MG SS; Fanaah..An Impossible Love Story.. Chapter-3 updt pg 9

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Maan went back to the terris but lights were off nd curtains were spread..May be she went to sleep..
He sniffed but a playful smile graced his lips as he thought about her.. "Maan.."
He repeat nd turned off his lamp too..

Maan cleared her throat and pressed the door bell.. After few minutes a girl opened the door "Ji..kon?"
Maan turned and passed a formal smile "Good Morning..! Mein Maan.."
She was confused..but he realised and edit soon "Mein Apke peechay wali haveli sey aaya hun..I'm Maan Singh Khurana.." Her face show stern expressions..
Just than an old man came out smilingly.."Kon hai Nandini?" Maan repeat his introduction..
Mohan smiled and called him inside.. Maan sat on sofa was scaning the house looking around..His eyes were searching for her desperatly.. Rano met him.. "To Aap is haveli ke maalik hein..Achha kia aap aye..Aap chaye lengey..!"
Maan smiled "Ji..kiun nahi..Bahadur bohat tareef karta hai ap logo ki to socha aap se mil lun.."
Mohan "Bohat achha kia..Apki family kaisi hai.."
Maan " sab theek hein.." Rano brought tea and asked Meera standing there to serve Maan.. Meera carried her books from table "Mujhe college ke lie dair ho rhi hai.." Saying this she left..
But before Maan and anyone else react..
Nandini handled "Mein serve krdeti hun"
Maan talks to them of everywhere..but..but his search remain uncomplished till last sip of his tea..
Maan granted leave greeting them very well..
Rano"Beta aatey raha karo tumse milke achha laga.."
Mohan "Mein bhi school ke lie nikal raha hoon aao tumhein bahar tak chhor dun.."
Maan's heavy steps showed his confusion.. "Wasn't she home?"
Mohan left and he hit the floor with his shoe.. He sniffed looked up at bright clear sky..wait..Looking up he turned..
"Here she was standing beside her window..Looking at him with amazment..He passed a sarcastic smile like they are doing conversation through eyes "
Geet "Oh to ghar tak aagaye?"
Maan "Oh to jaan bujh kar saamney nahi aayin.."
Maan gave a challenging look raised his eye brow "Mein bhi dekhta hun..Kab tak Maan Singh Khurana se chhupo gi..!"
The word escape his mouth was "Interesting..!"

Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 10 years ago

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Character sketch:

Maan singh Khurana:
The Only son of Khurana family lives with his Dadi in dubai after his parents death..Handsome,Illegable,Desire of every girl..Does not beleive on love but kind nd good at his heart..

Geet Desai:
Elder daughter of desai family..Love plants and flowers..Beautiful,Sweet nd love loving girl..

Dev (Samir sharma):
The only Best friend of Maan from childhood..Handsome,Heart throb..Worked with khurana and having space in dadi's heart same as Maan..Loved his best friend alot.

Meera:
Geet's younger sister..Beautiful but reserve..Does not frank with anyone easily..Love her family alot

Nandini:
Geet nd meera's youngest sister..Fun loving nd innocent girl easily attached to anyone..

Rano And Mohan :
Geet's parents..Love their daughters alot..Never made them feel that they are girls..They love them as they are their sons..

Bahadur:
Khurana's servant from his childhood, Maan's grand father' time..
Old now..Care taker of bari haveli in ooti, after khuranas shifted to dubai..He was responsible for their property nd guid other servants present there..He received such a great respect from khuranas..

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Chapter_1

His deep oceanic eyes scan newspaper on breakfast table as his habit..Bahadur's bak bak was continued from last 20 minutes that made Maan annoy.. "Aap 16 saal baad aye ho..Maalik (Maan's grand father) ki death ke baad to bari Malkin ne yahan aana hi chhor dia.." Maan seemed to be totaly 'uninterested' "Shayad isi lie aap raat ko raasta bhi bhatak gaye. Wo to achha hua bari Malkin ka phone aagaya aur mein apko baahar leney pohanch gaya. Warna Aap to Desai House Pohanch jate.." "Flashbacks of last night flashed infront of his eyes..nd he instantly asked "Desai house??" Bahadur happily continued as he love gossiping "Haveli ke peechhay unhi ka to ghar hai..Bohat achhe log hein..Mohan ji Music school ke principal hein..
Rano ji bohat achhi hein.." Maan tried to arrange the puzzles in his mind but "Mohan" and "Rano"..umm no..Not a single name suits on That Angelic Fairy..

