thinks by marrying Geet, he will have to 'take care' of her all the time.

Looking forward to more. Good luck.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
congrats for the new story...lovely prolouge and wow love this strong geet...and her love for maan...she wants to see him happy so she left from there...
continue soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
amazing prologue
waiting for d update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Congrats for new story
Interest start
B'coss of small mistake at childhood geet lost her eye site b'coss of maan and his mother blaming him for his mistake. Now she wants him to marry her which he refused.
Waiting for first part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How did he cause her to lose her eyesight
So he loves Sam
But his mother knows that she isn't right for him
But maan doesn't wanna marry geet
He thinks that it will ruin his life
Seems marrying Sam will do the same
Hmmm what's maan gonna do now
Hope nothing to geet
Well am glad geet is sensible
She could tell that forcing maan to marry her would give her nothing. But heart ache
So she set him free
That was some rejection
But it seems geet is made of sterner stuff
And that am glad of
Cause hate weak geet man
But she is anything. But week
Look forward to it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanx to all who liked and commented on the prologue. Enjoy this new chapter and don't forget to drop your likes/comments dearies.

Chap-1

'That's it maan,that's it.Yes you have done better.It was hard but you did good and it was for the good. For her good only. At least in the long run she won't hate me . Instead she can hate me now. I am all for it,I won't be able to see that disgust in her eyes for me that I witness daily.Ohhh who am I kidding? She surely hates me already and I have just added more to it. Only for her safety.I know I am a cursed man an ugly beast whom nobody can love damn it,who cares nobody can look at me without feeling any disgust and I know , I am the sole reason of this. Yet,I am content that accident years back not only took away geet's eyes but also caused me immense pain. I have been punished too for my misdeeds'taking of his clothes one by one maan stared at his face a side which was completely marred by ugly scars till it covered half of his chest and back how can he drop this ugly side on his beautiful innocent geet.No,never its not that he couldn't get back to his normal self there was a chance of plastic surgery, but he declined it and never took it , only because he wanted to bear the punishment for himself forever, though it didn't helped him in decreasing his guilt for what happened years ago.

'The sight he could very well remember as they were playing in their small wooden playhouse,she loved it always. Infact she had always loved nature in every form and same was with him,that's what got them connected in the first place.His one mistake of lightning the cave with few candles made him loose her forever. The fire burnt it,but how could he let her get hurt in fire, so the most normal thing he could understand to save her was to push her from the tree house and that was his biggest mistake,which made her loose her eyesight forever. He could never forgive himself for this but for one thing he was glad he got burnt instead. She was not leaving her side, stupid girl wanted to get die with him,but how could he have let her die,when she is was,is and will be the sole reason for his existence. He could never do that,heck it he could never dream about it at all. So he hurt her only to save her at that time and also today he did the same, he had hurted her once again,only to save her from him. And he had to thank sameera also who played along, she did it for him as a colleague. His thoughts went back to geet again, her innocent eyes,her beautiful face,her charming smile. She was beautiful as a child and she is perfection personified as a young maiden . Unknown to her,he had already witnessed the change from her childhood to her young adulthood days,from afar and once again he is going to do that today.'

'He got dressed in his black suit,with a muffler around his and a pair of pure black sunglasses to cover his hideous scars as much as possible and went out to follow her trail to hoshiyarpur as always. '

'Maan,why are you going to hoshiyarpur?'his mother's voice echoed in his ears.

'You know very well mother.' He replied back nonchalantly.

'If you love her so much,then marry her maan.I did whatever you told me,but now its enough maan . I can't act more. Why are you punishing yourself and her for that mishap,which was simply unintentional. You know she loves you and she doesn't blame you at all. Why not you go and tell her,that it not only caused her pain of a lifetime but you are also suffering from its consequences my son. Why?' Her eyes held the pleading.

'That's not gonna happen mother,never I won't destroy her life with my curse.And she is well enough without me. Her life would be safe without me and I am not letting it change for anything. In fact, I have got some good news finally which will bring light into her dark world and will fill it with beautiful colours once again . Finally my geet would be able to see the world in all its glory.' His eyes twinkled thinking about her eyesight.

'And what about you maan?The scars which could have been treated years back have been left untreated,what about them?'she dared to answer her.

'They will remain as a reminder for me till eternity to remain aloof from my geet for her safety and moreover the time of treatment has passed. Infact they will be leaving the scars in the same manner as ever and frankly I don't care about myself. My only priority is geet's safety and for that I am leaving mom.Please don't bother.' With these parting words he left leaving the lady in painful sobs.

'Its insanity,what kind of love is this which ruthlessly rejects the other soulmate for the wellbeing and safety, and on the other hand leaves the other mate with a piercing unbearable pain for the entire life.'

'No ways maan,enough is enough I am not gonna allow you to destroy both of your lives because of your silly notion. Its time for geet to know the truth. And I am not sorry maan for breaking your vow. She has to know the truth now.' With a new found determination savitri made her way to hoshiyarpur.

'The trio started their journey on different levels,with different objectives,and time will tell who succeeds and gets to the horizon of truth.'


So dearies this is next upd. Hope you will love it too.
And this part will make the picture more clear for you to understand.
Do drop your likes/comments and bookmark the thread.
The updates would be short as I am typing from my mob. and also due to my schedule too,hope you will understand.
T.c.dearies.
Xoxo.
Edited by _Ms.Foxy.Angel_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
hate u maan...hw could u be sooo heartless...

interesting prologue...

loved it very much...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
congrats on the new story!!!!!!
interesting prologue
continue soon!!!!!!!!
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#20
nice prologue.waiting to read this story.

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