MG OS#24: Lag Ja Gale (Completed)

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Ashdevil

@Ashdevil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

superb...

read your other os's also they are fab...

update soon...

Edited by ashdd - 10 years ago

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

very nice but sad

waiting for next

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Lovely update😊

Finally maaneet together

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

emotional update! Geet tries 2 kill her herself! she is saved! Maan worried! Maan confronts Geet! Finally he realises! superb end! Well written

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

this was superb ending !!

geet cut her veins ..want to end her life with out ..

she made maan realized the importance of their relation ..

love the ending ..

thank u anu for wonderful story !!

ur all os r simply mind blowing ..all r perfectly awesome...👏👏

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

did he really think she would be okay without him
no that was never gonna happen
he knew it
and so did she
so she decided to take her life than live half life
if she could live without him
and he without her
wow that was touching letter
she didnt care about your disability
and good you got it too
love was all that mattered to her

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rashi_jain

@rashi_jain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awesome!!!

u literally made me cry😭
i was too thinking that geet will try to take away her life and then will be saved😃
geet's letter was so emotional!!

loved it❤️

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

awesome and emotional os dear...am happy at last maaneet together...

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

chalo maan ka dimag thikane per aya atlast...pyar dil se hota hai na ki outward appearance se...

superb story...

loved it very much...

thank u very uch fr d lovely story...