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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update! So Maan loves Geet! Bt he Niddhi?? Geet knws her! bt y did he marry her?? Who is this person> update soon
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Superb update..
but who's dat person who tears maaneet pic..
maaneet talks on msgs were so cute..
love dat line wen maan says abt vikas dat ander ka bhai jaag gya..now he is coming to India dat too wid Ni..ab kya hone wala h..
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lovely update sameera maan is tried of his family chain se sone bhi nahi dete soha scolds him but janab ne phone off kiya tha so that he could avoid them interesting geet ne pehli baar kuch sila jo ki tight tha 🤣 dev saved nandini something cooking between them looks like it ab ye kya naya drama haaye rama is maan married and now the whole sagai is a drama hazam nahi horaha hai divorce shaadi kuch samaj nahi aaraha hai geet learning household chores pata nahi maan shaadi karega bhi ki nahi who is this woman yaar maan ka kya scene hai iske saath and now who is this vikas and piya who geet is cursing so much maan knows vikas I am confused maan kisse pyar karta hai janab ki shaadi hogai hai ya nahi geet se sagai so maan is not interested in geet he is not going back to india and gonna drop the bomb he is married even though he knows geet loves him I don't wanna curse hope he knows what he is doing
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lovely update so why maan is tensed when sagai gayi tell lene he only did court marriage with her and will get divorce omg geet knows this ni person shocking maan and frustrating him to the core he is frustrated as ni was in geets college vikas ko nahi pata interesting jab geet ko pata lagega she is maans wife god bechari ko jhatka lagega so apparently geet has a stalker and he sent them a gift even t nandini geet trusts maan he should atleast tell her everything even if he wants to marry her aliya feeling something for rohail and she is scared loved maaneet convo loved the briefcase moment
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oh god sameera di ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,i m so confused,... last two chapters were like some puzzle and we have to find it... sach kahoon i read all chapters in one go and got so attached with this story and these maannet aur last two chapters mein bahut bada shock laga... feeling tensed ... dont want maan to betray geet... was loving this carefree maan par ab dar lag raha hai geet ke liye...hope evrything goes welll... ek to yeh samaj mein nahi aa raha ki maan loves whom tis ni character or geet???????????????? di update soon aur ye confusion door kar do😭...rest your writing was awesome👏
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Awesome ff... Great story and very well written!!!!
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Pacing around here and there in the terrace, she glanced at a sleepy Nandini on bed through the window and sighed..."Kya karun??" Tension was visible on her face and right now she was shivering badly... Seems like oxygen was less in the air and she could not breath... In this cold whether, droplets of sweat can be easily seen on her forehead... "Yeh kya kar diya meine??" Her heart again skipped a beat...

With a tensed heart she kept walking around the terrace till the Night faded away and the sky started turning lightblue... Though Sun didn't came out but still signs of morning were there...

She jerked up with this sudden vibration of her phone... It was really unexpected to get anyones call at this hour... "Maan!!" She gulped down her saliva seeing her caller ID..
"H...Hello??" She managed to say something with great difficulty...

"Kahan ho tum??" He asked feeling the shiver in her voice...

"Ghar pe..." She almost cried...

"Apne office pohcho... forun!! Aur sambhal k... everything will be fine!" He warned and then consoled her knowing what would be her condition...

"Office?? app..." She was confused...

"Tumhare office mein khara hun!! jaldi ao..." He replied firmly..."Aur haan mein India mein hun kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye..!!" He added a warning...

"Haan!! ABhi i.." She nodded in a yes and wiping away her tears rushed down with her car keys in her hands...


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"Aap yahan???" Geet questioned immediately as she saw him first...
"Wo sab baad mein... filhaal jo garbar ki hai uske baare mein detail mein batao..." He said while folding his arms against his chest...

"Wo..." Geet tried to catch some breath...
"Relax! ander chal k baat karte hain.." He kept his hand on her shoulder in order to give her some support and nodding in a yes she started walking forward towards her cabin where as Maan and Ni followed her quietly...

"So??? garbar kese hui??" He asked as they all reached inside her cabin...

"Bohat bada amount hai yeh... mere sar mein dard tha! ghar jane ki jaldi thi!! time bohat hogaya tha... pata kis tarah ek ghalat digit type hogaya aur saara amount...hhh" Geet shook her head while covering her face with her palms...

"Awesome!!" Ni whispered out slowly while rubbing her forehead...

"Account numbers yaad hain?? jis mein bhej diya??? jis mein bhejna tha???" Ni inquired...
"Tum kya karlo gi yeh sab kuch jaan ke??" Geet was so mad at the moment... Even she was not interested in knowing why Ni was here and what she is doing with Maan... Even Maan didn't bothered to introduce them with eachother...

"Arre... Tum meri itni brilliant Professional Hacker ko challange kar rahi ho??" Maan arched his eyebrows at Geet...

"Computer hacker???" Geet's jaw dropped down...
"Nahi nahi!! mujhe jail jaane ka koi shawk nahi hai!!" Geet shook her head looking at both of them with widen eyes...

"Isske ilaawa aur koi option nahi hai aunty!!! Aur wese bhi... iss sab k baad to shareholders wese bhi tumhe jail ki sair karwa deinge..." Ni shrugged her shoulders making Maan smile which he covered up immediately...

"Tum account numbers do naa yaar..." Maan said in a convincing tone while looking at Geet after which she took a while to think and then gave all the details to Ni...

"Good!!" Ni pressed her lips together and took Geet's chair to work on her desktop... "Ummm..." after sitting down Ni started searching of something in her bag when Maan whistled to gain her attention and taking out a bubble from his coat pocket threw it over which Ni catched smiling at him...

They both were behaving too normal as if it was no Big deal... "Chewing Gum???" Geet was horrified seeing all this which was looking like a crap to her at the moment...

"Haan!! jab tak uss ka mu nahi chalega... dimagh bhi nahi chalega!!" Maan pressed his lips together while taking a hold of Geet's hand... "Tum chalo yahan se... warna usse kaam nahi karne dogi" He dragged her out...

"Betho yahan..." He left her hand after making her sit down on a sofa inside Ranbir's cabin... Whole office was empty at the moment... It was just these three present there..
"Relax!!" He passed her some water to calm her down...
"Soi to nahi hogi poori raat??" He said while sitting down next to her on the sofa...
"Aap kya batein kar rahe hain? mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha hai abhi..." She said in low voice while rubbing her forehead...
"Thodi deir k liye ankhein bund karo... taik lagao! aur so jao!!" He said while folding his arms on his chest whereas she just took a sigh and followed his instruction... She was too tired mentally and now his presence was a soure of relaxation for her which made he go in her dreamland in no time...

"So gai!!" He smiled at her and slowly walked out of the cabin towards Ni to see what is she doing...

"Baat bani kuch??" He asked taking a chair opposite to her...

