Love will keep us alive FF DISCONTINUED - SPECIAL NOTE PAGE 7

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Hi friends🤗

It's me, Nishi back again with a new piece of writing 😳 This is my second story on Maaneet. Previously I wrote a short story named 'Till daddy comes home.' I was overwhelmed by the great response for my first ever attempt of writing so I decided to write another story. Here goes my new story on Maaneet, a new fanfiction named 'Love will keep us alive.' Hope you'll enjoy reading it 😳 Please do share your views 😃 Thanks in advance 🤗

Love will keep us alive

Prologue

The sun was shining brightly in the blue sky spreading the rays of happiness. It was a special day indeed, for 'her'. Another milestone in her life. She turned another year old today. It wasn't an ordinary birthday for her this year. It was the 21st year of her life. A new beginning of another year in her life with new hopes.

'Happy birthday my little miss sunshine.' She was awaken by a gentle voice & a soft kiss placed on her forehead. She opened her eyes slowly, yet sleepy. She was awake whole night & slept pretty late as her friends didn't let her sleep peacefully after the clock struck at 12 in the midnight. First it was her fiance, & then she got back to back birthday wishes from the whole bunch of friends.

She rubbed her eyes. It was her father, her role model standing beside her. 'Thank you so much papa' She hugged him tightly. He kissed his daughter back. He couldn't just believe his little girl has grown up to be a beautiful young lady. She had almost the perfect genes of her parents which made her mesmerizingly beautiful. She had hazel brown eyes & a milky white face which almost made every boy fall for her.

She was lucky indeed, to born to a wealthy family. Her father is a well known business tycoon in Mumbai. She was the apple of his eye. She was the only child in the family & almost had all the comforts. She wasn't an ordinary rich spoiled brat. She had the qualities of her mom & had a charming personality.

She had almost everything in her life except the real happiness her heart wanted. She had to undergo so many hardships after her parents got separated when she was just 10 years old. She never knew what happened between her parents what she saw was the violence between them. Specially her father who was money minded didn't care about the family relationships. Her mother had a calm nature but eventually it was too hard for her to live with him further. She tried so many times for the sake of her baby girl but at the end she decided to go away from their lives.

Her father took the full custody of his daughter after their separation as he didn't like her daughter getting close even with a shadow of his ex wife. He provided everything for his daughter as a protective father but his busy business schedules made him away from her daughter most of the time.

'Papa! please stop calling me little miss sunshine!' 'Hell I'm 21 years old!' 'Don't make me feel awkward' She broke the hug. 'Why not my princess? You are still my little daughter!' He smiled. 'Papa seriously I feel like I'm a 5 year old kid when you call me princess.' She chuckled.

'Hmm.. I thought girls like when their fathers call them princesses' He sighed. That made her sad a little bit. She knew her father loves her the most & same with her she loved him more than anyone in the whole wide world. 'Umm.. ok you can call me whatever you want but not in front of my friends ok?' 'They are already teasing me! I don't want them to continue it further.' 'Sure baby!' 'Ok now get ready soon birthday girl! Lot's of surprises stored for you!' Her father smiled patting her back.

'Birthday surprises?' 'Wow that's interesting!' She smiled brightly.


Will this start of another fresh year in her life bring more happiness? or does the destiny have some other plans for her in store?'

To be continued...

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Nishi😳

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Character sketch

Geet Handa


21 years old. Charming & bubbly. Studies fashion designing in a well known design school in Mumbai. The only daughter of Ravindra Handa & Neeta Tejwani. She has a passion in music, dancing & photography. Outgoing & have a friendly nature. She is not kind of an ordinary rich spoiled brat. She has a humble personality. Engaged to Karan Mehta to full her father's wishes.



Maan Kundra ( There is a mystery behind his surname! revealed later when the story proceeds)

24 years old. Handsome & has a charming personality. A university undergraduate. Studies business management after getting a scholarship to a recognized university in Mumbai. Son of Deepak Kundra & late Gauri Kundra. His family means the world to him. A talented pianist. Works part time as a pianist in a five star hotel in Mumbai in order to earn money for the financial matters in the family.



Ravindra Handa - Father of Geet

50 years old. A well known business tycoon in Mumbai.The owner of Handa group of companies. He believes in working hard for success. A money minded person & values his business affairs than family relationships. A single parent for his only daughter, Geet. He loves her the most.



Neeta Tejwani - Mother of Geet

47 years old. A beautician. Owns a beauty parlor in Delhi. Got separated from her husband 11 years ago & currently lives with her younger brother & his family in Delhi. She misses being her daughter so much.



Deepak Kundra - Father of Maan

54 years old. A retired driver. Suffering from a pancreatic cancer. He wants his two sons to get settled down & to be stable in financially before his last breath.



Gauri Kundra - Mother of Maan

Died in a tragic road accident 15 years ago at the age of 35 years. She was a housewife who managed all with many hardships.




Neeraj Kundra - Younger brother of Maan

20 years old. Fresh out of college. A person who believes in freedom than anything. Doesn't care about family responsibilities. He had chosen the wrong path in life, to work under a underworld leader which he hides from his family.




Karan Mehta - Fiance of Geet

25 years old. Engaged to Geet, his family friend. Madly in love with her. Born & raised in Australia. Currently living in Mumbai helping his mother's business affairs.



Mandira Khanna

24 years old. The best friend of Geet & as well as the first cousin of her. Ravindra is Mandira's mother's elder brother. A supportive friend & a trustworthy friend for Geet.




Dipali Mehta - Mother of Karan

48 years old. A widow but she is a successful businesswoman. The business partner of Ravindra Handa. They had plans to get their children married. As a result she got her only son Karan engaged to Geet, the daughter of her business partner, Ravindra Handa. Have a wicked heart and an evil personality. Has a dark past.



Radha Mishra

53 years old. Sister of Dipali & aunt of Karan. Disabled & spending her life in a wheel chair for the past 20 years. Haven't spoke to anyone for years. She is suffering from a mental trauma.A tragic incident happened years back is the reason for her current state.



More characters will be added when the story proceeds 😊



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Index

Prologue - Page 1 , above.

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Congos 4 ur new story<3
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Hey ...welcm bck dear...
N congrts fr new stry...nyc prologue n cs
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Congrats on the new story!!! Nice prologue and interesting cs!!! Waiting for its start... Continue soon!!!
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Congrast for new story Twinkle
Loved da Prologue ..sound interesting
CS is superb..hahah Geet ki to be MIL (komolika) i so luv that character;-)
anyways waiting to knw mystery behind KHURANA/KUNDRA
continue soon..thanks for pm

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OMG!! the characters are super interesting...I wanna read more...😳
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Hey Nishi, good to see you back...concept seems interesting...continue soon...
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Congo for new story very interesting concept

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