MG~ FF~The Jinx ~ THREAD-2~ UPDATED pt 20 / Pg 139 / 21st Oct........ - Page 12

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nice part
di past jaldi reveal kro na
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Maan is feeling attached to manu now and he is finding it difficult to go away from them..
Thiough you have said that Geet had learnt to hide her emotions so I can relate some thing here between Maan and manu
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finally may b we will get som clues wht happened in th past
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nice one
maan is missing manu n geet
manu is sooo cute
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😃 i'll update it TM to open some past...
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hey grt updte...
maan n maanu bondn is so nuc...both feeln pain of seprtn evn geet is sad abt it...
y maan ws nt dat frndly in past n hw cum he is nw...
waitng fr past unrevl...
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Originally posted by: singh24



😃 i'll update it TM to open some past...
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.






Part - 12


Part - 13





Now Geet didn't have a good hold on her all childhood memories but most of d things which pricked her heart still fresh in her mind nd teased her ,, she was nearly 12 yrs old when coz of her stubbornness her father agreed to visit her school function ,, she was going to get a prize for doing well in her studies ,, all d family members denied Mahinder coz he had a lil headache but didn't want to break his daughter's heart nd went out to attend d function ,, in mid he had a very sharp pain nd felt dinginess , lost her control on his bike nd collide with a truck ,, he lost his life nd all d family members accused Geet for this lose ,, she was broken with d loss of her father nd d acutions made her more guilty , though in start her mother didn't say her anything but after passing few months without husband nd with d responsibility of two kid she becoming weak ,, d dependent on others for everything starting irking her.
she cn't even voice out her pain in front of other ,, being a girl Geet faced d worst ,, everybody scold her for lil lose ,, d time which she spent in village school was peaceful , but one day when her younger bro fell down nd broke his leg nd some injuries on head while returning home from school all became more rough for her ,, they blamed her for not taking care of him , even that day her mother too accused her that coz of her carelessness her son was injured ,, she was a curse for her family ,, Dadrji , taiji , brij nd teji already cursed her nd some time beat her ,, they wr d boys nd showed their domination ,, taiji made her to work nd darji didn't like if he heard her lil loud voice or she came in front of him ,, Rano was depand on them , not much educated nd belonged to an ordinary famly so didn't voice out against them .

Yash singh Khurana was mahinder's friends who shifted in Delhi after setting his bunisess there went to HP after his demise with Rashi nd Dadima ,, he then went again after two yrs to visit his farms and Haweli with Rashi nd this time too he went to meet mahinder's family ,, when they entered d sight was not pleasant ,, darji was hiting Geet with a stick nd taiji was blabbering nd accusing her rano was watching all this from d kitchen door ,, Yash stopped Darji nd Rashi held Geet close to her ,both asked why they wr beating nd accusing a small girl , though at 1st place dadrji startled but next moment threw an angry glare to Geet nd accused her saying this girl is a curse for his family , today she called him from back nd he lost his election for Surpanch , he told her not to come infront of him but...

YSK nd Rashi wr shocked how narrow minded these ppl wr ,, in their dismay they wr accusing a small girl without any reason where is that written that this girl was d reason for all mishappening not any one of them but Darji was eldest nd he respect him so didn't say anything ,, Rasihi too felt bad for d girl how these women treating a girl she sat on a chair having a crying Geet in her lap nd consoled her , , there wr marks of sticks on her palm and arms ,, she complaint Rano why she was watching all this silently , but she too said d same thing nd said that she cdn't go against her family as she need d protection of this family nd depand on them coz her son is small * Rashi knew well this orthodox family where male dominated d house .

Yash was very hurt seeing Geet's condition there in city his mother was running an NGO to protect girls child nd here his childhood friend's daughter was suffering after him ,, nobody is there to protect her even not her mother ,, he though for few min nd voice out his desire to take Geet with him , though Rashi was surprised at his sudden decision but she trust him nd never go againt his wish she knew that Yash was a person of golden heart ,, she looked at yash nd he only blinked at her that was enough for her nd she to added her support to his.