"Tch!! tight security hai yaar..." Ni made a face.. "Thoda time lagay gaa!! lekin kaam ho jayega!" She spoke out in a confident manner with her eyes still on the computer screen...

"Geet kahan hai??" Ni asked after a while...

"So gai!!" He replied while playing with the paper weight...

"Bechari!! jaan nikal gai hogi uski..." Ni shook her head lightly...

"Bakiyun ki nikalne se bacha lo..." He joked...
"Hehehehe!!" Ni giggled.. "Acha ab mujhe kaam karne do.." She declared that his presence was disturbing her and so he again got up and left the room...





"Morning!" She saw him smiling and waving at her as she woke up after an hour.. He was sitting right next to her with a color puzzul box in his hands which he was busy in twisting and turning to set it right...

"Wo..." Geet got straight as she gain her concious fully and realised in what mess she is...
"Wo upset se set hogaya hai!! So chill.. Have some coffee!!" He pushed a coffee mug lightly on the table towards her...

"Oh God!!" Feeling relaxed, she sighed...

"Mujhe full confidence tha Ni pe!! and she did it!!" He smiled at her...

"Yeh Ni Ni kya hai??? Poora naam hai uska!!" Geet blasted at him... "Nidhi Verma!!" She spoke out between her teeth...
"Wow!! Tumhari senior thi... baat cheet khass nahi thi! phir bhi tumhe poora naam yaad hai!" He chuckled only to find her glaring at him...
"Actually... Main Ni he bulata hun!!" He can see that jealousy building up...
"And now may i know app usko jaante kese hain??" She narrowed her eyes at him while turning sarcastic...

"Hmmm..." He pressed his lips together... "Good Question!!" He winked at her...
"Please... bohat patience test le liya app ne mera!!" She snored...

"Hahahaha! Kya kyun kese ko side pe rakhte hue... Ni!! i mean Nidhi! Meri bohat bohat bohat achi dost hai!!" He smile pressing his lips together...
"Tum mujhe yeh batao k... yeh jo abhi sab kuch tumse hua.. isske baad feeling kesi arahi thi?? jail jaane ka darr?? huh??" He asked something out of the blue which flared her up even more...

"Apki tabeat to theek hai??? kis kism k sawal pooch rahe hain mujhse app??" She yelled at him...

"Tumhare sir mein dard tha! tum jaldi mein thi... agar yeh ghalti theek nahi hoti to kya log tumhe samajhne ki koshish karte?? ya phir unhe sirf ghalti nazar ati??" He continued to ask...

"Obviously unhe iss sab se kuch leyna deyna nahi hota k kyun?? kya?? kese?? Unhe sirf nuksaan dikhta!!" Geet huffed...

"Exactly!!" He bit his lower lip... Unhe sirf nuksaan dikhta!! Aur aisi tarah kuch aisa hogaya tha Mauritius mein jiski wajah se without any fault Ni ko jail jana parta..." He started with his story...

"Jail???" Geet's eyes widen up...
"Hmmm jail!! bohat koshish ki lekin koi solution nahi mila... Phirr yeh zaroori hogaya k ya to wo kisi aise admi se forun shaadi karle jo wahan ka rehne wala ho.." He paused... "Ya phir wo jiske pass wahan ka work permit ho..." He stopped to see her reactions...

"So???" Her heart skipped a beat!! she was really not ready for any heart break..
"So... usse jail jaane nahi de sakta tha yaar mein!! " He got up from the sofa...

"Haan par..." She too got up as a new dark sensation hit her heart...

"Dekho... ek ek baat batane ka abhi mere pass time nahi hai!! its just that Usko bachane k liye Uski Sid k saath paper marriage hui.." Maan turned towards her and said...

"Huh???" Geet looked at him dumfondedly... She was hearing something really really unexpected from him... Her mind had already started working for the worst and the truth was that she was relating it to Maan as the way he was telling her all this was hell scary...

"Tum kya samjhi thi?? mein kya bolne wala hun??" He grinned at her pale looking face...

"Koi bharosa thodi hai apka..." She kept her hand over her heart feeling its beats getting back to normal...

"Hahahaha!!" He laughed taking few steps towards her and covering the distance between them took her one hand in his..."Don't worry! Mujhe tum poori tarah se phanss chuki ho!" He pulling her close by wrapping his other arm around her waist..."Ab mein kahin aur nahi phasne wala.." He completed still looking in her eyes which made her look down as a light smile reached her face...

"Mein..." She looked at him and then again shifted her gaze down on their hands..."Mein darr gai thi!" She confessed whispering out softly...

"Mujhe pata hai!" He took her into a tight hug caressing her shoulders... She closed her eyes feeling really relaxed and protective in his arms... He hugged her for no other reason like she thought to give her feeling of protection or something but for the only reason that he wanted to... He just felt like he wanted her in his arms that is it!!


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"Acha back to the point..." He continued after a while "Yaar dekho!! chakkar kuch aisa hai k... har family mein ek na ek anokhi personality zaroor hoti hai!! Tumhare yahan tumhari dadi!!" pause "Aur humare yahan Sid ki dadi thi... ab wo bhagwaan ko pyaari ho chuki hain! lekin uski mom uski dadi ki carbon copy hain!!" He sighed making a face...

"Hahahahahhaha!!" It was Geet's turn to laugh...

"Bhae.. to get out of that situation yeh zaroori tha!! mein tumse ek commitment kar k Mauritius gaya tha and so i was unable to help lekinnn phir Sid bola k sirf sign he to karne hain!! 6 maheene mein divorce bhi ho jayega... baat wahin khatam ho jayegi kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalega..." Maan spoke out which resting his back on the sofa...

"To phirr???" Geet started taking interest...

"Phir yeh k... sab theek tha! Ek dum se embassy walon ko pata nahi kya soojhi k unhun ne inquiry bitha di!! Ab uske liye urgent basis pe Ni ko humare saath shift hona para... Sid aur usne ek doosre ki basic habits ko janne ki koshish ki so that they can answer their questions..." He took a breath... "By the way, Ni Sid ko mere through he jaanti thi!! Wo meri dost thi.. uski nahi!" He added some info in between...

"To panga kya hai?? Wo AirPort pe apko dekh kyun ro rahi thi???" Geet was very much normal now and was enjoying her coffee...

"Arre wohin se to pange shuru hogaye naa... warna usse pehle tak sab decided tha aur theek tha! Mujhe pata he nahi chala yeh pyaar naam ki beemaari kab donow k beech agai!!" He made a face and Geet started coughing after hearing him out...

"Seriously... Pyaar Vyaar pata nahi kahan se beech mein agaya! phir wo arr gaya k mein divorce nahi dunga... aur beech mein bohat saari cheezein hogai jo baad mein bataoonga..." He was looking irritated...

"To problem kya hai???" Geet was still unable to guess...

