MG OS#24: Lag Ja Gale (Completed)

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

hi thanks 4 da pm bt read n commented already! Beautiful emotional OS! Wonderfully written!

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lehr

@lehr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

thanks for the pm dear

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

painful story of true love
With a happy ending
Love always triumphs

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NoshiMaaneet

@NoshiMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

This is so beautiful. I had tears reading it
Geet preferred to die rather than leaving her Maan
and Maan thought he wasn't good enough for Geet and her parents died because of his fault, and he wished he had died instead of them.. Love makes people selfish but Pure love makes people do strange things.. It makes people insane and think about only the one they love, not for themselves.
Beautifully written like all ur other works :)
The end was so beautiful and the way they happily reunited, it made my heart melt for them.
Please keep writing such good stuff. keep it up

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

wow...superb os...👍🏼...so emotional...😭😭...Maan was going to leave Geet coz he thought that he was the reason 4 her parents death...😲😲...Geet asked to make love to her...😳😳...Maan agreed and they did...☺️☺️...After that Geet attempted suicide by cutting her veins...🤢...Maan and his family took her to the hospital...👏👏👏...Maaneet slept in each other's arms and Maan promised never to leave her again......brilliantly written...🥳...loved it very much...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...

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sessy

@sessy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

a very emotional and heart touching OS.i was crying while reading the os.very well written.u potrayed maan's and geet's pain and sorrow very well.life is not always about happy times but sorrow and painful too,a true partner always stands by them and geet did exactly that.

thx for this amazing OS,loved it.

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

wow!!!!beautiful...amazing true love...so tooouching and emotional...loved it

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Ana 🤗...thank u for this beautiful and emotional OS..simply superb 👏...i am i awe of the way u write...makes the story so real i had a lump in my throat by the time i finished...whatever i say will not do justice to your talent ...but i will try ...loved the way u wove the story around the past and the present.❤️...Maaneet in so much pain in the present 😭 and the lovely romantic flashes of their past ...poor Geet lost her parents and Maan lost one leg...the guilt of her parents dying is more painful for him....he tried to keep Geet away from him for her on good 😕...little did he know to what lengths she will go to remain as his wife till her last breath...the way she came to him and made love to him ...the morning after when she slit her wrist...the pain and agony in the hospital...the painful letter where she wrote all her love and feelings...all those scenes were so heart touching 😭...finally Maan came out of his guilt and realised he can never live without her 😃...thank u for the happy ending 😊

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

such a beautiful and wonderful story !! maan tried to push her away fearing he is not complete...and she reminded him that nothing is complete with out love...and with love everything is perfect and every hurdle can be overcome...saath zaroori hai bus !! and beautiful song selection ...love it !!

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mounacuty

@mounacuty

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

well i got this os while i m cleaning up my pms i just needed a break from my studies so started reading it simply for time pass but as i continued reading it got me soo involved that i got tear im my eyes by d end of the story
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