MG (FF) ~My love for you~...pt 17 updating on IF

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: fariya20
awesome start
very nice so maan is trustee of geet college
why geet turned pale after meet with maan
is nai kuch karbar ki kya???????

For that you need to read this ss...will explain as the story grow

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: fariya20
n me first yahooo did i came between ur update ???

nope..i like that u comment

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Neer Kataria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: tabby999
omg!!!
neeju turned writer ..thats pretty cool !!!!

congrats ...👏👏

interesting concept
waiting for update ...

thank you

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: tabby999

nice update neeju
but plz don't use so many colors ..
and update a little long!!

hi tabby ...i you colors to make it clear about speaker

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Nice start😊
So maan all set to woo his love!
Lahe raho maan😉
Waiting for the next!

tkx...

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Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Loved the prologue and chapter 1

maan meets geet in the office

does geet love maan or someone else

please update soon and pm me

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Sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

awesome start..!!

congratulations on ur new story...dear!!

I loved the prologue n 1st chapter..continue soon!!

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

beautiful surprise dear

and well done

so msk on mission geet 👏👏👏

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

chapter 2

"i love you baby" said Mr. handa getting little emotion... "i know papa" geet said and go toward mr. handa and hug him..."i love you to papa"...."hmm" mr handa said and kiss her forehead...

geet come out of office and was moving toward her car when suddenly maan pull her pull her toward his car which he have parked in far corner... "maan koyee dekhlega" maan don't listen and make her sit in the back seat and get in...

"so now you don't know me hmm" said maan giving string look...geet roll her eyes ..."its not like that i can't tell papa about us" said geet defending herself...

"can you plz give me one reason why you don't want me to tell anyone about our love relation...you even stop me from telling about us to my family"said maan..."you are starting again maan" said geet lazily..."seriously maan why are you so much eager to tell your family?"...ask geet..."because i love you geet" said maan with his love filled voice...

"yaa yaa i know you love me and i love you too... but where this boring family come in between?" ask geet...maan pull geet on his lap..."i need to tell this so that this so called boring family make us marry"... geet shockingly turn and said "marriage ? but i don't want to marry you"..."you don't want to marry me?" asked Maan give geet daring look ...

geet get nervous and said "nhi...nhi .. i mean off course i want to marry you who else will i marry but you know i am studying and we can get married after my studies" ...geet take deep breathe and mentally telling herself chloo bachgyee..."i know how much you love you study or jo speed hai tumari study ke fir hogye hamari shaadi" said maan knowing how much she hate studies...geet shot him angry grace..."what?" said maan ..." did i said anything wrong" ...

"you don't pay any attention in class and never did your worksheet... i have to either do your work or stop your reports filled will 5 stars from getting in the hands of your family" said maan shaking his head..."stop tauting me ok "said geet ..."or vessi bhi i had told you i don't like study" said geet keep her head on his broad shoulders...

"so why don't you just leave it jaan" said maan kissing he forehead ..."jaan i promise you nobody will say anything to you,plz let me tell my family so they can ask for your hand from your family" said maan...geet jump and "no way maan...i agree i don't like studies but i loovveee my college life" said geet giving maan her broad smile...even maan smile give her kiss on her both cheeks...

"ok ok now let to go "said geet suddenly getting conscious about their surrounding ..."if some one notice and tell papa then he will kill me "said geet..."no he will not your papa loves you sweetheart"said maan ..."mujhe pta hai".said geet ... "vassi bhi tumhe kya pta kessi look dyerhee thee mujhe jassee onhee sab pta hai humari baree main" said geet getting out of maan's hold...

she comes out of maan's car and go towards her car and droved away...but maan is sitting same place he was thinking about geet's words and he know very well what she means ...geet think that maan don't know anything but she is forget he is business man and that too a top position business man...if he can handle such big company with thousands of people working under him...how will he not know about his lady love...the lady love which can easily fool people because of her innocent looks ...but maan know very well his lady love is combination innocent looks and devil mind...my innocent devil said maan to himself with smile...and droved away.

PS. plz do tell me if you want any changes in my writing style

tabby i don't add any colors...do tell if i need to change anything else

thanks a lot readers 😃😃

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Sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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