"Arre wo Neha chachi! sid ki mom!! Unko Aliya pasand thi!!" Maan told her the real thing which made her choke...
"Kya???" Geet almost shouted keeping her coffee aside... "Lekin Rohail aur Aliya??" Geet looked at Maan with widen eyes...
"Bhae yeh sab humari sagai k baad shuru hua hai!!" Now frustration was visible on Maan's face... "Yahan se wapas Dehli pohunch k wo Sid k peeche parr gai! Ab tum khud socho... ussne Aliya ko pehli cheez kabhi iss nigah se dekha he nahi!! Donow sirf bohat ache dost hain aur kuch nahi! Infact Aliya to usko Dev ki tarah treat karti hai!!" He held his head in his palms...

"To phir???" Geet was some how understanding his frustration...

"Phir kya? Nidhi ke chakkar mein already parr chuka tha! Ab Aliya k saamne wo Nidhi ki baat rakhta to kabhi bhi Neha chachi ne nahi manna tha.." He led out a deep breath...
"Aliya ko pata hai yeh sab???" Geet asked biting her lower lip...
"Geet!! Yeh baat sirf Sid aur mere beech ki hai... Aliya kya kisi ko kuch nahi pata hai iss baare mein... infact jo log iss shaadi k baare mein jaante hain unhe bhi nahi batai meine... Tumhe bata raha hun!! Kyunki mein bohat tung agaya hun and i really need to discuss this all with someone on whom i can trust!" He huffed and hit his back against the sofa...

"Arre lekin ab ???" Geet's mouth was wide open...

"Ab Sid ne kisi tarah Aliya ka bhoot to utaar diya... lekin phir pata nahi kya baat ghumai aur unhun ne kya samjha k apni dost ki beti tulika k saath Sid ka rishta tay karne pe tull gai... Ek baar Naa bolne k baad ab Sid ka thodi deir chup rehna zaroori tha... Kyunki ab Neha chachi k ego ka masla ban gaya tha!! i mean Unka eklota Beta jo unki koi baat nahi taalta wo baar baar unki pasand ko naa kehde..." Maan gave some horrible expressions...


"Oh!! ego issues aur dadi wale pange!! samajh gai!!" Geet was quick to understand the matter...

"Good!!" He appreciated...


"So current status pe Nidhi ko meri bhabhi kaha ja sakta hai! Legally Khurrana uske naam k agay lag chuka hai!... Ab simple baat yeh hai k kisi bhi tarah se wo ladki khud naa bole aur phir hum Nidhi ko picture mein le kar aein... tab to baat banegi aur usse wo izzat milegi jo milni chahiye warna nahi!!" He slapped his head while telling her everything...

"Maan!! yeh sab app mujhe wahan beth k bhi bata sakte thai... yeh to koi aisi baat nahi thi!!" Geet frowned at him...
"Madam! inke marriage documents pe naa... as a witness mera signature sab se pehle hai!! Mere saath jo hoga naa? soch hai tumhari!! Aur meri wajah se mom dad ko koi kuch kahe mujhe bardasht nahi!!" He became serious at the end.. "Yehi wajah hai k meine yeh baat Dev Roahil tak se share nahi ki k kahin ghalti se kuch masla hogaya to problem ho jayegi!! Oopar se wo AirPort pe jab mujhse takrai to pareshaan thi aur mujhe dekh usse rona agaya!! Ab uss baat ka itna tamasha bana k... nahi bhae!!" He held both his palms infront of her making her laugh...

"So... app donow sides se phase hue hain!" Geet giggled...

"Haan!! Shaadi k chakkar mein maine phasaya tha donow ko lekin ab unhune mujhe phasa diya hai!!" He rolled his eyes... "Wese bhi.. yeh baat un logon k beech ki hai!! no one will understand k uss time consequences kya thai? blame karne mein sab agay ajenge as its human nature... Aur mujhe koi haq nahi k unki personal life k baare mein kisi se kuch bhi kahun!!" He explained why he was queit...

"Tumhe sab sirf isliye bataya kyunki tumne poocha tha and i owe you this explanation after AirPort scene..." He was serious... " And i also expect k humare beech ki baat humari he rahegi!!" He said while looking at her with hopeful eyes to which she nodded in a yes...






"Aur kitna time lagay ga yaar???" Maan asked while approaching Nidhi...
"Tch!!! adha ghanta aur do mujhe... sab set kar diya hai bus ab closing karni hai warna unhe shak ho jayega k kuch cher chaar hui hai!!" Nidhi replied still busy with her work and so Maan and Geet again came out of the room...

"Shukar manao flight mil gai uss time!! Warna to ho jana tha tumhara kaam tamam!!" He chuckled...
"Aur apki wapsi??" She asked while walking along with him side by side...
"Abhi teen 3 ghante mein.." He sighed... "Wese bohat mehangi parr rahi ho tum mujhe..." He commented only to get a smack on his shoulder which was surprising for him... When did she became that free with him??
"Mein mehangi parr rahi hoon?? " She pouted...
"To??? Ane jaane mein kitna kharcha hua mera pata hai?? oopar se kaam mera tha isliye Ni k paise bhi mujhe bharne pare..." He matched her tone...
"By the way... basket ka kuch raaz khula??" It just striked him...
"Nahi!!! pata nahi kisne bheja hai wo sab..." Geet became serious at once...
"Wese... jitna expensive tum keh rahi ho... oopar se wo Nandini k liye bhi hai matlab koi janne wala ho sakta hai tum logon ka..." He started playing...
"Aisa sirf ek hai jo humari pasand na pasand itni achi tarah se jaanta tha... lekin..." Geet sighed remembering Vikas...
"Lekin?? Aur wo hai kaun??" Maan asked while hiding his smile...

"Koi nahi!! Aur wo wese bhi.. NewYork mein hote hain andd... yeh sab Mauritius se aya hai!!" Geet smiled fake whereas he felt like slapping his head... "Vikas ko pata chal gaya k itna be khabar bethe hain yahan sab to phir to kabhi naam bhi sunna pasand nahi karega in sab ka... GOD!! NewYork se Mauritius shift hue usse zamana hogaya aur yahan to ajeeb he harkatein hain sab ki..."

"Kya matlab koi nahi?? Tumhari marzi ka sawal na ho to tum phone pattakh do aur jab mujhse poochne ki baari aye to this is my right???" He mocked at her face...
"Maine kab phone patkha???" She frowned...

"Oho!! madam! kabhi notice karna... tumhare mizaj k khilaf ek baat ho jaye to tum forun se phone ya laptop screen patakh deti ho...Isiliye mujhe tumse baat karte hue bhi darr lagta hai!!" He highlighted...

"Acha!! meine kabhi notice nahi kiya.." She shrugged her shoulders...

"Hogaya!!!" Nidhi's Voice echoed in thir ears and hence they both turned back...

"Thank You so much!!" Geet thanked Nidhi by heart...
"Not a problem!! Sarru Boss ka order tha!" Nidhi winked at her...
"Boss??" Geet again got confused...
"Haan!! Meri employee bhi hai!" Maan nodded in a yes...

