Maaneet FF Binding Ties(4) Ch 30, Pg 63, June 9, 2016 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

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Main first?

Yes I m first😆

Trisha ji ..I m commenting now

Thanks Hashmi so much.😆

Bechaari Geet..

kahaan phans gayi.

to sheron ke beech bechaari bakri

ab shuru ho gaye dono ki kaun shikaar karega uska..

Thank God there came the sherni -Our Pari.\

and I loved this thinking of maan-

"Great. Just what we needed, the potty mouthed sub-inspector" Maan groaned under his breath.😆😆

I love writing Maan and Pari's nokjhok I have seen brothers and sisters fight exactly like they do.😆But there is affection behind all those barbed comments. Though right now Pari is really mad at him and rightly so.

You know mujhe ek baat bahut achchhi lagi ki pari though liked Yash but did not want him to see with Geet..

The sub-inspector is very intuitive. She sees that there is no spark there on Geet's side. She knows her friend very well after all.😉

bur she doesnot like Maan too😆

And here she is seeing the spark all to well and she does not like it, she does not like it at all. Let's see if sheru can change her opinion about him, shall we?😉

uske liye to wo hero nahin ravan hai jo seeta aran karne ke liye ready tha😉

but but but..she saw in his eyes which she saw in Brij's eyes for herself or in her own eyes for Brij..

But she warned him to stay away from Geet as he was a man of harsh words and Geet was a delicate doll for her..

but se saw Geet avoiding to look at maan...Pari got doubt in her mind..

Maan ..gadha ai..mom dad ke saamne mafi maangne se kya hoga😆

but he confessed his sins very honestly..

It's easier to confess when your defenses are down aren't they? Also wanted to show a bit about what kind of relationship he had with his parents.

Maan ko abhi tak Miri ka sach nain pata?😕😕

I thougt dadi ne bataya usko sab kuch

Nope he does not know about Miri. Dadi thinks it is not her place to tell him that. After all it has to be Geet's decision if she wants to share about her private life or not. See that's why he is so frustrated. Coz he knows nothing about her.😛

here Geer has a very soft heart and she recalled the behavior of Maan who was trying to seek her forgiveness for his rude behavior but she in she anger did not give a chance to him

Then she remembered her parents fight..how her mother talked to her husband and then ran to him for a sorry..and everything used to get normal soon..

Geet in her heart forgave Maan but phone call from dadi made her forced to go to him..

Nice upadte...

I don't think you stopped at wrong time..next update me dono ko ek saath dekhne ke liye I m waiting

Thank you very much for saying that. I too thought that I ended it at the right moment. This update was about self reflection and a bit of a jealousy angle. The next update will be about them moving a step forward.😉

Thanks (R)ashmi dear for this lovely comment.😃

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi nisha ji

love the update ..u stopped at wrong point ..want to know how geet going to give maafi to maan...

love the update ..pari sensed what maan feel for geet ..he may be late to understand that but pari's clever mind read all ..she wants maan to stay away from geet but the day geet will come near him ..howzpari going to stop that ..akhir white horse wala prince maan hi toh hai ..mana abhi thoda sa khados hai par geet hai na theek kar degi usse ..

dadimaa called geet for maan's solution and geet immediately want to be at khurana mansion ...

arrey but why u stopped ...not good ...

thank u for update

waiting for next ..

p.s enjoy ur vacations ..have a great time ..

Originally posted by: gudmeet

Now be ready for my detailed comment

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Firstly I will write about what I liked

is that u did not loose the grip on the story even writing after such a long time

👏

so for your Nisha

Thank you sweetheart. I felt the whole update was basically about too much self reflection. I felt that the story had not moved forward much. But I couldn't move on without showing his thought process. He is not a callous person. The exact opposite in fact and self reflection is the only way for now for me to show what he is actually feeling.😃

maan getting jealous and possessive 😉😉

he so wanted to snatch away from yash

loved the surprise entry of pari

and loved her detailed analysis of maan's expression and how correctly deciphering it

now that is called parkhi nazar

superb pari

👏👏

Very aptly put dear. The all seeing eyes. She is a cop after all. That too is part of the observation process I think.

loved her speaking out the truth to maan that she doesn't like him and instead she was hooting for Yash

Although she is not really rooting for the doctor, but she will never admit that to Maan😛

loved her mixing up mythology and fairly tale

prince on a white horse and here prince with a white coat

😆

too good

and this left me wondering a girl has to marry the man

so its ok if she dreams abt the prince charming

but why her prince has to come on a white horse only

what if he comes on a brown or some other coloured horses?????

or for a change he decides just to walk his way to his girl

then???

😕😕😕

just masti yaar

😉😉😉

I will send you something about this.😉

loved maan talking to his parents and missing them

and opening up

he caressing geet's picture on his mobile and uttering her name

loved it so much

poor maan

he even wondered why didn't miri's father give her flowers?

the whole balcony scene was so wonderful

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Part of his self refection. Wanted to shed a little more light on what his relationship with his parents had been like.

loved how geet forgave maan and did not even remember his poisonous words

how she understood that just like her aai maan also did not know what he uttered in frustration or anger

just a little understanding of other's point of view cleared the air between them

😳😳

My dad is exactly like this. Full of hot hair and hardly remembers what he has said after he's done saying it and leaving destruction in his path😛

and she dashed to do something for that very man

what a gesture

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so loved it loved it loved it so much

and now what I did not like

that the updated ended 😕

I DID NOT LIKE IT AT ALL

Thanks Gudmeet for writing such an detailed comment. I like looking at the update through the readers eyes. It gives me an insight into my own writing sometimes😃

As for the bad part let's see what I can do about it shall we?😉

How about another update before I leave. Maybe a smaller one.

Thanks for being here sweetheart.

🤗

Originally posted by: DAZZLINDD

Wonderful update

so finally he apologised 😊

Lol ... ... Maan n yaash n poor Geet in b/w😆

Pari not ready 2 give Geet 2 both of em ... Lol

Pari ... well said ( atleast i hope this gives Maan a push to admit his feelings atleast 2 himslef )

so Maan restless the whole day... n Geet is goin to him

argghhh... why did u stop there😡

waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Susegad

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

ye kya

Hashmi .😲

tumne abhi tak muje hashmi hi banaaye rakha hai.mujhe laga koi durra naam socha hoga,,,but sachi I don't like this name...yukkk

I sure future me Maan is going to call pari his sister😆

I love teh way he confessed his sin in front of his dead parents and i m sure he shared a very strong bond with them,,

for stopping there

I think if you have started thair confrontation then you would have not been able to complete it in this update...to hum phir se majhdhaar me atak jaate ..to new update new scene..

I m eagerly waiting to see them moving ahead..and I m quite sure they will start it with a friendship

jaldi dena next update

aur ye kya R ko boundry ke andar band kyun kiya😭

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

OMG, are you serious? What a wrong place to stop an update at. Could you please not torture us a lot and give us an update real quick... 😆

Originally posted by: Susegad

That's the name I am sticking with for you until you stop calling me these lovely names. 😆

The R is kabza unless you get my name right, warna main R ko H se replace kar doongi😆

Exactly and that is why the next update will be a whole separate one

Umm... friendship between these two...let's see shall we?😉

Ok off to bed.

Goodnight (R)ashmi😆