Kalpana's Maan Geet VMs Galore! Thread # 4! 14th VM on Page 55! - Page 88

mom is fine
brother is enjoying in bath
well he is looks for place to stay on more permanent basis
since he will be there mostly

what about your parents
doing well i hope
and your nani
and that cuz who gave birth recently

Cuz and kid are fine! She keeps on sending videos and pics of the tot and we enjoy watching it! Mom hadd me put them in my iPod and now she takes it and watches the videos. I get my ipod back only after the battery is drained. The situation sounds familiar nahi? It is familiar because last year around the same time, my dad went crazy over the Kapil audio that I downloaded and took my ipod away and did not give it back till the battery was drained. Now i am facing the same situation with mom. Funnily, when she is not watching the tot, she is playing games in it. My cuz (the same one who gave birth to the tot) got her hooked onto some games on her mobile and she demanded me to download them too. And now she never leaves my ipod alone!😡

thats so funny
seems you have your work cut out
or do you
maybe wont be that hard hope so
to convince her to get an i pod

Hey! Are you not happy with the bathroom scene? Coz you seem to be too harsh on poor Aru!🤣

Convincing her is not a big deal but the thing is soon a new generation will be out! So either the new one will be available in same price at which I got the current version or I will get the old generation in lesser price! So I am waiting for that! The price for current generation continues to fall! So I am waiting! Plus, I want to wait and see if I can get the new generation ipod touch in same price! So it is more about waiting and till then I have to share my darling dabba!😭

hello am happy with it
but come on that so perving man
am thinking if this happened in real what would you do
aru did ask for it

well lets hope that you get it cheaper
but yes till then you gotta share i guess
nothing can be done

I thought it was funny! I even made sure that I wrote that the water covered her neck too. Most bathroom scenes have girls showing their cleavage! I only showed legs! This reaction kind of made me put off from attempting bold scenes yaar! I was planning to get the story a bit more bold feel compared to my other stories! Like attempt to show that attraction is also a part and parcel of falling in love but I think I better stick to my usual sappy type waala romance!

bilkul nahin
you are right where you went
go for it
after all why should you stop
it was funny
but that man needed to be told off by someone
wait am sure others didnt have probs so no need to change
go for this
and this time i wont be so harsh on him
you cannot change your writing for me
that would be wrong
and to be honest i wasnt bashing your writing but the man
does that make sense

Hey! I just noticed something! I was replying your MFG waala review and there you wrote poor Maan and in MFK you bashed Aru! Arre! Yeh toh partiality hui! Do you understand? Maan staring at legs seems ok and Arnav staring makes you bash him. Oh God! Kittu! I have turned you into Aru basher by encouraging you to bash him in DFL!😲😆

poor him was before i saw the update
ahhh i knew i forgot to take something out
now i know
damn didnt mean poor him
not at all
should have taken that out naa
will do so now
thanx for telling me
just changed it
had i read maan version would have bashed him instead