"Ab chalo... humay AirPort drop karo..." Maan picked up his coat and said...
"Wese AirPort pe khatra hai!!" Geet chuckled making him frown.."Khatra???"

"Yup!!!" Geet nodded sweetly with closed eyes... "Aliya ki bhi issi waqt ki flight hai! Aur Rohailll...wesa ka wesa he hai!"
"Kaun si badi baat hai?? Mujhe pata tha kuch nahi hona hai!!" He rolled his eyes...

"Arre Piya ka call aya tha!" Nidhi informed Maan...
"Acha!!" He licked his lower lip...

"Ab yeh Piya kaun hai???" Geet passed a tired look...

"Tumhari Bhabhi!!" Both Nidhi and Maan yelled at the same time while narrowing their eyes at Geet... "Aur yeh tumhara Bhai nahi hai!" Nidhi added whereas Maan already started laughing soon to be joined by both Geet and Nidhi...


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Nidhi and Maan have known eachother since the time he was in NewYork... They have worked together plus have hanged out alot as in NewYork since Vikas Piya, Maan and Nidhi were living in different apartments but in the same building...

Later Vikas and Piya moved to Mauritius and Nidhi back to India... All contacts with Nidhi got over with Maan as they got busy in their lives but later they hit again in Mauritius when Maan found out that she is his employee along with Sid...

She was a bubbly, Chirpy, full of life girl and that is why it was easy to get along with her... Nidhi was also Geet's senior when they were in collage but they both never got chance to get along with eachother but still Geet and Nidhi both remembered eachother by their faces and names...

At current, she was offically Siddhant Khurrana's wife and Maan Khurrana's sister-in-law...








"Sab packing hogai??" Dev asked Aliya as he came to pick her bags..
"Hmmm..." Aliya smiled shaking her head in joy!!
"Oho!! itni khushi office se jaan chootne ki... jab regular basis pe jana shuru karogi tab kya hoga??" Dev smirked...
"Kabhi to bhaiyun ki tarah baat kiya karo... Encourage karo mujhe..." Aliya pouted smacking his shoulder...
"Meri pyaar behna!! Mein tumhe reality check de raha hun!!" He chuckled wrapping his arm around her shoulders...
"Nahi yaar!! I am sure job will be fun!" Aliya gave him a widen smile...
"Acha??? yahan to laga tha k tumhe keede katt rahe hain!!" He made a face...
"Yahan naa... actually mujhe kuch khass maza nahi aya!! Kyunki tum sab ne mujhe achi tarah se exploit kiya hai!! ek minute ka araam nahi diya!" She frowned...
"Hadd hogai!! to tumne kya socha tha?? office mein parties hongi??" Dev raised his eyes...
"Sukoon hoga atleast... lekin itni bhaga dorri karai hai us Rohail ne mujhse k mera adha wazan aise he ghat gaya!!" She sighed deep...
"Phir bhi nahi phisla.." Dev blabbered...
"Huh??" Aliya passed a confused look...
"Mera matlab hai... jaldi karo yaar!! flight chut gai to??" Dev covered up and taking her bags went out...

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Everyone was on the breakfast table wishing Bye to Aliya whom Dev was dropping and Rohail simply passed alight smile to her and waved a bye... "Ab tum ek looong holiday pe jaogi!!! haina?? kitna kaam karwaya humne..." Rohail teased her...

"Tumhe to sui kar dena chahiye!!!" She retorted back with an angry look...

"Wo to tumhe abhi ghar wale karenge... zara ruk jao tum!!" Dev eyed him...

"Bye Aunty!! Bye Maasi!!" Aliya hugged both the ladies one by one and then walked towards dadi to say her bye whereas Rohail drew other attention towards him by saying "Mein office k liye nikalta hun!!"

"Beta laut k to ghar he ana hai naa tumhe..." Arjun chuckled while shaking his head... He was quiet till now thinking let the matter settle down in fun but now he knew he has to have a serious talk with his son.. Maan really took a big initiative by bringing Aliya here and for whole month which everyone appreciated but now it wasn't his job to deal with the results...

Atlast, Aliya bid a final bye to all and left with Dev...


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"Bhaiii!!!!!" Maan jumped up hearing his sudden shout from his back... He was inside the AirPort lobby with Nidhi...
"Tumm..." He took a sigh of relief keeping his hand over his chest by seeing Aliya there...
"Azaadi mil gai finally tumhe??" He teased her as she came running and hugged him...

"Aap yahan kese??" She asked excitedly while coming out of the hug...
"Arre mat poocho yaar... "He made a face... "Lekin face to face finally inn se milo..." He pointed towards Nidhi...
"Niddhi!!... meet Aliya!!... Aliya!! meet Nidhi!" Maan introduced both of them officially...
"Oho!! The grand Dhamaka!!" Aliya giggled shaking her hand with Nidhi...

"Tumm... photographs se zyaada achi dikhti ho!!" Aliya commented while smiling at Nidhi...
"Thank you!" Nidhi smiled... she still needed a minute or two to get friendly with Aliya...

"Chalo acha hua tum donow mil li... abbb... ek ghanta hai jitna chattar pattar kar sakti ho karo... kyunki agay ka plan ussi pe based hai!!" He pressed his lips together...

"Arre lekin wo Tulika bohat chalu cheez hai!! Main mil chuki hoon na usse... jab bhi ati ya to Sid peecha chura k mere ghar ajata tha ya mujhe bula leyta tha!! Uss Tulika ki bohat hatti hai mujhse..." Aliya made a face...
"Dekho... Sid to ja k araam se beth gaya hai Australia mein... Usse full confidence hai k tum he Tulika se uska peecha chura sakti ho!!" Maan chuckeld...

"Main kese?? aur Tulika mujhse kyun milne lagg gai??? infact usse to yeh lagta hai k mera aur Sid ka affair chal raha hai!!" Aliya pouted...

"Mujhe yeh sab bilkul bhi acha nahi lag raha hai!!" Nidhi folded her arms against her chest... "Hum kisi ki feelings k saath iss tarah kese khel sakte hain??" She passed a sad look...

"Feelings???" Aliya's eyes widen up... "Tulika k liye na... feelings ki baat nahi karte!!" Aliya giggled...
"Matlab??" Nidhi passed a confused look to Maan who was laughing right now...
"Abay Dhakkan!! Tumhe abhi tak samajh nahi aya??" He tried to control his laugh...

"Arre wo Chamcha giri mein hatim hai!! Neha Aunty k saamne sati savitri aur bahar koi dekh le... itne ladke ghomati hai k ginte ginte ginti khatam ho jaye!!" Aliya explained...

"Damn!! Thank God phone roaming pe tha!!" Maan's eyes came out seeing Dev's name on Caller ID...
"Tum log baatein karo... mein ata hun!" He excused and went on a side to receive Dev's call...

