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Posted: 10 years ago
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I see what you did here.
A reply to the reply.👏
Ha! Ha! Ha!!
Letters form parents. Oh boy!! Damn sneaky child.
You were not supposed to read those.
Umm!! No censored stuff you came across child?😆

Please carry on with this Jugalbandi.
P.S Is the writer the mother or the daughter I wonder😉
Perhaps she plays both roles alternately.
I see every woman in these two women.
The mom and the daughter😊

P.S Totally relate to the my dad is an awesome man feeling and giving the husband a lecture every so often about it😆

But what I would love to see now is how Maan Singh Khurana feels about the man Sameer who is his daughter's soulmate.

After Sameer's letter I want to see Maan's letter😃




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok let me get personal here- once upon a time i told my elder sister i want my husband like Papa. her straight away question was have u seen mumma papa together as husband wife. u just saw them as ur mumma papa who are perfect people.
it really knocked some sense into me becoz that's exactly i was doing just seeing them as mumma papa.

we dont look as them as couple right? They are just mumma-papa for us. bear my rambling.

seeing parents as a couple- i do this thing occasionally. it does give me some pleasant surprise.

i loved all three write. can we have more replies- May be Geet's feeling after marriage. (Greedy Me 😛). u can't blame me. in two days three updates is something we have forgotten since muskan di went on sabbatical. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dang!!!
Damn YOU gals!!

what on earth you people are doing?? 😡

U wanna twist my gut and wrench it with senseless feelings and then hold it and nourish it tenderly with a warmth that flips around in the pit of my stomach!!

there is this gal who made me think twice about my feelings and who poured almost all the beta females thoughts who inturn will worship YOU for this...
and where are this gal

AVI 😡 who not only dares to write something on delicate precious words but makes it almost impossible to hate her !!!

damn you avi.. what was that supposed to mean... That husband of hers who not only tenderly loves her.. but..

mannn what have you done to me.. i lost all my senses!!

Damn damn damn you guys!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Now who is taking Sameer's role and replying? *Grinning looking at Nisha Di*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Dang!!!

Damn YOU gals!!

what on earth you people are doing?? 😡

U wanna twist my gut and wrench it with senseless feelings and then hold it and nourish it tenderly with a warmth that flips around in the pit of my stomach!!

there is this gal who made me think twice about my feelings and who poured almost all the beta females thoughts who inturn will worship YOU for this...
and where are this gal

AVI 😡 who not only dares to write something on delicate precious words but makes it almost impossible to hate her !!!

damn you avi.. what was that supposed to mean... That husband of hers who not only tenderly loves her.. but..

mannn what have you done to me.. i lost all my senses!!

Damn damn damn you guys!!

😆

I couldn't have expressed it better Kittu. You gave words to my feelings.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Now who is taking Sameer's role and replying? *Grinning looking at Nisha Di*

Can't possibly write Sameer,
He is dead in my story🤣
Sorry. But I just couldn't resist😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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3rd letter - yes. It was unexpected reply..from daughter to her lover...she first time saw them as husband-wife instead of mummy-papa...
Now her expectations increased from sameer...will he beat her new expectations...?
Want to know sameer's reply.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Susegad

The lump in my throat keeps threatening to choke me as I read this jugalbandi between two authors par excelence.


I don't think I have ever in my life read such profound words as I have right here on this thread.Kitna kuch kehna hain. But words are impossible to express what I am feeling as I read Shikha's, almost challenge should I say?

I had so much I wanted to say after I read the OS. My first instinct was just like your's Avi. This OS was screaming for a reply,but my mind was too chaotic and I really had no words to convey what I felt after reading what was written.
And I ended up saying nothing.

She threw the gauntlet and it was screaming for a reply.
And Avi of all the people, you chose to pick it up. And then, you caressed the challenge, nurtured it, pampered it, soothed it and even the challenge did not know when it curled up and surrendered itself to all the love showered on it.

