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Posted: 10 years ago
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veer fail down on ground he closed eyes in pain but he not make any sound from mouth , all get surprised , he is human or what , so many injury but he never once hiss in pain and little maan face come in his mind like he is saying come on baba come on baba and veeer who is have injury on whole body stand like lion and say devi maaa madat karna and again start to fight with them and just than he hear sound of fire three time and veer just lose his grip on sword , and all just attack on this veer who stand there without weapon , so many cut on body but he have smile on face , he just mummer we won ,maan we won and just lost his ...last...last breath

he fail their lifeless but give new life to his village , when he suffering in pain in village they make diwali they took back their right to fair Veer aj mar kar bhi amer ho gaya uske family ke liye uske village ke liye , who fight with veer they also get surprised like how this man fight for his last breath , how his move like lion and fast as tiger ,they saw true warrior today blood just deeping from his every part they face real man today


they just took his body and tied to tree upside so any animal cant eat his body they put some fire near that tree so any animal not come to his body they last time look to him they feel llike now also he will stand and start to fight with him


they go away little and make sound of bird it is signal that someone is dead



suraj sing who heard that just miss his beat , maan geet with him , he try to shu them but they are not lessoning to him they just glue him and again and again asking for Veer baba



suraj just took them with him he himself first want to confirmed his fear , he just follow that voice it is early morning sun is all set to shine to give new light to world this three stop near fire and their eyes winded in shock veerrr suraj mummer he just took both children in hug but both start to look that way their baba tear come from geet eyes


geet kaaka baba ko dard ho raha hoga unko nikalo na waha se dekho kaise banda hai unko


maan just froze in his place his baba all soaked in blood tied to tree , maan just become big in few second , suraj sing try to closed maan eyes but maan say muje dar nahi lagta apne baba ko dekhane ko


geet just faint with word baba , my baba now who will save me ...maan just hold her in his tiny hand and veer word start some in his mind take care of family , village and mukhiya family fhir geet to unki gudiya , pari thi ,he just look to her , he alwyes get irritated with her but now she is his responsibility jo baba chod gaye the uske liye



he again look to baba ,suraj just froze with maan reaction no tear from 6 year old age boy no fear , aisa laga wo apne age se kahi bada ho gaya within second


maan - kaka main isko lake gaav main ja ta hu aur baki logo ko bejata hu app yahi ruka for age 6 maan have good hight and he just put her like sage and went to village


tear start to fail down from suraj eye , Veer tu to chala gaya sath main maan ka bachpan bhi lake chala gaya I will not forgive you for this never and he just cried in high voice VERRR


after 6 year of veer death so many happen in village mukhiya died after two year of veer death ,and geet father Mohinder try to work as mukhiya but he is soft heart man cant hold that than suraj took all responsibility some little change start to take place in mukhiya house specially mukhiya small son Brije handa totally spoiled and want to become mukhiya of village drink and girl his weak point very cruel today geet have her marriage yes 10 year geet have her marriage with near village mukhiya son



in maan house everything change maan mother goes sati with veer body , thou savitri was against that but maan mother not lesion to any one , maan who become old before age start to wrok in field , he himself start to take lesson of fight sord fght etc and suraj also give him lesion suraj try to give him father love but he know , that is not enough to fill Veer place village make statu of veer in village in front of mukhiya house


from last four days ,maan day night working in geet house for her marriage they sharing same relation till now geet have fear about maan and maan wo to hasna bolna sb kuch to bhul gaya with his baba ( he just forget to talk , smile etc with his baba death )



daily in early morning geet come to veer statue and talk for hour , she share each and everything specially about maan ,khud hi question puch leti khud hi jawab de deti geet first suffering from fever hole three day after ver death at last suraj make her ok with his talk ke baba ko veer baba ko acha nahi lagega


as usual today on her marriage day also she don't stop her ritual , mehandi in hand in beautiful ghagra choli she come near veer and say baba main to gude gudiyo ki shadi maanati hu aur ye log to meri hi shadi

achaa baba ye sahdi kya hoti hai , oh ladka hai na usdin aaya tha muje nahi wo pasnd kaise ulluk jaise dekh raha tha baba lakin ma kehati hai wo mera dulha hai aur kya ha pati par parmeshver , ye kya hota hai baba ,ok jane do


acha baba you know wo khadoos aur bhi khadoose ho gaya , she stop for second look hear and their with fear , if he is there ...than she took deep breath and say acha hua wo nahi hail akin baba wo hasta bhi nahi jab se app bhagwanji ke pass chale gaye ,main unse , apke betese confused mat hona baat karna chaahti hu lakin dar bhi lagta hai aur , aur (I want to talk with him but feel fear and something ) pata nahi kya baba


acha baba kya shadi karke muje dur jana hoga us ullu ke sath , kash mera dulha apne village ka hi hota to kitana acha hota , phir main yahi rahti na apke pass , ab kya kare she make puppy face and say waise baba app to bhagwanji ke pass hai na to apne ku nahi mera dulha is gaav ka hi banaya , wo khadoose , pata hai na kon khadoos she make irritated face wo bhi chal jata ,main chala lati usko apna pati banake



next part in one hour


Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago



hi all just try to write on Bal vidhwa
please say your word about it

Mahi



Next update on monday
sorry going out with family
going to miss all till than
just say in comment which update
you want on monday
again sorry