"Itni deir se phoe kyun uthaya??" Dev yelled at Maan...
"Wo..." Maan bit his upper lip to think for a while and then started.. "Tumne yeh poochne k liye phone kiya hai?"
"Nahi!! Maine yeh batane k liye phone kiya hai k plan failed!! Aliya chali gai!!" Dev was sounding annoyed...
"Usse to jana he tha!!" Maan slipped his tongue..
"Kya??" Dev frowned...
"Mera matlab hai k... jaana to tha he na usse wapas..." Maan corrected...
"Haan!! Lekin wo idiot nahi sudhra..." Dev shook his head...

"Arre dafa karo yaar!! Usse to pyaar ka bukhar hua nahi... tum kyun apna khoon jala rahe ho??" Maan adviced...
"Seriously!!! You are Right!!" Dev sighed...

"Acha ab phone rakho.. office jao! Mujhe bhi kaam hai!" Maan smiled and ended the call...


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"Ni kahan gai??" Maan asked Aliya as he came back after a while...
"Washroom gai hai!" Aliya smiled at him...
"Kesi lagi?" He further inquired...
"She is nice!!! Kaafi honest aur caring lagi mujhe..." Aliya told her opinion about Nidhi... "Lekin bhai! Tulika ko tackle karna asaan nahi hai... i mean Sid is like a ticket to her for a luxurious life! wo kyun mana karegi??" Aliya said it all straight... "Wese for Sid i'll do this lekin agar Tulika sach mein Sid k liye kuch feel karti hoti naa?? to mein iss sab mein Sid ka saath kabhi nahi deti!" Aliya concluded on which Maan agreed...






"Aliya get this done yaar!" Rohail entered in her cabin and said... "Huh!!" He closed his eyes finding it all empty... He knew he has got dependent on her for these type of works but he will do such thing he wasn't expecting...
"Adat bhi badi buri cheez hoti hai!" He shook his head and got out of her cabin... Taking long quick steps, he entered in his own cabin and slamming the file on the table, sat down on his chair...

"Huh??" Geet passed a questioning look to Dev as she was standing near Dev's table and they both were busy in discussing something...

Remember! Dev and Rohail shares a huge cabin together as they like it that way only...


"All okay??" Geet asked while removing the lid from the glass and passing water to him...
"Thank you!" He passed a helpless look and drank it all in one go...
"Missing her??" Dev shot a suspicious look...
"Please!! Ab dobara shuru mat ho jana!!" Rohail warned Dev...
"Okay!! Peace!" Dev made a sign of peice through his fingers and eyed Geet to talk if she feels she can...
"Gusse mein kyun ho??" Geet bit her lower lip and asked him cutely which made him smile...
"Yaar matlab... subha se sab mujhe iss tarah dekh rahe hain jese meine koi bohat bada gunah kar diya hai!!" He spoke out irritatedly...
"So u wana talk??" Geet questioned...
"I want my space yaar! i want time... sab kyun charh gaye hain mujhpe iss tarah??" He looked at both Geet and Dev...
"Correct! Yeh meine bhi feel kiya!!" Dev pressed his lips together...
"Kal raat se naa... sab gadbad he ho raha hai!" Geet too a seat opposite to Rohail and said...
"Tumhare saath kya gadbad hogai??" Rohail arched his eyebrow...
"Choro yaar!! the thing is k tumhe iski help karni chahiye..."She pointed at Dev...
"Dekho... to maintain my sanity i have to keep myself away from this!! Sorry!!" Dev held his hands up...

"Arre!!!" Geet's jaw drop down...

"So, what i can help is... agar tum frustrated ho.. take it out on me and i won't comment on that!!" Dev chuckled...

"Come in!" The all three looked at the door as they heard a knock on it...
"Koi marr gaya kya??" Naren shot a suspicious look to all as he stepped inside that cabin...
"Tum kisko maarna chahte ho??" Geet tolled her tongue inside...
"Tumhare fiance ko!!! Kya baaton mein ghuma k mujhe yahan phasaya hai usne..." Naren made aface which made Rohail laugh...
"But u have to agree its fun here!!" Dev grinned...
"Haan bilkul!! Tang khechte raho saara waqt kisi na kisi ki..." Naren laughed and passing a file to Rohail went out of the cabin...
"Iski koi adat Abhi se nahi milti..." Rohail commented...



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"Wow!! What a scene!" Vikas collaped on floor after listening out the whole matter...
"Shut Up!!" Maan made a face...
"But you should see... jab Maan aur Geet amne saamne hote hain!!" Nidhi laughed...
"Kyun??" Piya grinned...
"Wo bolti hai!! Aur yeh sunta hai!!" Nidhi chuckled... "Phir agar yeh ghalti se asusual ek add taana maar de phir uska jawab bhi acha ata hai!!" She added...
"Khair... ab aisa bhi nahi hai!!" Maan rolled his eyes...
"Aisa he hai!! Kyunki koi gaon ki gori hoti to tum kab ka peecha chura k bhaag chuke hote!" Vikas commented...

"Haan haan bilkul!!" Maan made a face... "Ziddi!! nakchari!! chirchiri! aisi hai naa tumhari behn.." Maan stretched his lips to form a smile but got three glares in return.."Wo alag baat hai mujhe aise he pasand hai!!" He immediately said which made everyone laugh out loud...

"Arre tum humesha photographs gol kar jate ho!! Abhi tak sagai ki photographs nahi dikhai!!" Piya smacked on his shoulder...

"USB mein padi hain! le jana.." He yawned...

"Lao... kahan hai USB??? Phir gul kar jaoge tum!" Vikas was quick to react...

"Ufffo..." Maan was feeling hell lazy at the moment, getting up from the sofa, he went into his room and came out after a while...

"Chalo khana lag gaya hai!!" Nidhi called them out... Maan and Piya got up and joined her on the table whereas Vikas went towards the Television and inserted the flashdrive in that...
"Matlab abhi dekhna zaroori hai??" Maan shook his head...
"Tumhe kya masla hai??" Vikas arched his eyebrows at him and got settled on his chair...

The slideshow started and the first picture was of Maan in which he was looking a bit weird... "Hahahahaha!!! yeh tumhe kya hua tha iss mein??" All the three started laughing at him...
"Beta! migrane k baad insaan aisa he dikhta hai!!" He rolled his eyes...
"Arre
Cupping Karwai thi naa tumne iske liya?? how was the result??" Vikas inquired...

"Fab yaar!! Bohat fresh feel kiya meine aurr migrane wagera sab khatam!!" Maan gave his relaxed expressions...
"Haan!! Mere scarf tha kabar kar diya!!" Nidhi made af face...
"Arre hadd hai yaar!! kab se uss ek scarf ko le k roye ja rahi hai!!" Maan frowned at her...
"Scarf??" Piya passed a confused look...
"Arre meri patti nikal gai thi... iska scarf sofe pe para tha... utha k lapait k sogaya mein!! bus... " Maan explained...

The next picture was of Aliya who was looking damn pretty, then Dev, Rohail and other family members and then there was also a picture of Rohail and Aliya together on which Vikas paused...