Darji nd rano was not agreed with this but taiji was super happy nd thought that it was a good chance to get rid of this jinx ..Geet ,, YSK nd Rashi said that their daughter lived in hostel nd son is grown up nd busy in his study so they cd lookafter Geet nd in this way she lived away fro them nd her presence didn't harm Handa family ,, taiji added her willingness at once nd forced Rano nd dadrji too that here everybody cursed Geet nd there she got good edu in city ,, Rano was reluctant but Taiji didn't wan't to leave this chance to make her family free from a girl's responsibility ,, after much persuation Rano agreed nd after two hr Geet was on d way to Delhi with YSK nd Rashi in their car ,, she was sobbing nd shocked that how her own mother discarded her ,, Rashi nd YSK wr consoling her nd giving many reasons to make her easy ,, they stopped on their way to take some rest nd bought many things to eat for Geet ,, After 7-8 hrs journey they wr in KM in late eve ,, Geet was looking all around awed she saw this type of big nd beautiful house 1st time , though her HP house was big but not like this ,, YSK nd Rashi entered in d living hall having Geet with them where Dadima nd Maan was sitting nd waiting for them ,, Dadima was talking to someone on phone nd Maan was watching TV.

Geet chain of thought broke when Manu stired in sleep nd caught her suit neck tightly in his fist ,, she patted his back nd clung him more to her ,, she sighed nd closed her eyes to get some sleep coz next day was working nd she had to wake up early .

There Maan reached at his hotel nd entered in his big room with heavy heart,, kept d bags on sofa , went to change nd slumped on bed ,, his body was here but his mind nd heart was with Manu nd Geet ,, he was missing them hell but helpless cdn't share his feeling with anybody even not to his family members bcoz Geet requested him not say about her nd manu nd he had promised her ,, he opened his mobile phone where he took some manu's nd Geet pics in d zoo unknown to them watched them for long ,, it was mid night nd sleep was far away from his eyes ,, he was surprised how Geet nd manu made a place in his stone heart in a day ,, he was not like this nd for Geet he was rude when she was in KM nd never consider her as his family like Dadima .

He faintly remembered that day when Geet came in KM with his dad & mom ,, they wr waiting for them nd got a surprised seeing a girl with them ,, YSK nd Rashi wished Dadima nd intro Geet to her nd Maan ,, Dadima recognized her at once but she was shocked that Yash brought her with him for ever nd took all her responsibility ,, she was lil annoyed with this decision ,, when she had her own family then why he brought her ,, it was their family matter how they treated her but yash argued back that how cd she say like this when she was running an NGO for girls on d name of his father ,, Dadima said that those girls wr homeless nd orphans but Geet had her family nd mother .

Rashi tried to pacify Dadima that they treated her badly nd accused her that she was a bad omen for their family even they beat her ,, Dadima retorted back what if she brought bad luck for this family too so sent her back to her house ,, good or bad she was their responsibility nd she didn't want any bad omen for her happy family nd yash became angry on this reply nd her double standard views,, he declared that this was his decision that Geet lived here in KM nd all had to respect his decision nd no more argument over this ,, he said if on d name of his father she cd look after many homeless girl then on d name of his friendship nd humanity he cd take care of Geet .

This became a lil cold war between Dadima nd Yash ,, Rashi felt bad now they wr in a fix she cn't send back Geet to HP nd here Dadima was unhappy for keeping her in KM ,, Maan too supported Dadima ,, Yash left from thereto change in anger nd Dadima warned Rashi that something went wrong with her family coz of this girl she wd send her back to HP ,, she ordered that give her d last room next to Maan's gym not near their family .

Rashi was parted in two parts one side was her husband nd other side Dadima d eldest person nd head of d family .


Precap --- Take a trip down memory lane...

Geet became more secluded ...


Part - 14



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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