SACRED LOVE|| MG FF||PART 23- PAGE 120||UPDATED 18/12 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: love2_soma

<font color="#FF0099"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">plz meera ko negative maat banana...i love d nok jhonk of all of dem...lets see kya punishment milta hai geet ko...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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thanks for liking it...!!!!
sweetheart agar negative character nahi banaya toh..there will be no..fun still I'll definitely think..on dat!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
wow...kya punishment hai...khud punishment do aur khudhi solution bhi do...maan kya hoga tumhara...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: swetaa100



umar..sweetheart thank u for ur lovely comment...there is more of past which will be revealslowly In the upcoming parts...so u hve to wait for it..
u asked for good punishment right...
plus u dint wanted to hate maan...so i tjink I did dat



yehhh and its very annoying...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Awesome punishment he said no one help her
but he him self gave idea
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
beautiful story line ...read it in one go...& the updates were awesome...I loved ronak-geet bonding...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Superb ff.
maan ne geet Ki money earn karna Ki problem bi solve kar di aur kisi ko pata bi nai chala. Great
loved d understanding of maaneet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Read all updates in one go
Nice story
Thnx 4 pm
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Nice concept...just read all the four parts...loved Maan nd Geet's friendship and Maan's love and concern for Geet...wondering how Maan is going to punish Geet, probably by teaching her himself...
Thanx for the PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

This part is specially dedicated to UMA..

Thank u for everything...Uma and all others for supporting me...

Also if anyone can make banner plz do so...ill be really grateful to u...

Part 6

Geet finally agreed for singing classes. Akshata took Pen n wrote something on the board while all others looked at her curiously. She turned and said..

Look geetu we need to work on ur other options..She had written 3 tasks dat she had to perform on the board. All of them nodded along with geet.

1st n 3rd task are linked to each other...See If u top the semester automatically u will eligible for internship in top 5 companies...she tried to explain.

They all decided how to manage their time n help geet. Akshata took responsibility of her studies while Arush will help her to gather eligibility criteria in the companies and ther stuffs. Ronak will help her in writing her assignments so dat she gets free time to study. While pratty promised to get her all necessary question bank.

And for the 2nd task ..they decided to meet tomorrow evening at akshu's college so dat they could talk to her frnd. They all bid bye n went home. After dinner geet came in her room..she was excited with dis singing thing. She wished she could tell maan. She sighed its better not to disturb him.

She went to her cupboard and took her and maan's childhood pic and kissed him. She laid on her bed with folded legs and caressed pic .Maanu u remember the first time I had sing..Heheheh tum itna khush hue the ..u said ull help me become an singer..But mujhe engineering lene ko kyu bola..she made a face.. But I have no regrets..Joh maaan ki marzi wohi geet ki marzi..hum alag thodi na hai...hai naa..she spoke cutely to his pic.

We were soo happy na us din na.. Mumma (maan's mother ) bhi toh thi with us..U remember na maan..mera birthday..we had fun na!!

N tumne bhi toh dance kiya tha..bohot hi acha dance kiya tha..U knw u r the best..!!

Sari problems humare bade hone se hui...Babaji y de we have to grow up..

Mom n dad bhi chalegaye...I do miss them sometimes...she said with tears in her eyes.

I knw maan tum ho mere sath hai na...humara gang bhi hai...she smiled at him.And wiped her tears.

But bade hokar tum dusht danav ban gaye ho..u knw devil types...but still u r my sweetest devil..n ull always be...muaaah...she pecked his picture(Sweta wondering itna pyar hai..still best frnd bolti ho tum use??jhalli geet heheh)

But I miss u..i knw tum papa ko leke tension mai..ho..even I always trouble you..i don't do it purposely maan sachi She pinched her throat and said...

Aur dis time I will prove u..I will perform all ur tasks. I promise you maanuu she said with determination.

Anyways chaloo.abhi sone ka time hai..!good night..!!!She thought something took her phone messaged and kept it back.

She hugged the pic ...n slept with a smile on her face

Maan's room-

Maan was turning restlessly on his bed..he couldn't sleep..and then his phone rang. He got up irritatingly to see who had messaged him. He unlocked his phone and Saw a message from geet. He smiled widely ..and opened her message..