"Tujhe inki daal galti nahi dikha rahi??" He eyes Maan...

"Tumhe dikh rahi hai??" Maan retorted back...

"Andhe ko bhi dikhegi Maan!!" Nidhi commented... "They look fab together!"
"Just because they look good together doesn't mean they both will start developing feelings for eachother..." Maan highlighted a fact...
"Baat sahi hai tumhari... lekin ab itna time ek doosre ko jhelne k baad wo alag hue hain! to jo bhi hoga... wo ab hoga!!" Piya smiled looking at Maan...
"Dekho ek baat pakki hai! Rohail ke sirf ego issues hain!! Wo Aliya mein kitna interested hai yeh mujhe bohat achi tarah se pata hai!! The thing is k Aliya is not a robot! Usski apni feelings hain aurrr i really don't want her to suffer because of Rohail! Simple!!" Maan explained his point of view...
"Hehehe!! Tum un donow k bhai ho... donow ki equal care karte ho!! Isliye tum mat socho..." Piya adviced him...
"Actually Piya ki baat mein point hai!" Nidhi took Piya's side...

The fact that Aliya was Sid's mother's first choice was only known to Maan and Sid... They both kept this between themselves only to avoid more complications or any awkwardness and now beside them only Geet knew it...


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"Oh!! To yeh Nikki hai!" Vikas teased Maan as a picture of AbhiNikki passed and just after that a picture of Maan and Nikki came on the screen...
"Yeh bhi achi lagti yaar saath mein!!" He commented expecting Maan to glare at him or something as Piya and Nidhi were still unknown to the fact about how Nikki's father wanted her to marry Maan long back...
"Haan Bilkul!! Meine to kabhi inkaar nahi kiya iss baat se..." A straight answer from Maan's side only to turn tables... The brother inside Vikas woke up and he started galring at Maan on which he started laughing...

Then there were many other pictures from Geet's family, Nandini! and other cousin's pictures aswell which did brought a light smile on Vikas face but it was a sad one and the three of them kept quiet and thought not to comment on anything as of now as they knew it was Vikas's weak point!

"Bhai! wana talk to you..." Maan saw Rohail's message on his mobile... "Give me an hour or two..." He replied back and kept his mobile on the table...

"Abay yeh kya hai??" Vikas looked at Maan with an open mouth and saw that white kitten whom Nidhi named "Mini" peeping her head out from Maan's half open zip of his jacket...
"Yaar mein bada pareshaan hun iss sab se..." Maan closed his eyes while shaking his head...

It has become Mini's habit that she gets inside Maan's jacket whenever he sits infront of TV or his laptop and then sneaks her head out of his half open zip and looks at the screen which excites her alot...

"I am telling you naa!! She is addicted to your perfume!" Nidhi giggled looking at Maan...
"Hahahahaha!! thats cute!!" Piya giggled as she came across to see about what all three of them are talking...

"Cute???" Maan made a face..
"Kehte haina? jisse jitna bhago utna he paas ati hai!! dekho..." Vikas laughed looking at Maan's annoyed expressions...





"Kuch bhool k i hun kya mein wahan???" Aliya bit her baby finger between her teeth feeling uneasy for a moment...
"Mumma Papa ko bhi pata nahi kya hua hai?? they are behaving weird!" She scratched head and keeping the glass of juice aside, started unpacking her stuff...
"Hmmm" She sighed while taking out few clothes and started putting them inside her cupboard properly...
"Iss Tulika se kese deal karungi mein???" Aliya scratched her head to think of something... "Lekin agar Neha Auntyusse uske kisi timepass boyfriend k saath red handed pakar lein to???" An idea strike her mind...
"Yes!!! Yeh ho sakta hai!!" Aliya grinned and moved backtowards her bag to take out more clothes when she saw the envelop of her pictures from Maan's Engagement and taking the out started flipping them...
Her smile brighten up as she saw one picture where Dev was irritating her and she was making a face on it, then she saw a picture of his and Maan which was the best one she thinks, she fliped one more and saw her single one in which she was just standing and smiling and then came a picture of Her and Rohail where they both were standing together smiling at the camera...

Her bright smile turned light as she came across that picture... "Mujhe Irritate karne mein to PHD ki hai issne..." She made a face... "Lekinnn mera saath bhi bohat diya hai!" She smiled while tracing his face...

"Hhh pata nahi wo kaun hogi? Jo isko jhele gi??" Aliya shook her head lightly and keeping the photographs back continued with her unpacking...


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"Kya Hua??" Maan joined Rohail for a Video chat late night after evryone left and Nidhi went inside her room to sleep...
"I am not at peace yaar!! Ghar pe bhi sab..." Rohail made a face...
"Ghar pe kisi ne bhi tumhe shabashi nahi deni hai! Just ignore what everyone is saying for a while and they will be okay!" Maan tried to cheer him up...
"But yaar!! internally mujhe acha nahi lag raha hai... Office mein bhi!! i know mujeh kaafi adat hogai hai uske saath kaam karne ki so its obvious that i am missing her lekin iska matlab yeh to nahi hai naa k mujhe usse pyaar hogaya hai ya aisa kuch.." Rohail put forward his confusion...

"Yaar!! adat to zahir hai.. will make you miss her anddd mujhe pata hai tumhe abhi kuch bhi acha nahi lag raha hoga lekin har cheez time k saath sahi hojati hai!!" Maan supported him...

"Main kya karun yaar??? Ghar jab se aya hun naa mein... i am feeling really sick!" Rohail huffed...
"Rohail! ek do din k liye koi kaam nikal k kahin bahar chale jao! wapas aoge sab set milega!" Maan suggested...

"Good Idea!" Rohail actually liked the idea...

"Meow!" Maan heard that low sound and felt some creature near his legs...
"Ek to yeh billi se bada pareshaan hun mein! Hai uski lekin chipki mujhse rehti hai!" Maan gritted his teeth...

"Chalo phir... socho iske baare mein tum kuch!" Maan said his final words to Rohail before ending the call and then keeping his laptop aside looked at the kitten with a frown on his face... "Yeh mera bed hai!"

Its been a 2 weeks since this little kitten was here but every morning she wokes up with Maan under his comforter near his feet... He runs away from her and she feels good in chasing him... Whenever she sees him sitting or laying around, she just climbs over him and rests over his stomach or lap no matter how many times he removes her away from him...

Atlast Maan gave up and now Mini hung around him freely as he doesn't bother to remove her anymore..







"MR. Maan Khurrana!! Tumhara bura waqt start hota hai... Ab!!" He grinned and finally pressed the enter button on his keybord... "Ab tum dekho.. nahi!!! Ab tum bhugto gay!" He smirked as he saw the sending report on his computer screen...

"Tumhare saare Wrong Actions ke Reactions ka time agay hai!!" He laughed evilly...


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Its been a week since Aliya left and Maan's advice really helped Rohail in the manner that now he can see family getting normal with him...