Maan cutted his 'bak bak' and asked "Unke ghar mein or koi bhi hai?"
"Haan saab haina..Unki betiyaan..Sab bohat pyari bachiyan hein.."
He kept talking but Maan lost in his thoughts.. "Interesting"
Bahadur while making tea for him "Maan babu Cheeni kitni lengey.."
Listened to his way of addressing Mr.Hoty Singh Khurana chocked while eating.. "Kya kaha tumne?"

Bahadur innocently "Cheeni kitni lengey?"
Maan controlled "Us se pehle!"
Bahadur was confused..
Maan explained with fake grin "Call me 'Maan' sirf Maan..ok?"
Bahadur understood nd served him tea..

His Brown leather jacked filled with his presence and Brown shades fitted his pencil nose..Carrying important file with him he left for Important meeting.. . . .

Dev "Mr.Bhala se baat hogae hai..He would discuss with u details tonight.."
Maan" (Yawned) ok!"
Dev"Teri tabyat to theek hai?"
Maan was walking into the Garden beside haveli"han theek hun bas aaj meeting attend krke thora thak gaya..

Dev"Islie to tujhe keh raha hun shadi kar ley ..Usey dekh kar teri sari thakawat dur hojayegi"
Maan laughed at his friends stupidity..
Dev"Tu hans raha hai? mein sach keh rha hun yar..haan tujhe kbhi yakeen nhi ayega..tuney kabhi pyar jo nhi kia!"

Maan wondered"Achha to tuney kia hai?"
Dev dreamily "Haan kia haina "preeti is my love.."
Maan confused "Abhi last month to tuney Rohini se milwaya tha!"
Dev hesitated"Haan..wo..Hmara break up hogaya bt now i found love of my life preeti"
Maan shook his head "Isey pyar nhi kehtey..Pyar to wo hota hai jab aap pehli baar kisi ko dekho to dil khud bta dey that she is ur Love"

Dev"Arey yar meri chhor ,mujhe to har larki ko dekh ke aisa hi lagta hai par tujhe kisko dekh ke aisa lagey ga?"
Maan sniffed "Pta nhi yaar.."

Dev Laughed "School se college,College se university,University sey Office tak..Har larki tujh pey marti hai even preeti ka bhi pehla crush tu hi tha..Pta nhi Mr.Hottie Singh Khurana kisko dekhengey to unke dil ke guitar bjengey.."

Maan dreamily "Koi to hogi jisko dekh ke mera dil ruk jayega..Jisey dekh ke aisa lgey ga ke.." His breath stopped seeing her Dream girl..

Dev"Lagey ga key..??? Hello"
Maan"Dev mein tujhe baad mein phone krta hun.."
Dev confused"Ye lagey ga??"
Maan"Shut up u..I'll call u later..Bye"
Dev laughed"Hello.. sun to..!"
He disconected the call nd rushed to her as he didnt wanted to miss this chance to meet her.

"Her pleasure was visible in his adorable smile her face was wearing..Her fingers must be soft same as flowers she was creasing..Few of them she was picking may be for her Vase..What a passion..?" Maan thought..

He cleared his throat standing close to her..Close enough to seek pleasure by scanning her without a blink..He was following her after his gaze.. "Oh her cute little mole on her neck.." that made his throat parched..Like he is thirsty from ages.."
She was just looking like a butterfly standing between colourful flowers..What lucky flowers she was touching...What name to give her..Which word he should use to describe what I'm feeling for her..Aah..! Precious..Just Precious..!" He took more steps towards her..Doesn't wanted himself to lost in her sorcery nd get missed again..
He tried to figure out a sentence of his 'Tutey phutey" Words..But naah..!
"Mr.Hottie Singh Khurana nor need to be formal neither to arrange his broken words.. He smilingly more thn confidently spoke
"Hi..Aap yahan?" Her 'No responce' proved She was busy..Her Lips stretching to the wide and gorgeous smile,Her twinkling eyes and her expressions showed that may be she was talking with the flowers..
He tried again "Excuse me.." But she didnt even took notice of him.. He saw she was about to pick Yellow tulip,He before her held the flower to pick it.. She atlast then Looked at him..
"My God..Her eyes.. Deep oceanic eyes.."It was enough for him that he could see his face in her crystal black big round eyes..He was numb..

