MG OS- HUM TUM..AUR AYAN!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyyaaa m back again with an OS.well the response I have got for ayan ( ON THE DANCE FLOOR )...is simply amazing so..i thought about this os.!!

Enjoy and give me ur feedback..

Okay..and special thanks to my neighbour he helped me a lot...uski k lappy se m updating mine crashed!!

So...Aki..thank (he is not on forums still.. :P)

HUM TUM AUR ...AYAN!!!!!

Ayan..Ayan baby have milk chalo... Geet called 6yr old ayan who was busy drawing.
Ayan saw geet ..and tried to run but she caught him. He made a yucky face and shook his head.

No..baby have this its written it the list which ur mumma gave him chalo.. she held the glass near his lips and made him drink milk.

Dats like a good boy ..she smiled and kissed his cheek wiping his lips with the tissue.

Ayan smiled brightly and hugged her through waist.

Geet did u see my file..i had kept it on the table last night.. Maan came in the room. He ignored ayan and moved to geet . ayan also ignored him royally.

Maan hold this..ill search it.. Geet said handling him the empty glass. Maan took the glass and impatiently waited for her to search his file.

She searched the whole room but couldn't find it...Finally she gave up

Maan I think u must have kept it in office..coz pure ghar mai..apki file nahi mili

Geet I remember it clearly ki mai..file kal raat ko ghar laya tha u hold his..ill search again. She sighed and took the glass ..and left for kitchen.

Maan again searched his bedroom basically whole mansion and then came back to study.

Maine yehi toh raki ti...where the hell is my file .

Ayan was sitting on the sofa with legs criss cross. Maan came to the table next to the sofa..ayan saw maan and glared him. Maan too glared him and continued his search. His eyes fell on the piece of paper ayan was using..His eyes widen...IT was his file

Ayan...what the hell...Its my file he snatched the file from him angrily .

Dats mine... ayan whined and he hit him with small fists.All the pages wer filled with his idiotic drawing's. He prayed for patience whenever ayan was there. But now he was completely pissed off. Massii..maaa masiii maaa ayan's loud cry made geet run back in the room.

Ayan ran to her and embraced her sniffing.

Maan rolled his eyes at his drama. This is happening from last 5 days. Ayan was meera's son. She was geet's long lost frnd whom she met last month .Geet meera yash and maan alaong with ayan started going out for dinners. Maan dint had any issues with ayan but..ayan was disliked maan coz he used to stick with geet always. Hence he purposely irked maan and troubled him a lot. 3 days ago ayan came to stay with them since meera and yash had to leave for an urgent tour. And geet being so fond of ayan just said yes before discussing this with her husband. Since then his life is been like hell..!!

Her days would start with ayan and nights to ended with him. Yes she slept with ayan in their room leaving maan alone in guest room. They played together ate together..this was all fine. But she dint even spends nights with him...dat was the biggest problems. He wasn't even allowed to kiss his won wife dammit.she loved ayan..more than her husband .

Maan why did u yell at ayan? Bacho k sath kaise behave karna hai..u don't ven knw this much? She marched angrily to maan keeping her hands on waist.

Geet this is my file..on which he has made some awesome designs...look at this he gritted this teeth...and pointed at his file

Ayan cried more loudly. Big fat tears slid down his chubby cheeks..

Massi..maa i..dint knw dat.

Geet gave maan a disgusting look and went on her knees hugging ayan.. Its okhay..baby I knw u dint knw..it was an important file..But some people should understand that..

Maan made o shape face..geet how was it my fault he asked

Maan u should knw..dat since we r leaving with ayan..uu have to be responsible a bit..at least sometime behave like an adult maan . she scolded him..

Aree...but geeet its wasn't..my..fault this ayan

Ayan.. cried ..again..

Shoo..maan don't blame the boy ..jab se he has come...u r behaving like a kid urself..and glared him picking up ayan in her arms .

Geet listen to..me maan said following her

Aree..geet ..listen but she simply shut the door on his face.

Maan made a cute angry face and cursed himself for scaring the boy. Poor maan he dint even knw that ayan was faking.

Next day ..geet ignored him and focusses all her attention on ayan. Maan felt soo sad..she dint even glance him once. He left office hardheartedly. Next few days maan spend most of his time in office. Geet dint bother first but then later on she got genuinely worried for maan . But she couldn't neglect ayan too..she missed maan. Maan even left for pune for 3 days without even informing geet. Geet felt so..bad dat he dint even inform her.

Next day meera and yash arrived to take ayan. Meera noticed geet..as was all depressed and gloomy. She dint even smiled properly. She took geet to a room and asked her the reason. After lot of cajoling she explained what happened.

Tears gathered in her eyes while meera just ..smiled at her

Geet..maan was just jealous of ayan..

What?no meer he was angry after we fought and dats y left without informing me.. she sniffed

No geet meera shook her head..she was not angry he avoided u..so that u both dint get into another fight

He just wanted to have ur time..all those days u just showered ur love on ayan..and maan wanted u for all himself..usse bhi tumhara attention chayie tha

Geet looked her confusingly.

