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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Ok tho 4:30 ko uss thread me milte h!😊

With an update of course 😉


ok dear see u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Maaneet had same dream
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Thank u for liking it
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Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

Wonderful update

Maaneet had same dream


Thank u for liking it.
Ya both had same dream
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yes i m here
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I...miss writing ...chahat!!!
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Part 8

Next day
Maan and geet both thinking about their dream. This dream give a new hope to them that they will find each other some day and will never let go of other. Bot start their routine with new excitement.
KHURANA MANSION DINING TABLE
Maan - gud morning everyone
Everyone - gud morning
Maan came and sat on his chair & start his breakfast. Vicky is telling how he save his new friend from senior ragging and both become frds, maan is smiling listening Vicky talks.
Dev - but Vicky tumne ye galat kiya agar unn ladko ne firse uss ladki ko tang kiya aur uski help karne ko waha koi nai hua toh?
Vicky - ye baat toh maine socha hi nai.
Maan suddenly remember geet and those boys who were trouble her and how he save her. He instantly got worried if those boys again start troubling her and she cannot save herself again, then what will she do. He immediately said
Maan - Vicky tum kuch karne se phele kuch sochte kyun nai.
Vicky - sorry bro.
Maan - main tumare principal se baat karta hu par aage se dhayan rakho kuch bhi karne se phele.
Vicky - ji bro
Dadi - kya baat hai maan aaj aap bahut smile kar rahe hai koi baat hai kya?
Maan - kuch bhi toh nai dadi, kya main smile nai karta jo aap aise puach rahi hai.
Dev - bro aap smile toh karte hai par who bhi installment main. Last time aap kab dil se muskuraye the zara ye toh batayi toh koi.
Nt - shayad hamari shadi par.
Vicky - nai jab bro ko best businessmen award mila tha.
Dadi - nai maan dil se kal muskuraye the jab maan Vicky ko college drop karne gaye the.
Maan - dadi plz aap meri leg pulling mat kijiye.
Dadi - nai maan hum sach kah rahe hai.
Maan - ok dadi muje office jana hai. Bye see u tonight.
Vicky - ok dadi main bhi clge chalta hu. Bye
IN COLLAGE