"Kya ho raha hai??" Arjun joined him at the backyard..
"Kuch nahi Dad!! Bus yunhi!!" He stopped playing on his Tablet and kept it a side as Arjun got seated next to him on the grass...
"Well.. meine socha tumhe thoda time dun! phir baat karun and now i think this is time!!" Arjun pressed his lips together getting straight on his point...
"Dad!!!" Rohail whined...

"Rohail!!" Arjun spoke out frimly.. "Forget what everyone else wants and what they think... Mujhe batao tumne kya socha hai apni life k baare mein??" Arjun inquired providing that comfort zone in which he can speak out his heart...

"Hhh" Rohail led out a deep breath... "Pehle jiski sagai karwai ha uski shaadi to hojaye!!" He again tried to avoid the topic...

"Har cheez mein Maan ko beech mein lana zaroori nahi hai!" Arjun got serious...

"Dad!! Aliya ek bohat achi ladki hai!" Rohail finally speak up.. "Lekin yeh zaroori to nahi hai k jis tarah se jo app log chah rahe hain wohi ho! I mean just give me sometime to figure it out..."Rohail said in a pleading tone...

"You have all the time son! Lekin mein chahta hun k tum mujhse share karo k tum akhir iss sab k baare mein sochte kya ho?" Arjun asked him politely...

"Dad!! Itna to pakka hai k i have no reason to say NO for her... In kuch dinow mein bohat socha hai meine uske baare mein! infact i think kisi ladki k baare mein kabhi iss tarah se nahi socha hoga..." Rohail bit his lower lip... "Lekin phir bhi mujhe lagta hai k mein jaldbaazi nahi kar sakta... "

"Bus mujhe yehi janna tha... k tum sahi track pe ho ya nahi!" Arjun smiled at him while patting his back...


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"Maan! yeh lo..." Nidhi came in his room with a plate of nuggets only to find him taking his clothes out for washing...
"Haan... thanks!" He smiled taking away the plate and the kept it on the bedside...
"Yeh kya hai??" Nidhi kneeled down to pick up a box which he dropped by mistake...
"Ahhh... yeh.." He made a face as Nidhi opened up the box...
"Kya hai yeh???" She got confused seeing the incomplete peice of jewel...

"Yaar mujhe bhi nahi pata... bus dekha tha! acha laga utha liya!! Ab sochta hun k paise bhi zaya kiye aur bekaar he para hai yeh mere pass..." He rolled his eyes...

"Jee nahi!!" Nidhi chuckled... "Tumhe manna parega k kuch cheezon mein hum ladkiyaan tum ladko se zyaada smart hoti hain! Ab tum dekho.. mein iske saath kya karti hum!" She smiled cheekily...

"Ahan!! chalo dekh leyte hain!! Aur agar tumne aisa kuch kardiya whoch will surprise me... tooo" Maan thought for a moment... "To tum mujhe kuch aisa doge jo mujhe surprise karde..." Nidhi completed...

"Done!!" Maan agreed and Nidhi left his room...






"Abay shut up! Mujhpe kya chilla rahe ho??" Sid grtitted his teeth while having a video chat with Maan... "Yeh jo saare wrong wrong actions haina? yeh sab tere hain jiske reactions hum bhugat rahe hain!!"

"Achaw??? meine bola tha Pyaar mein parne ko???" Maan arched his eyebrow...

"Lekin yeh idea to tumhara he tha naa paper marriage ka???" Sid narrowed his eyes at Maan...
"Theek hai theek hai!" Maan made a face.. "My wrong action jiska interesting reaction yeh hai k tum donow ko ek doosre se pyaar hogaya!!" he paused... "Lekin Divorce na dene ka action tumhara jiska reaction... OH GOD!!" Maan looked up and sighed...

"Aur wo Aliya Rohail ko iss tarah ek saath kaam pe lagana?? Wo bhi tumhara he action tha naa?? Jiska khamiyaza Rohail bhugat raha hai!!" Sid was at the verge to give Maan a reality check...

"Listen!! Jo reality check tum mujhe dena chah rahe ho.. wo mat do!!" Maan clipped... "Kyunki i need to maintain my sanity!!"

"Hahahahahahaha!!" Sid cracked up while hearing him out...

"Acha chalo... bus dafa hojao ab!!" Getting annoyed Maan ended the convo and started packing up his stuff... He and Nidhi were getting ready to shift in the new duplex Appartment and so they were packing up everything...




Sameera😊

P.S : I Guess you all have known me and Ana(..oneOone..) already, we and one of our friend has started something as our past time on ArSh, its a complete madness.😆
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Edited by sameera_12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ap nai sab ko heart attack dey diya tha
baap rey itna dara diya

woh sab omg yeh sab last k 2 parts ab hasi arahi hhai

🤣 ap ney ap par sahi khety hai kabhi puri bath janey ya coin ka second part dke bina faisal mat karo

woh hum toh bhool hi gye they maan k sath sid bhi tha waha ek bar bhi yeh kyal nahi aya k sid hosakta hai

bhus char gye sab bandoq lekar maan par

awesome update you write 👏 fablouse parts special 24 and 25 good suspense queen you are please asey jhatkey dobara mat dejiye ga

aur jo new story hai I love to read maaneet version 😊
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Gosh the start was really scary. Specially the way you wrote it, I had really started feeling bad for Geet thinking her heart is going to break today. Specially with Ni being around them. Though Maan's casuality was weird. But you changed the situation so surprisingly that again I was left shocked again.

So Nidhi and Sid got married so save Ni? WTH. As I had said in one of my comment, you had surely managed to put that seed of doubt in my head but still I was keeping faith in Maan for some unknown reasons. And Im just glad that my faith in him wasnt broken.

But question is why was Ni arrested? Maan dint gave those details. So there is a loose end here. Im curious to know about this new angle now. But also fearing what new twist you will bring along.

So that "pyaar" ho gaya was for Sid. He fell in love with her as per Maan and denied giving divorce. Btw Ni too fell for him? Why did she cried seeing Maan in airport? Above all, how could Maan, Sid and Aliya act so cool in Maan's engagement? And if the marriage was btw Sid-Ni then why did Maan say he would have cancelled his engagement with Geet had he known Ni was in Mumbai? Also what all he said to Vikas, was true or not? The headache drama he did before engagement, what was the need of that if he knew that the whole Sid-Ni drama wasnt related to his engagement with Geet? Or there is indeed something more to all this twist? Im certainly intrigued but scared as well.

MG interaction, which I was so fearing for all obvious reasons, turned out to be really relieving. That hug, for Maan it was just cos he wanted to, for Geet it gave a sense of protection and put all her fears at rest but for me it was like soothing. I really took a moment to let the truth sink in me and finally believe that yes, Maan dint cheated Geet. He dint played with her in any way. Cos I have really come to admire this guy and hating him would have been painful for me too. I so dint wanted his character to be ruined after the way you have made me love him in the first 22 updates. So thank you for not making me dislike him.