Dats y he left quietly he dint bother u.. meera tried making her understand

Geet recollected everything and shrieked in surprise...Omg isliye who chale gaye..meera ..and made a baby face...mera cutie pie..maan n maine unhe ..avoid kiya

M sooorry geet yeh ..sab ayan k wajah se

Nahi meera he is sucha a sweet boy..its all my fault.. she assured meera

Ohhh. Waise maan .cutie pie haa..meera smiled and teased her.

Meera geet blushed.

Afrer a while yash and meera took their leave.. GEet called maan but he dint answer. She called up adi to inquired about his homecoming. He informed her that he will come today by 9.She thanked him and cut the call.

So..i have 3 hrs well...maan come home fast..i m waiting desperately for u... and smiled widely.

Maan came home around 10-15. I hope they must have been asleep by now....he thought. He unlocked the door and stepped inside. Dim lights wer on..in the living room. He breath out in relief. So gaye hai.

As he moved towards guest room when he heard a tingling sound. May be payal..

He turned towards the source and found one. He shook his head and moved a step..ahead when he again heard a sound..and it was coming from their room

Is time par kaun hoga. He decided to check in..

He slightly opened the door and and came inside.He turned to look at bed..and got shock. There was no one...no ayan no geet.

Suddenly two air of hands grabbed him from behind.. he held her hands...off course he could recognize them ..any time. Geet he said and smiled softly

Geet blushed...and pressed herself more to him and nodded.

Geet what r u doing..ayan dekh lega..where is ayan btw he asked trying to remove her hands off his torso..but she tighten them.

Maan..m soo sorry maan.. He felt his back getting wet.

Geeet ..he panicked and turned to face her...only to see tears in her eyes..

He cupped her face..mishty kya hua..y r u crying..he wiped her tears. Each her tear pierced thousand needles on his heart. He stared down in pain. She embraced him..and kept crying. Geeet..he reciprocated her hug still wondering what happened. He was soo..tensed to see her crying..o god even ayan is not here what happened..geet he parted her and cradled her cheek..Mishty plz..

M,...very bad na maan mai..ek achi wife nahi hu..she said with hiccups..

Nahi geet..who said this..meri mishty world nahi..universe ki sabse best wife hai..

She gazed his eyes with were sincere and honest as he said with all his love.

She dipped her eyes with more tears...feeling horrible

Mishty don't cry plz...i ..i just cant take it he said tightening his hold on her face

Maine..ayan ...k yaha ane se aapko..time hi nahi diya m soo...soory maan more tears fell form his hazels.

He looked her confusingly. He understood ...her state.. she was feeling miserable for him thinking she avoided him. Finally she realized ...but it wasn't her mistake..he was behaving childishly.

Nahi..misght mai..hi bacho jaise behave kar raha tha.. he kissed her forehead. Meri mishty kabhi galat nahi ho skati...samjhi

Par..maa he pressed a finger on her plum lips to quiten her.

Ayan..chala gaya it seems he asked her with a nuaghty glint in his eyes

She blushed n nodded..HE smiled and pulled her closer..Jaan don't blush ..u knw ur blush just makes me go crazy and feel like..

He shifted close to her ears...She placed her hand on his chest to support herself. I feel like eating u up..

She shuddered slightly as he kissed her earlobe. He ran his tongue from...sensitive spot behind her ear to her cheeks and bit them.

Hmmm she moaned...She clutched his shirt. He held her hand and tucked her hair behind..grazing her cheek. She felt so shy..It wasn't the first time but still...she felt so mushy mushy just with the thought.

He lifted her up in his arms. She looked him surprised.

He smiled at her..jaan this wasn't that comfortable..i thought to eat u up..in bed that's more comfy u see..he said naughtily

She blushed hard and hide her face in crook of her neck.

THE END

This was very short os...I hope u guys liked it!

Love

Sweta


MY MANEET PARADISE
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so cute os...maan also behaving childish with maan but after getting some scolding from geet coz of ayan fakeness he left for his meeting out of town...meera made geet understood and geet asked for sorry...finally maaneet lovey dovey moments
Edited by preeti555 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os.poor maan aayan se jealous hai.meera ne geet ki dimaag ki batti jala diya😆
Edited by priya111111 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice os baby bt dis time i didnt like ayan to be honest🤢
bechara maan coz ayan geet avoided him 😭
maan went away 3 days dat time geet's tube light burned dat also by listenng meera's wrds😆
maan is so sweet he didnt hear anything against his mishty bt kept praising her😳
finally maan nd his mishty got sm time 4 demselves☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsme os..loved the way maan first irritd then understand..loved meera..maan ka samjhaofy to mishty and naughty naughty..awsme..hope u wl gv more os like this in future too
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!! that was brilliant...loved each of the characters specially meera
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh Ayan is such a mastikor bacha...bechare maan ka jina haram kar diya tha...poor maan...
lovly cute OS...
do write more ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute OS
aww maan is J
wo bhi ek bache se
ho bhi sakta h jb tumhari biwi tumse jyada kisi aur ko attention de to acha bhala insaan J ho jaye
chahe wo koi bacha hi kyun na ho
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊Such a sweet os😛.
loved it
maan wants geet attention for himself only.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kya baat h swetoo
U seem to be on a flow ...
No complaints though😃
Anything regarding maaneet is most welcome😳

Cute os by the way😊

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