Kalpana's Maan Geet VMs Galore! Thread # 4! 14th VM on Page 55!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: chavvi16
bilkul nahin
you are right where you went
go for it
after all why should you stop
it was funny
but that man needed to be told off by someone
wait am sure others didnt have probs so no need to change
go for this
and this time i wont be so harsh on him
you cannot change your writing for me
that would be wrong
and to be honest i wasnt bashing your writing but the man
does that make sense

Ok! I wont change! Frankly the scene came into my head all thanks to you and Castle show!😃 You asked for kiss scene during DFL time a lot and that made me wish that I write sensuous scenes! Plus, I watch Castle a lot and there Castle ogling at Beckett gets all those type of ideas into my head!😉

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: chavvi16
poor him was before i saw the update
ahhh i knew i forgot to take something out
now i know
damn didnt mean poor him
not at all
should have taken that out naa
will do so now
thanx for telling me
just changed it
had i read maan version would have bashed him instead

🤣

Off to check out the new review!😆

Please play the drum rolls people coz after a while I am going to hear Kittu bash Maan! Woot woot!😆

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#883

woohooo you wont change
and i will take it as story
and not real life
kabhi kabhi i keep forgetting its not real
sorry about that
me and castle gave you the idea
waah castle bhai
sorry uncle thanx for that
didnt bach him too much
as what i wrote for aru is for maan too
just to let you know whenever i say something about one its same for the other version too
wrote extra bits that i didnt put in one version in other one dear
kappa yaar aaj mera mann nahin karr raha DFL padhne ka
i just wanna chat with you
so no DFL review tomorrow
thought to let you know
wait isnt it time to go
ki aaj bhi der tak rukne ka iraada hai

Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#884

No problem yaar! Forget DFL! Just chat with me! I am enjoying talking to you!

And I am waiting coz I slept in the noon again!😕

And about real life, did you notice that except her legs, nothing else was shown! Coz if more is shown, even i would not have enjoyed writing the scene! I made sure that the scene is decent enough that no one feels violated or revolted by it. I made sure of that! And I had to take Geet as a real girl and she would have cried if he had gotten more show. It was only legs and that is why after that Geet did not create a tamasha over the leg scene!

And you will get scenes like this more coz when i wrote this leg scene all i thought was Kate Beckett's long legs when she entered Castle's room after their first night together wearing nothing but his shirt. Ufff! Kya scene that! That scene got me thinking about the way FF writers seem to make Castle drool over her legs everytime they write a smut scene on them! So I thought why not make our boys drool over some good looking legs too!😉 And as in show, Castle stares at her dress, her butt, her legs, her hips and God knows what all, my brain will also cook up scenes like this!😆 Already I have planned two awesome and similar scenes for Band Baaja!😆

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#885

hmmm so guess they shall be tortured more and more
actually that would be fitting punishment
can see but not do anything
i dont need to bash them
as dont need it
they themselves do the bashing
thats good naa

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#886

😆 But no more these kind of scenes in MF for a while coz the reason i added the scene was too kickstart the attraction from boys side! Generally, when we want the guys to get attracted to girls, we show the girls wearing sexy saree and let the boys drool on them ala Kurbaan Hua in GHSP and First rabba ve photoshoot in IPKKND. But in this story, there was no such occasions coming up where they can wear sarees so had to use legs or western wear but the boys have already seen girls in stockings and waitress uniform which is western, if that did not affect them what will! So the whole bathtub idea came up!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#887

and geet khushi man they are so funny
they always wanted to do the lux type ads copy
so funny that was
well thats even better
let them suffer with just one glimpse naa
serves them right
it will torment them

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#888

😆 True!

And that glimpse is going to torture them for the next two updates!😆

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#889

goodie
no more need for me to bash them
woohooo
and i can enjoy it like rest
no need to over do it naa
so what did you have for dinner
we will be having khichadi and moong vadi
also roti