The deep insecurity of a young unmarried woman as she faces the cruel world that has taught her to focus on all the wrong things about herself. She is after all not to be blamed. After all racist products like fair and lovely( I want to kill the idiot who came up with that name😡), today's unrealistic and unhealthy obsession with size zero. These are just few of the problems that give rise to the insecurities.

And then there is the deep security of a well loved woman.

A husband who is a hero in his own right. He may not a six packed muscle ki dukan, but who wants a narcissistic self glorifying, preening peacock anyway.

Flying duppatas are a fire hazard and bloody impractical things if you ask me.

A loving man who doesn't go all overprotective and jealous on his wife coz he knows how much she values her freedom and is ultimately secure in her love for him.

He knows how to balance the two opposite alphabets, a.k.a the two opposite forces in his life.
The W and the M.😆
His Wife and his Mother.

To love at the beginning is not enough. To keep growing together and loving the person who emerges as the years pass by is more important.



I have so much more that I want to say, but let me stop here for now.
I will definitely come back and add some more thoughts here.

Absolutely wonderful penmanship Shikha and Avi.👏









do you know what I love You!!

i so love you gals .. i just wanna hug u in real and let u know ..how special you are to me... sometimes words betray us... or atleast might not convery at this moment what am i feeling for u.

You 4... for now you 3..

Maggie... i just wanna whack you for being such humanly human 😡

Pray, tell me why are you still here darling.. i thought you are on the side of angels who knows what to do with people and their emotional silly heart!!

Avi .. you showed your true colors darling... i was waiting for such kind of emotion from you for ages..and here it is.. u just ripped my soul .. and yes here i am with my bare heart and the raw emotions ..

Nisha ji.. you are just as usual marvelous darling ..

guys.. i dont even know what to say.. that letter an dnow its reply..
Phew!!

"I no longer believed in the idea of soul mates, or love at first sight. But I was beginning to believe that a very few times in your life, if you were lucky, you might meet someone who was exactly right for you. Not because he was perfect, or because you were, but because your combined flaws were arranged in a way that allowed two separate beings to hinge together."

Maggie and Avi - "Your Heart knows things that Your Mind cant Explain"

can i just rest my case here.. .. if i prolong..i might blabber something..a nd then when i look back all my rambles look stupid.. and might spoil the beauty of the letters

its totally untouched.. and i mean it..

"Writing is something you do alone. Its a profession for introverts who want to tell you a story but dont want to make eye contact while doing it"

Now i believe when someone said "One must be little crazy to write a good novel"

Its true in your case.. you guys are fantastic Four with crazy mindset and witty nature!!

"Some stories you read, some you enjoy... but some stories just swallow up Heart And Soul"!!! this is how im feeling right at this moment!!

"A writer is simply a photographer of thoughts"

Agnes - par excellence .. i bow you.. i bow u lady ..its my honor to meet you guys,,and made me feel and think twice!!

"The shortest distance between two people is a Smile"

If only good things lasted forever ...then you would be appreciated how Precious you were !!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Susegad

😆

I couldn't have expressed it better Kittu. You gave words to my feelings.😛


Well..i dont know about that..but u always stole my words..
and im glad its you who stole my words... present it in a beautiful way

im super mad at you gals... 😡
im just weeping here nisha ji 😭 .. not even for a moment thought it wasn't me ...
My my my...

Phew!! im exhausted... i give up... u guys throw such things at us.. and we hopelessly dear it deeply!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Kittu
"There is an innocence in admiration: it occurs in one who has not yet realized that they might one day be admired." Friedrich Nietzsche

I do believe this applies to you sweetheart😃😃

You praise ever so lavishly and innocently and that is what I admire about you.
There is somebody else just like you in her praises and i was just telling her today that it is the cleanliness inside her that makes her look at others in wonder and admiration.
I will say the same to you sweetheart😳
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