So Sid's dadi was like Geet's dadi, a conservative woman and his mother too is the same. Cos of her they have hidden this all drama from their family thinking they will be divorcing in 6 months time and no one will ever come to know about it being in Mauritius. But new twist in the tale was that Sid's mom also likes Aliya and wants him to get married to her. This is like a de javu, Piya-Vikas-Sapna angle created by Geet's dadi. Though Aliya thing got solved by Sid, his mother got some Tulika for whom he couldnt say a no directly cos that would have created a problem like it did in Geet's house in Vikas-Piya's case. And Sid dont want a second Piya in Nidhi.

And wait Sid is a Khurana? I dint know this. I thought Akshay and Arjun are the only Khuranas we have here. So Sid's dad must be Maan's chachu right?

Maan said he wanted to share all this with someone who he can trust. So does that mean he trusts Geet now? Cos I remember him saying neither he trusts anyone nor wants anyone to trust him. He surely is a confusing person. He should decide what he wants.

But I must add, this all really seems weird knowing Maan isnt a guy who would hide anything from his family. The image you had made of him is slowly shaking and I have started feeling there is much more to this guy than he shows. If he can hide about Sid-Ni from his family, he can hide anything. Though he is right too. It wasnt his secret to share with family. Its Sid's alone, but he have signed up for this mess by signing as witness for their marriage. And if I dig deep, then Im sure Sid-Ni got married cos of Maan since he did mentioned that Sid knows Ni through him as Ni was his friend from the start.

So now, other than Maan, Sid, Ni, Aliya, Vikas and Piya; Geet too knows about their secret but not in details. There are still many things to be told is what I have felt.

It was really nice of Maan that he came to India on a single phone call from her. That does says he cares. Else he wouldnt have bothered to come and solve the problem she created for herself.

So Geet and her family is unaware that Vikas has shifted to Mauritius. Seems like the contact was broken long long back from both sides.

Why just why dont these people in this FF take others seriously? Nidhi-Maan both said Piya as in tumhari bhabhi yet Geet dint believe them. All cos of their playful nature. The characters in this FF reveal big things in such a casual way that none believes them.

Woww, another thing revealed. Maan knows Nidhi from New York time. Nows that is pretty long period, 3 to 4 years. So Vikas-Piya also knows her from that long. I might be stupid, but how come there was nothing btw Maan-Nidhi ever? Like in a romantic way? They never felt anything for each other ever after knowing each other for such a long time now? No attraction ever?

Aliya is all set to leave India and seems happy as well. Liked Aliya-Dev's moment.

So with Aliya going to Mauritius, what about her and Rohail story? Rohail seemed quite casual while bidding her bye. But he is affected and attracted to her and yet no reaction seems so strange.

It was first time Aliya was seeing Nidhi. So how did she come to know about Sid-Ni? Is this the thing Sid-Aliya used to talk on phone which used to make Rohail super Jealous.

So Aliya knows about Tulika thing and was helping Sid get rid of her. Whereas Tulika thinks Aliya and Sid are having an affairs. Ufff. Ni is feeling sad that they are playing with Tulika's feelings but Tulika isnt a good girl. So does that mean its only Sid who loves Ni here?

Does Maan really think nothing can work btw Rohail-Aliya? The way he said Aliya ko toh jaana hi tha sounded weird.

Did Aliya really said that? She wouldnt have helped Sid if Tulika had real feelings for him? And what about Sid's feelings?

Rohail is already missing Aliya and her presence in office. Its not even a day and this is his condition. He has gotten so used to her. Chalo, hopefully ab iski train track pe aayegi. He may realize his feelings now.

Awww Im so loving the bond Geet shares with Dev n Rohail. Her bond with them is much more strong and deep than M-G. Maybe cos of the long distance relationship or maybe cos MG scenes are hardly there. Both their interactions with other characters happen more individually than with each other.

Hmm so Ni shared her experience on seeing MG together which made Vikas-Piya laugh. Their moment was a very light hearted one still I dont know if I should look pass Maan's comment or take them seriously. Cos you really never know when he is serious and when he is joking.

Awww Vikas was eager to see his sisters engagement pics. He really must be feeling so left out, ignored and hurt by his own family. But he still loves them so much.

So the migrane Maan was having on his engagement day was real? You also answered the scarf thing here which you had added to misled us.

Maan does sees something btw Aliya-Rohail but he thinks Aliya doesnt feel anything and Rohail has ego issues and so he is not forcing things on both of them. But I agree with Piya, maybe this separation make them realize their feelings. Rohail has feelings but is in denial whereas I have no clue about Aliya.

Also I dont remember if I had mentioned about it before but Maan-Nikki thing was a surprise. I cant believe her father wanted Nikki to marry Maan. Also the reaction Maan gave to Vikas saying by now he would have married Nikki was double surprising. Dont know if I should take that comment seriously or let it go. Maan is so unpredictable.

Aliya thinking about who the girl would be to tolerate Rohail said that probably she doesnt have any feelings for him.

Chalo at least Rohail shares his feelings with Maan. Must say these brothers shares a very very deep bond. All are super attatched to Maan. Even Sid and Aliya.

Rohail is confused and in denial but with time he will realize his feelings. I guess he needs a push. A strong one at that.

Lol. So Maan got habitual of Mini. Her constantly sticking around him has made him accept her forcefully. You know this reminds me of Maan-Geet. How Geet was forced on him and he had no option but to stick with her whom he has grown to accept with time. I know it might be the worse comparision done but I cant help it as you had recently refreshed my memory of how their relationship started in last few updates.

Oh I had almost forgotten about that mysterious guy. Is he some psycho lover of Geet?

Rohail-Arjun was nice scene. At least someone in the family other than Maan thinks to ask about his feelings rather than forcing things on him and just wanting to hear a yes.

Okay, so Ni is going to complete that incomplete piece Maan bought for Geet. Wonder what she will be doing with that.

Finally it is concluded that Ni also loves Sid. Chalo at least there wont be any confusion over this. Hopefully.

Maan and Ni are going to be shifting in a duplex. But then what about Sid-Ni? Why embassy people wanted to have an inspection?

Anyways, Im quite confused about few things since I can clearly see some loose ends in this updates. But will wait to see how the story goes from here. Hoping some progression in MG relationship. Cos of a long distance relationship they anyways dont get time for each other. Wonder how this 2-3 years are going to pass.

Update was really wonderful and the story is getting interesting. Kudos to you for writing it so smartly and not giving away anything

Also, thank you for not dragging Maan-Ni suspense cos I would have surely gone mad. We have new couple now, Sid-Ni. Only Dev is remaining. Fix him with Nandini. But then you will not spare them too. Like you havent spared MaanGeet, RohailAliya, VikasPiya and SidNi.

-Sanjana!
Edited by BrainEaterOwl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank you
feel better after reading this update
who is this suspicious man wants to sepret geet n maan

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