MG (FF) ~My love for you~...pt 17 updating on IF

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Index

N updates status in title pleace...

Ohoo tho geet trying to act smart!

But hum bhi Maan Singh Khurana aise hi nahi h😆

Waiting for the next!

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Index
N updates status in title pleace...
Ohoo tho geet trying to act smart!
But hum bhi Maan Singh Khurana aise hi nahi h😆
Waiting for the next!

😆 you need to teach me lot ...let ask how to change it

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Neeju

😆 you need to teach me lot ...let ask how to change it

Ab u didn't leave space for Index ao prologue k neche index banado...

Part n page no.😊

Wow tho hum teacher bhi bangaye...

Dhanyavad!😛😆

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

nice part maan knws abt geet's mind bt is ready 2 make her fall 4 him

waitng 4 d nxt part😃

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Wow..congo 4 ur first story..
It sounds really interesting..
Awesme concept
lets see how vl maan make her fall for himself..

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Ab u didn't leave space for Index ao prologue k neche index banado...
Part n page no.😊
Wow tho hum teacher bhi bangaye...
Dhanyavad!😛😆

😆 keep on teaching me...i have edit chapter 1 so if you want u can read it...still if u want any change in my writing style do tell me

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

hi neeju

the update was perfect with all spaces and black ..

the update was mast ..

geet is too devil ..she loves maan but want to hide ..she even don't want to marry him ..totally fooling maan ..but she is underestimating him ..i am sure msk will plan something ..

want to know how maneet fell in love and why geet want to hide her relation with him ..

thanks for update

waiting for next