New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated - Page 22

awsemm maan got geet address finally

Nice part

Awesme update
finally maan got some info abt geet!!!
Cant wait for next..

Nice.. Maan now knows wer Geet is..

aweomw update

awesome update

Originally posted by: rashi_jain

nyc part
everything was described in very good way

i dont mean to offend u bt just telling my point of view

i feel maan too bechara types...he not at all feels like maan...the main essence of maan is his attitude i think which we all love

m nt saying that maan should not feel guilty but i feel atleast he should nt show his condition to outside world...like he was begging to mr.shergill n told him everything about his personal life to him

i mean one way he was not even able to share 1% of his life with geet...n here he is sharing his personal details with an outsider

its just my POV...feel free to ignore if u dont like it


i hv 1 request too
can u plz add 1 dialogue in the story plz...maybe sometime in past 6 months...meera was the only one knowing everything about their relation so i think she only has right to comment on his personal life

"Marriage is not only about sharing bed, its about sharing ur lives"


i hope m nt too much bothering u🤔
N I HOPE IT DOESNT COME ACROSS AS SOMETHING RUDE TO YOU...THESE R JUST MY FRIENDLY SUGGESTIONS😊

i agree to ur point abt his attitude,but it was his same attitude which lead him here where he lost his wife n failed in his marriage moreover after realizing his mistakes after the burden of his guilt his main priority is to get geet back to find her n win her back appoligise for his past mistakes so if he ll continue with his attitude then he ll never b able to find her n that's the reason he has kept hi anger attititude aside

Interesting. Looking forward to see how different would it be from muskan's kashmakash

nice update