SACRED LOVE|| MG FF||PART 23- PAGE 120||UPDATED 18/12 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part maan is feelng bad 4 scoldng geet 😭
geet trusts maan more dan anyone she dont like anything 2 hear against maan 😃
waitng 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u all..for..ur support...

Love u guys...!!!!!!!!!!!!

PART 5

Maan stood their watching.. them.Kumud saw maan n called him

Good morning maan..aap aa gaye sit il get ur coffee..she said slightly smiling at him. While meera made a face. Wasn't geet enough ..noo they have to pamper her friends too especially dis maan. she made and disgusting face.

All turned their heads to see maan n immediately straighten n stood in attention(sweta saying maan ko dekhte sab daar gaye..hehehe)

Aaree maan wen did u come we dint see u..said arush taking one step ahead...

Haa maan kyu aye tum..he bit his toungue and said kab aye tum...pratty said While wrapping his hand around geet's shoulder. Ronak giggled hearing his taunt. maan saw his hand on geet's shoulder and shot him and angry look.he instantly took his hands back n murmured looking down sorry.

I came wen u wer fussing over the breakfast he said pointing the snacks. Askahata came forward n said maan we were not fussing we were having breakfast anyway u can join us..she said smiling

Ya..maan plz..u..ronak barged in and cut off him rudely

No need he is here to give geet her punishment n not to have food party with us guys..she said glaring maan.

Kumud came n placed the coffee on the table..Maan gave her a small smile n mouthed thank u n sat on the sofa.Kumud left with meera so that they could be alone.

Well guys its geet's punishment not urs...let her come forward n face it..he said in an harsh tone while sipping his coffee..

Geet sighed n came forward ronak held her hand and geet blinked her eyes to show her dat she is okay.She came in frnt of him n asked ..tell me maan what is my punishment.. trying not to get intimidated by his looks.

Maan gave an evil grin kept his coffe on the table n stood up.

Well geet ur punishment is divided into three tasks..he stated

What pratty and ronak shouted...

Maan gave them a look..while akshata held ronak's hand n pleaded her to be quite.

Task1-u have to top dis semester also ur back ups should be cleared

Task2-u have to earn for u living as I feel dat since u r getting everything u don't consider their value..enough also u have start earning next month

Task3-u have to do internship from one of the top companies in ur stream...

Geet's face fell hearing the tasks..she cursed herself for asking him punishment..

Also I think I have to make myself clear U HAVE TO DO ALL THESE TASKS ON UR OWN..NO ONE I REPEAT NO ONE WILL DO IT ON UR BEHALF ...AM I CLEAR ???he said looking at her.

She obediently nodded her head.

All her gang members wer in shock to hear those tasks.

Maan it is not possible for her to top..i m not doubting her capability but sem has already started she had to begin form the start. She said..as a matter of fact

I knw akshata...but she herself wanted an punishment..n I think if she tries a little harder she might do it...

But how can u give her such things to do,,y she has to earn ...ha??She will not do it..ronak said getting angry...

I don't need to answer ur questions.Geet on her won asked for unishment..u cant say anything ..so dont poke ur nose here.. GEETT he called her.Ronak gritted her teeth seeing his arrogance.

Geettt ...he said little loudly as she was looking down..

Haa...maan..she said slowly getting scared

Do u agree on dis??He asked her

I..I..I she closed her eyes..n s**ttered yes maaan..i agree..I wont let u down dis time..

Maan inwardly smiled looking at her confidence. He was glad dat she accptd dis.

Fine dat lets c..what happens.. Now u guys can go..

Arush are u done I need to speak to u.. He said

Yey maan..,say he said walking towards the door.long with maan.

They wer discussing something about office...

No araush I just wanted to say that u focus on ur exams don't worry...we shall manage..slightly patting his shoulder

Arush nodded and after a whiile maan left.

After some time

All wer in geet's room.They had discussed about her punishment a lot they couldn't help it wen geet herself agreed to it..so all decided to help her.Now they wer peacefully doing their respective works..geet and pratty wer completing their assignment actually pratty was writing her assignment. As she had blackmailed him about his ex.While pratty pleaded her not to tell anyone dat he completed her assignment or else uski image kya hoga.His cool dude image will be spoilt..Askahta and arush were studying.Ronak was busy drawing sketches for her next assignment.

Maan's room

Maan was thinking on those three tasks he had given geet.First one was ohkay..as he knw he would get all the books for her n plus akshata will teach her so..she with her hard work will definitely top. But what about the second one...third one had time..As because internships will be next year.

He was thinking hard ..what to do...He took his mobile open the gallery n saw his and geet's childhood picture. He caressed it..and place it near his heart.

A small smile formed in his face recollecting the 1st time they meet.He was 9 and she was 6 they met on the beach.She had lost her way and maan and her mother(1st wife) had found her.she tried to be confident and told them she will go alone she will find her way alone..but maan's mother helped her n finally they met her parents. After dat they became frnds geet's family had moved in Mumbai they wer new..so Maan's family helped them out.Mean while geet n maan became good frnds>he remembered her birthday the next year when he was cribbing his mother dat he wanted a special present for her n his mother Smiled at his care..and answered him

Beta She is very special and so her gift will also be special..mumma have bought her gift..

Maan clapped his hand and aasked sweetly mumma it is special like her na...u knw na I want the best for her..

His mother kissed his cheek n cupped his face n said..Beta she will always get best...ull be always der with her to give her dat.never leave dis frndship maan never. Always be like dis n support geet.