"What magic she had in her eyes that made him lost..Her lashes..Oh her lashes..The way she blinked looking at him..Her frown made her little dot of forehead more adorable..Totaly heart stoling atitude..Yes yes he lost..He lost her heart.."
Maan offered him Tulip that he picked..She looked at his hand,Looked up again to his eyes..He gave a slight smile..Like he was giving her his heart..She took it from him and ran away..
Maan lips stretched into a wide smile..As he ran his fingers into his hairs..He cheered "Yes..!"
Saras's hot breaths were visible in cold weather when he sniffed out them through his lungs..But it didnt matters him how the weather and what the time was..11 at night but he was still standing in his terris (Balcony) waiting for her.. "Kal to isi time dekha tha meine usey yahan phir ab tak aai kiun nahi?" He muttered rubbing his palms..He also had dinner in his bedroom just because he doest wanted to lose her glimps..
Desai house's lights he saw turned off..He sniffed dissapointedly turned to his bed..He took out his shoes..About to turned off his lamp..When he heared someone playing Piano.. His eyes twinkled and he rushed back to terris,opened the doors..Yes lights were ON of a room in upper storey .. He could see her half bed nd dressing table beside hearth..He tried to see more if he could..His eyes fell on dresser mirror..Here she was..Sitting beside piano..Her hairs were dancing with cool breeze blowing..Making her more beautiful..God she looks gorgeous in opened hair..

Maan was amused with her this talent "Ofcourse what could you expect from a daughter of Principal of Music school..!" He rested his elbows on the wooden edge,enjoying music with eyes fixed on her through mirror..
He could hear her humming in the silence of cold nights..He closed his eyes listening her.. She stopped after a lesson ends..
He became desperate as he opened his eyes and found her chair empty..His eyes desperatly started searching for her..Thankfuly end to his desperation..He was able to saw her angelic face again..

When she came to the window to untied the curtains..She spread it..But stopped..
Maan signaled him..waved his hand to her.. She Looked at him amazed..
He smiled "You sung very well..!"
Geet smiled.. Saras's heart started hammering inside his muscular chest seeing her beautiful smile..
"May I know your beautiful name?" She was looking at him with same expressions..
He continued "I'm Maan" She thought for a moment than repeat "Maan!" "Oh My God..He was about to faint..He never know that his name sounds such beautiful..He wanted to hear it again and again from her..Wanted her lips to say his name once more.."
His happiness knew no limits that Princess of Fairy tale..Girl of his dreams were addressed him.. Servant knocked his room door that made her came out of her spell.. He rushed to his room..Servant informed him of Mr.Bhalla's call that he received.. He gave him Project details that were discussed with other Share holders in his absence in meeting..He agreed and decided to sign agreement tomorrow.. He disconnected the call happily..Now work on his project in ootie will start soon..

Maan went back to the terris but lights were off nd curtains were spread..May be she went to sleep..
He sniffed but a playful smile graced his lips as he thought about her.. "Maan.."
He repeat nd turned off his lamp too..

Maan cleared her throat and pressed the door bell.. After few minutes a girl opened the door "Ji..kon?"
Maan turned and passed a formal smile "Good Morning..! Mein Maan.."
She was confused..but he realised and edit soon "Mein Apke peechay wali haveli sey aaya hun..I'm Maan Singh Khurana.." Her face show stern expressions..
Just than an old man came out smilingly.."Kon hai Nandini?" Maan repeat his introduction..
Mohan smiled and called him inside.. Maan sat on sofa was scaning the house looking around..His eyes were searching for her desperatly.. Rano met him.. "To Aap is haveli ke maalik hein..Achha kia aap aye..Aap chaye lengey..!"
Maan smiled "Ji..kiun nahi..Bahadur bohat tareef karta hai ap logo ki to socha aap se mil lun.."
Mohan "Bohat achha kia..Apki family kaisi hai.."
Maan " sab theek hein.." Rano brought tea and asked Meera standing there to serve Maan.. Meera carried her books from table "Mujhe college ke lie dair ho rhi hai.." Saying this she left..
But before Maan and anyone else react..
Nandini handled "Mein serve krdeti hun"
Maan talks to them of everywhere..but..but his search remain uncomplished till last sip of his tea..
Maan granted leave greeting them very well..
Rano"Beta aatey raha karo tumse milke achha laga.."
Mohan "Mein bhi school ke lie nikal raha hoon aao tumhein bahar tak chhor dun.."
Maan's heavy steps showed his confusion.. "Wasn't she home?"
Mohan left and he hit the floor with his shoe.. He sniffed looked up at bright clear sky..wait..Looking up he turned..
"Here she was standing beside her window..Looking at him with amazment..He passed a sarcastic smile like they are doing conversation through eyes "
Geet "Oh to ghar tak aagaye?"
Maan "Oh to jaan bujh kar saamney nahi aayin.."
Maan gave a challenging look raised his eye brow "Mein bhi dekhta hun..Kab tak Maan Singh Khurana se chhupo gi..!"
The word escape his mouth was "Interesting..!"

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thnx prayse,aprna,dolly..
Nxt time expecting bit long comment 😊