Goodnight maan

Soorry for the trouble I caused you

I missed u today... take care

-Geet

He read the message and got really emotional...

I miss u too chiku..m sooryy for all dis...But if I don't behave strict with you..u wont take dis seriously..bachaa n as I promised I will never leave u..Tum humesha maan ko paogi apne sath geet hare k Mod par...Till I m alive I lwill never let anything affect our pure frndship...maybe u don't love me...but ur frndship is more important to me...I wont let anything come between ..us...he vowed kissed her message thinking of kissing her..and slept peace fully.

Next morning.

GEEt left to college. Maan went to gym and then with his dad to office.Later at 5 in evening they assembled at akshata's college.

Akshata was waiting them.Ronak came with early. While pratty and geet came a little late as they had sincerely attended all the lecture attentively today..they wer irritated and tired. Rush other important work.

Wer is ur frnd ..sab aa gaye Asked ronak looking here and there but she found no one..

He is der..she pointed the guy who speaking on phone with his back towards them.All went towards him n pratty patted his shoulder..He turned And saw them.He saw akshata who was smiling slightly and did notice faint pink color on her cheeks.

Hi..guys I m AJAY he said introducing himself

Heyy...they all said..and introduced their selves

So u knw y wer r here right..Said ronak coming straight to the point..

AJAY got startled ..He nodded while geet and pratty just rolled their eyes.

So geet I teach singing and other musicual instruments to students in an institute..

U knw I even rap...like yo yo honey singh..

He saw geet who gave him a understanding smile and ronak who narrowed her brows at him..

Coming to point...institute wer I thought could fix u .. I cant...because there is an problem..

What problem ?? geet asked impatiently

Actually u need to have experienced..in this feel as they wont take newcomer as an teacher...u..see have u ever sang like in an competition or something ya phir taken classes...like professional course or something..

NOO...I dint u used to take but I stopped dat long back after..my..parents...she abruptly stopped and continued again..BUT I M A GOOD SINGER and I have a good voice if u want I can sing a song now..But I have to practice a little bit..she said making a baby face..

No..dear I believe u ..u r akshata's frnd after all..But those people wont take you..Their criteria wont change....he said halfheartedly.

Is there any way u can help us..pratty asked him

Who..actually There is ..a way..Akshata said..

Ronak looked at akshata n then Ajay she could see their chemistry..

There is and singing competition wer u could participate...it for fresher's..And the winning amount is 2 lakhs...he said

Woooww dat is something man..pratty commented Superb hai..Don u should go for it..Jeet gayi toh humare ash hi hai.ash hai...

Geet smacked his shoulder..

But geet tu participate karna chahti hai kya..??Asked ronak

I don't knw...lets think over it.. U mail me the details..

Sure we will think n then inform you..Ajay akshata said smiling at him..Fine call me..up then..and ill mail you..in an hour..ur id..

Geet scribbled down her id and gave it to him...Chalo c ya then I got to go.She thanked him n he left.

They also left After having their evening snacks from the canteen.

Geet came dejectedly to her room .What should I do...now..

She freshend up ..Came down had her snacks and went in room and changed .She took maan's pic again n asked..ab kya karu maanu...I m confused. What should I do,.

I can ask you right she said with a smile...and immediately called him.he dint pick up as he was driving the car.

Lagta hai...busy ho ...kya karu ab ...she laid on bed thinking..and fell asleep as she was tired..

Back to maan-

He had a long dat he came home at 7 and freshen up.he saw 3 miss calls from geet..he dialled her no. n before it could ring he cut it.

He closed his eyes..

Maan u cant call her..U have to be strict with her.. M sure woh singing class k bare mai batane k liye phone hoga...But I cant talk to her...

He opened her image and kissed her..I m happy dat u still consider me as ur best frnd geetu...I hope after knowing everything u could forgive me,...He said..slowly

Anyway I have to find out what happened with geet..Kal subha hi arush se puchunga...

Back to geet-

Geetuuu sunn naa..he called her again..

