Words, promises and silences(Changing times-P 14) - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

119

Views

16.8k

Users

31

Likes

508

Frequent Posters

893213 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Oh my!
Sameer and Naina
doing the happy dance
This was the icing on the cake after the superb intro to their story
You know I am missing Shinchan girl Palin so much today
It was just fun to be on the periphery when you, her and Nisha were chatting
And also I did Write a small something for her One time too.. in my previous Life😆
Having any other thoughts today?
anything?😆
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz


do you know what I love You!!

i so love you gals .. i just wanna hug u in real and let u know ..how special you are to me... sometimes words betray us... or atleast might not convery at this moment what am i feeling for u.

You 4... for now you 3..

Maggie... i just wanna whack you for being such humanly human 😡

Pray, tell me why are you still here darling.. i thought you are on the side of angels who knows what to do with people and their emotional silly heart!!

Avi .. you showed your true colors darling... i was waiting for such kind of emotion from you for ages..and here it is.. u just ripped my soul .. and yes here i am with my bare heart and the raw emotions ..

Nisha ji.. you are just as usual marvelous darling ..

guys.. i dont even know what to say.. that letter an dnow its reply..
Phew!!

"I no longer believed in the idea of soul mates, or love at first sight. But I was beginning to believe that a very few times in your life, if you were lucky, you might meet someone who was exactly right for you. Not because he was perfect, or because you were, but because your combined flaws were arranged in a way that allowed two separate beings to hinge together."

Maggie and Avi - "Your Heart knows things that Your Mind cant Explain"

can i just rest my case here.. .. if i prolong..i might blabber something..a nd then when i look back all my rambles look stupid.. and might spoil the beauty of the letters

its totally untouched.. and i mean it..

"Writing is something you do alone. Its a profession for introverts who want to tell you a story but dont want to make eye contact while doing it"

Now i believe when someone said "One must be little crazy to write a good novel"

Its true in your case.. you guys are fantastic Four with crazy mindset and witty nature!!

"Some stories you read, some you enjoy... but some stories just swallow up Heart And Soul"!!! this is how im feeling right at this moment!!

"A writer is simply a photographer of thoughts"

Agnes - par excellence .. i bow you.. i bow u lady ..its my honor to meet you guys,,and made me feel and think twice!!

"The shortest distance between two people is a Smile"

If only good things lasted forever ...then you would be appreciated how Precious you were !!



@underlined: That is so me..😆

Kittu... luv u 2 🤗

loved all the quotes and the over the top praise ..😆

Shamelessly enjoying it😆
Clairvoyant20 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#53
The replies were so 😭 touching . I really cried yaar so beautiful ❤️ Its like soothing balm to her fears , complains , misty eyes that she might have had while writing 😭 The subtle humor in equalizing the pros cons of their not-so perfect marriage tugs at heart . I just love "the husband"so much right now 😆
They face the world with a smile abide to norms and steal a moment to themselves still . I guess after the leap of faith taken by us we learn to deal with the concept of "marriage" as we live through it . The dread & unnerving feel mostly coz its an unknown area where we fear somewhere we shall lose ourselves & merely be a DIL or mother or wife . I feel that & its scary . Coming back to replies I just loved I don't know exactly what but she has finally found her soul mate who has healed her broken self with a "band-aid of understanding"👏this was amazing & I am still feeling overwhelmed its such a beautiful piece , both parts 👏
Clairvoyant20 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#54
The daughter's letter I wish yeh silsila chalta rahe :') I m in tears I think its just the goodness & such endearing feel the daughter reads the notes . Haven't come across anything so beautiful & yeah even though there is nothing depressing I am shedding tears *happy tears*
Just I got no words you guys are brilliant👏

I seriously wishes I could write more but just 👏 its a treat to read this😊
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: fantasy..4me

TO dqno1


OMG what a sync u have with Shikha dee.
the way u answered each and every fear of her is amazing .

👏 for u .


Thank you. I am Avi. Glad you liked it😃

Fear comes from not knowing.
It is easier to guide when you have travelled the path.
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
SheenGcian thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Edited my Comment for First letter n Reply on Pg of Avi's Reply 😳
sanghita0000 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#57
WOW!! just loved husbands p.o.v...it was so beautiful...👏
fantasy..4me thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: dqno1



Thank you. I am Avi. Glad you liked it😃

Fear comes from not knowing.
It is easier to guide when you have travelled the path.



Hello Dee m Nupur.
I loved every part of this story written by u &Shikha Dee.
Looking forward to more OS like this.
Edited by fantasy..4me - 10 years ago
punam2712 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Susegad

The lump in my throat keeps threatening to choke me as I read this jugalbandi between two authors par excelence.


I don't think I have ever in my life read such profound words as I have right here on this thread.Kitna kuch kehna hain. But words are impossible to express what I am feeling as I read Shikha's, almost challenge should I say?

I had so much I wanted to say after I read the OS. My first instinct was just like your's Avi. This OS was screaming for a reply,but my mind was too chaotic and I really had no words to convey what I felt after reading what was written.
And I ended up saying nothing.

She threw the gauntlet and it was screaming for a reply.
And Avi of all the people, you chose to pick it up. And then, you caressed the challenge, nurtured it, pampered it, soothed it and even the challenge did not know when it curled up and surrendered itself to all the love showered on it.

The deep insecurity of a young unmarried woman as she faces the cruel world that has taught her to focus on all the wrong things about herself. She is after all not to be blamed. After all racist products like fair and lovely( I want to kill the idiot who came up with that name😡), today's unrealistic and unhealthy obsession with size zero. These are just few of the problems that give rise to the insecurities.

And then there is the deep security of a well loved woman.

A husband who is a hero in his own right. He may not a six packed muscle ki dukan, but who wants a narcissistic self glorifying, preening peacock anyway.

Flying duppatas are a fire hazard and bloody impractical things if you ask me.

A loving man who doesn't go all overprotective and jealous on his wife coz he knows how much she values her freedom and is ultimately secure in her love for him.

He knows how to balance the two opposite alphabets, a.k.a the two opposite forces in his life.
The W and the M.😆
His Wife and his Mother.

To love at the beginning is not enough. To keep growing together and loving the person who emerges as the years pass by is more important.



I have so much more that I want to say, but let me stop here for now.
I will definitely come back and add some more thoughts here.

Absolutely wonderful penmanship Shikha and Avi.👏









I THINK THIS SAYS IT ALL
NO OTHER WORDS ARE NEEDED

SHIKHA AND AVI - WONDERFUL WORK

BUT WILL SAMEER REPLY TO THE CHALLENGE
ChandlerBing thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: dqno1

Oh my!

Sameer and Naina
doing the happy dance
This was the icing on the cake after the superb intro to their story
You know I am missing Shinchan girl Palin so much today
It was just fun to be on the periphery when you, her and Nisha were chatting
And also I did Write a small something for her One time too.. in my previous Life😆
Having any other thoughts today?
anything?😆

El Oh El! 😆
I absolutely adore you if you don't know that already.
With time Life changes but you can't forget that one Love ever is it?
The answer to your question is super soon...

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: WaveTeal

3 years ago

Mortal Promises!#T7! UPDATED Chapter 72 @ Page 32 || 19th Feb 24

Hi everyone , Welcome to the 7TH thread of MORTAL PROMISES! SEVENTH ONE!! it's been long that I've been in hiatus, still not back properly. But...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".