Geet reach collage and start to find Vicky who is waiting for geet near collage garden. Geet saw him & ran came near him
Geet - hello Vicky, gud morning.
Vicky - gud morning dear. Main tumara hi wait kar raha tha.
Geet - mera wait kyun?
Vicky - who class mein akele jane ka mann nai kiya aur tum hi toh ek dost bani ho ab tak isliye socha ki apne dost ko akela nai chodu.
Geet - itni sweet baatein, kya baat hai itni buttering kyun?
Vicky - woh maine ghar jakar socha ki agar baad mein unn boys ne fir tume tang kiya toh? Main bhut guilty feel kar raha tha.
Geet (selfthought) - agar maine Vicky ko bataya ki uske jane ke baad kya hua toh who aur guilty feel karega. Main use nai bataugi.
Geet - Vicky tum tension mat lo.
Vicky - nai geet aise kuch bhi ho sakta hai but ab main thoda relief feel kar raha hu. Maine bro se baat ki who sab tekh kardege.
Geet - kyun tumare bro alladin ke jinn hai kya?
Vicky - ha kuch aisa hi samjo. Ab collage hall chale principal ne sabhi students ko bulaya hai.
Both went toward hall. There principal give warning to seniors about ragging. If any student found doing ragging freshers they will be rusticated from clge and strict police action will take against them. After dat both went to attend their classes and their day went preety gud.
After class both came to parking lot and vicky said
Vicky - chalo geet main tume ghar drop kar deta hu.
Geet - nai vicky main chali jaugi.
Vicky - main koi na nai sunne wala chalo mere sath. Main tume delhi darsan karata hua ghar drop karuga.
Geet - chalo tourist guide.
Vicky take geet with him for tour of delhi. Geet told him she basically from delhi bt her family left delhi in her childhood and settled in Mumbai. Vicky take geet to Cannaught place, janpat, rajghat. Geet relive her childhood memories. While retunrning Vicky take another path because there is less in that road suddenly geet saw a park. She ask Vicky to stop the car. Geet came out of car and start to go in the park and Vicky also ran after her to ask wat happen to her suddenly
Vicky - geet kya hua tumne aise car kyun stop karwayi?
Geet (emotionally) - Vicky ye park saalo phele yaha se haatwa diya gaya that oh fir kaise?
Vicky - jyada toh pata nai par kuch saal phele kisi businessman ne ye property kharidi aur yaha ye park banwaya.
Geet - thanku Vicky.
Vicky - par kyun?
Geet - muje yaha lane ke liye. Agar aaj tum muje outing ke liye nai kahte toh main aaj yaha nai aa pati.
Vicky is confused with geet talks but he kept silent seeing geet emotional. Geet is roaming in the park and she see there is no change in park. All is exactly same as before. Aisa lag raha tha jaise koi yaha sab kuch waise hi rahna chahata ho jaisa saalo phele tha.
Geet aur Vicky kuch time waha par ruke aur fir chale gaye. Geet ki khushi ka toh mano koi thikana hi nai raha ho. Phele woh sapna aur ab iss park mein geet ka jana ek ishara tha ki ab jaldi hi uska intezaar katam hone wala hai, uska meet usse milnewala hai.
Geet ke jane ke kuch time baad maan bhi waha aata hai. Waha aakar usse waha ki hawao mein kuch mehsoos hua hai jaise koi tha yaha jo usska intezar kar raha tha. He dismiss his thought and sat on bench to find solace for his heart.
After dat day geet also came to the park after her clge. Maan and geet both came at different time so they didnt get chance to came face to face with eachother.
Few weeks past by this routine. Geet and vicky friendship is get strong day by day. On one sunday, geet and meera gone to park, after spending some time there, they saw a golgaape stall and geet got exiceted seeing that.geet said to meera
Geet - meera chal golgappe khate hai kafi din ho gaye khaye.
Meera - kafi din geet parso toh khaye the. Fir bhi chal tu rukne wali thodi hai.
After eating both again start to walk and suddenly geet saw a small puppy on middle of road, he was trying to cross the road bt not able to do that. Geet saw a car is coming toward him. Geet without delay run to him and take him in her arms. The car passed them bt geet didnot see the another car which is coming from other direction. The car stop few inch before geet and the driver of the came out and said TUM YAHA?
Geet (open her eyes) - aap!!
Driver is none other than our hero maan.
Maan - ha main, par phele tum muje ye batao tum hamesha kisina kisi prob mein rahti ho kuch special din hote hai jaise aaj.
Meera also came there and saw maan is talkingwith geet.
Geet (innocently)- aisa toh koi special din nai hota par aapne aisa kyun puacha?
Maan - nai bus jab bhi main tume milta hu tum prob mein hi hoti ho.
Geet - nai aisa nai hai.
Meera - nai geet ye bilkul right bol rahe hai. Main toh tuje phele se hi chalti firti prob boltihu par ab toh sab ko pata chal gaya.
Geet - meera tuje toh main ghar par dekhti hu aur aap kya bol rahe hai.


PRECAP - GEET AND MAAN NOK JHOK CONTINUE
VICKY TELLING FAMILY ABOUT HIS MISCHIEVOUS FRD PRANK AND BY LISTENING HIM MAAN REMEMBER MAHI MASTI WITH HIM.

I know its not up to ur exceptation but what can i do by mistake my brother delete my few parts of story and i hav to write them again so this late update.
HOPE U ALL LIKE IT AND DO COMMENT TO ENCOURAGE ME WITH UR VIEWS.
CHAHAT
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part maaneet r happy dat dey got hope of meetng each other coz of dat dream
maan talkd wit princi nd nw der is no prblm
geet went2 d park where she nd meet use 2 meet nd is very happy
maan nd geet met again nd nok jok starts
precap is intrsng waitng 4 d nxt part 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update..
geet visiting the park...recollecting her days with meet...

lol maan and geet convo...

precap sounds good..lovely part!!

AND WONDERFUL BANNER..!!!!!!

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