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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acha baba kya shadi karke muje dur jana hoga us ullu ke sath , kash mera dulha apne village ka hi hota to kitana acha hota , phir main yahi rahti na apke pass , ab kya kare she make puppy face and say waise baba app to bhagwanji ke pass hai na to apne ku nahi mera dulha is gaav ka hi banaya , wo khadoose , pata hai na kon khadoos she make irritated face wo bhi chal jata ,main chala lati usko apna pati banake

just than someone called her and she say acha baba kal milung apse ager wo ullu nahi lake gaya muje acha chalti hu ...and she just run to house , than someone just took deep breath who have tear in eyes it is rooting of that person always lesion this talk and went from there silantialy , geet also don't have idea about it

full day marriage ritual is happening and most irritated person is geet who don't like all this , she just want to run away , she cried veer baba just took me away from it ye bade log sab pagal ho gaye hai , bacho se koi aise karwata hai kya she make face and look upside , blessing late late meri back to tute gayi hai

baba ye ullu dekho kaise ghoor raha hai muje jasie he will eat me with eyes only , ise jada to khadoos acha hai , aise ghoorta to nahi hai chi chi veer baba

just than rano send maan to near geet and her dulha with water , maan try to give that dulha and some water drop fall on his dress

dulha - hai servent you cant work properly , maan say anything geet just say , wo servent nahi hai veer baba ka ladka hai thik se baat karo

dulha - I will watch you latter , why you supporting him ,I am your dulha

geet - mummer pata hai ullu

maan just nodded in no and geet shut her mouth and look upside and say veer baba

maan just say sorry to dulha and give water to geet and went from there

that dulha feel insulted that day he again and again called maan and say her work which is not maan work and geet boiling with anger but maan eyes not giving her permission to say anything

somehow marriage happen and than at time of went back that dulha just push maan without reason maan got some injury but he cover with smile fake smile


geet cant go to her husband house till she get her perio** after she get that she will be send in husband house that day she make rano life hell so many copmlaint about that ullu ki kaise usne maan ko tang kiya ...she is just cribbing

but in next 4 /5 day all just change when they get news of geet husband death , he died because of snake bite and all world change for geet , she don't get much she is happy that now she don't have to go but sad for that boy that he lost his life

she found rano just crying ...so much just than some ladies in white sari come to her room , she first get scare ,they all looking horrible without color and and hair


geet just hug he ma ... savitri , maan dadi also in room but she just hate this all but cant help geet she think for second ager veer hota to

they just all start to pull geet from ma , they just say , you have to geet ,cut your hai come on chalo

geet eyes winded in shock she love her long hair it is beautiful

geet just cried main apne bal nahi katungi


i will not cut my hair



geet just hug rano and cried ku ma ku ye kitane sunder hai mere VEER Baba hote aj to wo app logo ko haat bhi nahi lagane dete muje she cried in hig voice veer baba please please veer baba


but there is no one to stop them all just accepted this all on name of ritual rano just hug geet and say


rano - geet it is ritual widow have to cut her hair geet maan ja, she just give look to ma eyes and turn stone all just took her with them front side of house

where a man siting they just make her wear that bridal dress and start to remove her jewlerry , sindoor etc than change her in white cloth and than just just cut her long hair there one person just grip near one thing in hand like he will crush with his hand ,







when that man cut that beautiful hair , he just want to punch him hard he cant look more and went from there to near veer statue, he have qus in his eyes why ...

next day when he saw her in white sari without hair ,his heart bleed with pain , that girl just lost her smile from her face he mummer slowely ye to baba ki pari nahi hai just than his eyes met with her eyes and he shake with pain and question

like she asking him you also not save me from that na

maan feel so helpless yes he is maan who disturbed with all and don't know why his heart pain with her pain why

precap maan thought

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
arre ...

gana kaha hai 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
🤣 res ka matlab ye ta...mai pagal thought that mahi askng me to comment on this 🤣


wo clearly nahi boli mujhe 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: umamaaneet

🤣 res ka matlab ye ta...mai pagal thought that mahi askng me to comment on this 🤣


wo clearly nahi boli mujhe 😆



confused atma first apna mind clear kar 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan



confused atma first apna mind clear kar 😡



sory sorry baba...galti hogayi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: umamaaneet



sory sorry baba...galti hogayi



sorry ki bachi
yahi miss kar rhai thi main basanti
jitna bhi time mila baat kar lo yaar
pata nahi kal ho ya na ho
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan



sorry ki bachi
yahi miss kar rhai thi main basanti
jitna bhi time mila baat kar lo yaar
pata nahi kal ho ya na ho



ye aap kaisi baat kar rahi hai mahi...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hamara desh ke yeh rituals bi naaa badi ajeeb hain... Widow hain tho bal katna hoga... But in case of men there is no such rituals...
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Nice update but sad tooo
Veer ne apne life ke saath maan ka bachpan bi legaya...
Geet ke shadi tho maan ke saath hona chahiye abb ye ullu kon hain jo hamare geet ko lenekeliya ayaa hain
Edited by achu66 - 10 years ago

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