Mrs.khurana said in the flow she was happy dat maan got such an good frnd.Maan nodded kissed her cheek and ran.

Maan came out of his thoughts suddenly got and idea.

Yes..offcourse ...she likes singhing..ummm she could take sighing class I will send students to her who would pay her good amunt..yeyy good one maan he said proudly nad patted his back,

Its time to put dis idea in their head she said with smirk.

He called up akshata...

Akshata got surprised seeing maan's no,

She picked up n said.. hello..

Hello..akshu ..woh who..i just wanted to cnfirm dat everything is going good na I mean tasks k liye prerparation chalu hua ya nahi...

Woooh wooh...she stammered what should she reply.all turned their gazed to her.

Who kya kahi tum log masti toh nahi kar rahe ho na... he said in fake anger

Nahiii nai maan...she replied immediately

I knw geet will be singing right..yeh ladki bhi ha..gane ka itna shock hai..toh gana gane kyu nahi lagti..huuuh I m sure she will be an good teacher.he said stressing the last word..

Before akshu could say anything maan said rudely leave it..ill wont say anything until the results are out..and cut the called.

He smiled at his victory bas ab mera plan yeh sab execute kar denge.

With a big smile he left his room to meet his dad and have a check on him.

Poor aksahta was literally shivering ...Ronak came next to her n asked kya hua...

Akshata said everything what said EXACTLY everything.Ronak got angry again..maan na geet ko taunt marne ka ek bhi chance nahi jane dega..

After cribbing about maan they again immered themselves in their work...arush heard his message tone.He took his phone to read the message and his eyes fell on the date...And suddenly he stood up..

OMG Omg geeet paagaaalll aaj 27th hai..he said loudly

All of them confused looked at him..toh kya hua..aksed pratty

Idiots maan ne bola tha tujhe next month se earn karna..u just have 4 days in ur hand..

Geet widen her eyes... and her mouth into O shape

OMG ab kya hoga she asked getting scared

All of them got worried and cursed maan while something came in pratty's mind as remembered maan and akshu's conversation and he answered..Geetu I have a god plan for u..he said grinning..

Really tell me..she said smiling big..

Dekh tu gana acha gati..u could take singing classes for few children..tujhe phir zayda time bhi waste nahi karna pdega...n then u could study also...he said

Geet was not sure while akshata and ronak came nad hugged pratty Yeyeyy u r right..pratty good idea..said ronak ruffling his hair.While pratty raised is collar up and smiled big showing his teeth.

But I don't knw wer to start ..how will I do it..she said nervously

Askhata answered I have a frnd..he he..will help u he sings u knw..bohot acha hate hai,.woh

Wohh???? Rest four said gaping her.It was 1st time dat akshata was saying something about a guy infact complimenting him.She unknowingly blushed and told her them their 1st encounter and how they became frnds and all..pratty geet and arush were teasing her and she was all shy. Akshata dint had any guy frnd except arush and maan.also pratty considered her as his sister. Ronak was not happy with akshata and dat guys's frndship but she dint voiced it as she thought its not dat bad if he could help geet.So she let it go and decided to concentrate on geet while she will speak with aksahta later on dis matter.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear!!!!!!!!!!!



Again



amazing part dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!


sach kahu...i was scolding u and maan till last half 🤣


i think u got y?


i asked cute punishment and u gave this bolke...but later when i read past everything got cleared!!!!!!!!!!


so maan babu wants geet to do her dream !!!!!!!!!!that is singing!!!!!!!!!!!


loved loved loved it dear


Waiting for next !!!!!!!!!!!!


Do cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!





Uma...




P.S -I will PM u 😆
Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
nice part...
maan gave her panishment in three steps...so her friends are there to give her good ideas...hope she will do the things as maan wants...
thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Nice part maan wants geet 2 be independent so he hv gvn these tasks even though geet's frnds scold him bt he is dong 4 her gd maan only got d solution 4 d tasks gvn by him he is such swtheart hpe geet ill realise maan's love nd fall 4 him waitng 4 d nxt part 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
plz meera ko negative maat banana...i love d nok jhonk of all of dem...lets see kya punishment milta hai geet ko...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: umamaaneet

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#cc00ff">i asked cute punishment and u gave this bolke...but later when i read past everything got cleared!!!!!!!!!!


so maan babu wants geet to do her dream !!!!!!!!!!that is singing!!!!!!!!!!!


loved loved loved it dear
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umar..sweetheart thank u for ur lovely comment...there is more of past which will be revealslowly In the upcoming parts...so u hve to wait for it..
u asked for good punishment right...
plus u dint wanted to hate maan...so i tjink I did dat
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Originally posted by: icskwt

nice part...

maan gave her panishment in three steps...so her friends are there to give her good ideas...hope she will do the things as maan wants...
thanks for pm..



welcome ..thanks for commenting..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: christipie

Nice part maan wants geet 2 be independent so he hv gvn these tasks even though geet's frnds scold him bt he is dong 4 her gd maan only got d solution 4 d tasks gvn by him he is such swtheart hpe geet ill realise maan's love nd fall 4 him waitng 4 d nxt part 😃



thanks for commenting..!!!
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umar..sweetheart thank u for ur lovely comment...there is more of past which will be revealslowly In the upcoming parts...so u hve to wait for it..
u asked for good punishment right...
plus u dint wanted to hate maan...so i tjink I did dat


i will surely wait dear 🤗

so ur through phone now? 😆

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