Bol na...maaanu...she replied..

Tu book rakh aur mere liye gaana ga..abhi he whinned..

Abhi kaise abh homework... kar rai hu na..she said cutely

Nahi..sing that poem for me..now..

But maaanu poem sing kaise karu.??

Nahi just sing..dat poem..Its like a song na..Mam ne tho aise hi sikhaya tha tujhe..SING NOW or else I wont talk to u...dis time its final.. he made a big face and sat on his bed pretending to be angry..turning his face on the other side and placing both his palms under his chin..(Sweta-gosh maan is soo cute..)

She sighed and sat across him on the bed..with folded legs..ohkkaay maanuu gati..hu...baba mai..dont do natak..

He still dint bulged ...from his place..

She stood up on his bed and started reciting the poem as teacher had taught

Can you roll your hands,

Can you roll your hands,

As slowly, as slowly,

As slow can be?

Then stop and fold your arms like me,

Then fold your arms like me...

He looked her from corner his eyes and saw her jumping on his bed while singing the song. She was making cute expressions .and actions from her hands...he smiled at her..N started dancing with her on the bed.They kept jumping on the bed laughing and dancing. After dat they both laid on bed panting while maan held her small hand in his hand and said...geetu tu best singer hai..tu sabse acha gaati hai...and kissed her plum cheeks...while she giggled.

Geet got up..she realized she was dreaming..those beautiful memories of their childhood..She smiled widely and said...

Thank u maan u gave me answer I knw what to do..ill participate. She got up .. called akshu and told her decision...akshata called ajay..and they spoke on conference call about other details .

She took her phone to call maan but stopped ...

Umm..Nahi geet don't tell him..I win the competition and use surprise dungi..she giggled.

Aur agar nahi jeeti..toh.??If I lose then..what..??She thought..

Chaddo joh hoga dekh lenge..Bababji..mom dad mumma...she folded her hands and looked upwards..

Plz apni geet ki madadt karna..Kuch bhi..karke meri jaan bachalo ..uss dust danav se.. And twisted her lips..

Later Geet filled online form and sent it..She will have to come for the first round ob the 2Nd of the next month. She smiled merrily and ran down to share dis news with bhai and Bhabhi.She decided to study for sometime as she has to top dis semester so...She dint chat with others on whats app. While others dint mind as they knew she was studying. They all discussed about her competition and later went to sleep.

Next morning-

Maan came to arush's cabin.And asked him indirectly..about geet which he promptly answered about the competition.Maan left and came in his company.

He sat on his chair...lost in his thoughts..

Geet dint tell me about the competition..He whispered to himself..

Kyuu kyuuu karegi who mujhse baate share..i have hurted her so much...he banged his hand on the table...in frustration.

HE shut his eyes hating himself for doing all dis..feeling very sad

Wait a minute..she is participating in singing competition..

He realized she is gonna sing and then will be winning the competition and prize money.. ...wooww..dat was something which always she wanted to do..this is way better than what I thought...

He smiled and said..yeh toh acchaa hua...I m so glad dis happened...he Jumped in air.getting excited .And then immediately straighten himself..Checking his tie consciously looking ..here and there Maaan dis is office stop behaving like and teenager..he slightly hit his forehead..

He thanked his mumma for doing such a great thing for geet...aap best ho mummaaa..yeh toh maine bhi nahi socha..after all u are msk's mumma na..

I m sure she will win...She is the best..she is the best..my chiku Will win for sure he said grinning..

Precap-

Keep guessing..

Thank u all those people who liked and commented,...guys suggestions are welcomed...and keep supporting me...!!

Also plz add me to receive pms so dat it will be easy for me...

Love,

Sweta

Edited by swetaa100 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeppie me first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


awesome update dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏


really enjoyed reading it ⭐️


geet is so lovely !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛


i liked how she talked with his pic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛


nice maan now feeling sad that she dint inform u about competition 😡 🤣


love



uma...


P.S- Wowww u dedicated ur update for me 😲 sooo sweet of u dear 😛
i am feeling privileged dear!!!!!!!!!!!! hugs for u 🤗


Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago

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