MG SS; Fanaah..An Impossible Love Story.. Chapter-3 updt pg 9

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Hello Hi friends..May be i'm posting here for the first time..The reason is i'm a late viewer of Geet,so cudnot join the forum earlier ..But was a silent reader of the forum..watched every epi..And fall more and more for maneet..
I realy hope u'll like my concept nd i'll receive gud responce from u..
Ok ok if u want to throw chappals nd tamatar they are also most welcome..coz all Geetians nd Maneet Deewaneys having same passion of maneet like me..Do hue naa my Dost log 😉 nd har ek frnd zaroori hota hai.. Ok ok itna gussa mat ho u guys are gonna having so maneetlicious update..Ya ya romantic too..Uske bina apna guzara waise bhi nhi hai..So plz have a look m impatiently waiting for ur feedbacks..
wd love Ayushii..

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Prologue;





"A tale of two Souls..Who were prisoned in eachothers love..Love that knows no limits..And crossing limits in ur love means to get Fanaa..For ur loved ones.." Silence..Sometime Silence means what does it means..Sometime Silence has something store in it..Sometime it gives relief to desired one or Sometime it becomes reason of fear.. Silence actualy store silence in it but often It stores lots of screams,pain and sorrow in it.. But Silence is Silence so its duty is to be silent..

The Same silence found on a small town of Ootie..It was hard to drive on Vast roads of ooti that were filled with snow Specialy at midnight.. Taking the name of God atlast he reached the address his dad gave him.
He stepped out of the car finding the way more to get inside the Haveli..Continuos Snow fall made the easiest way more harder..His Auburn eyes were searching for a 'Self' atleast..Just then his cell phone rang..He received Dev's call "Kahan hai tu?Tu mujhe btaye bghair hi chala gaya..tuney to next week jana tha na phir aaj hi kiun? mujhe abhi uncle ne btaya.." Maan made face! "Dad ne bhej dia yar or yhan to koi dur dur tak nazar nhi aa raha..Mujhe to rasta bhi nhi pta!" Dev wondered "Kya? tu ab tak nhi pohncha..Acha tu ruk mein Dadi ko inform krta hun.." Maan tried to talk more but he cutted the call in between.. "Is sey to mein kisi hotel mein ruk jata!"

His heart stoling eyes still searching around..Snow fall dropped on his silky hairs too, that making him more charming... He heared someone singing.. "Hey wait..i forgot to turned the music off? No..i did" A beautiful voice tickled his ears..He moved his sight to the voice direction and it stopped on
"An object..No..A man..No.. Oh My goodness.. What she is doing at the time of night here..?" A playful smile came across his lips and he kept staring.. She was collecting Galanthus-Snow bulb covered in a winter blanket of snow.. She is goddess..Her immense beauty knocked at his heart's door..She looks like a fairy..Pure..Untouched..Beautiful just Beautiful.. Humming,unaware of anyone's presence,busy in her task.. His heart refused to beat.. Her Black shawl stucked with a plant..But she kept walking collecting flowers..His eyes were fixed on her..Dont know which type of pleasure that sight gave him but he lost everything around him..

Her shawl slipped exposing her beautiful creamy arms..But his gaze didnt silpped for a moment.. Her Backless blouse made him looked away but 'no' he cant resist...The panorama sent a shiver to his spine.. He settled his eyes again on her..Her creamy waist.."umm what the things were hanging through her dress waistlet or what..??" But it doesnot matter he ignored, again looked up..Her hairs creasing her cheeks almost kissing them..His twinkling eyes has examined her each part he could examine from a side pose. He wanted of her 'More'..He wanted her to turn to him..He thought for a moment..May be wanted to settled his Jacket on her Delicate shoulders..Aah Filmy right?? But May be that would give him excuse to have a short introduction..He took few steps towards her.. "Saab Aap kahan ja rahe hein..Wo haveli ka pichhwara (Backside) hai..Gate is taraf hai.. A voice coming behind stopped him..He immedietly settled his jacket back on its place nd turned.. Careful from his expressions not to get caught red handed..But still quite. Servant "Chalie mere sath" Maan turned back to look at her once more but.. "She was no where..May be she has left listening sudden voice of servant"

Carrying luggage he brought Maan to haveli.. "Achha hua bari Malkin ka phone aagaya warna aap itni thand mein..Shayad rasta bhatak gaye they..Bari Malkin ne mujhe kal hi btaya aap aa rhey hein..Ek hafte pehle btatin to mein arangments krke rakhta" It was so dark inside.."Light bs abhi aajayegi..Aaj bohat baraf par rhi hai bas isilie shayad.." Maan seemed to be completely un interested.. Servant "Meine apka room Saaf krwa dia hai..Ek minute, mein abhi aaya" Servant left to check last time if everything is fine.. Darkness filled in the room when servant took lantern away with him.. Maan soon came out of his trance but its better to follow him more then wait for him in Darkness..Careful not to bump with any object he tried to walk but "Oouch..Something hit his leg.." "Kahan gaya yeh?..Bahadur.." He called his name..
Thankfuly He noticed Golden light coming from left side..He marched towards light but the door was locked..He sunddenly realised realised Bahadur went to right side so from where the light is coming.. To check the source of light he opened the door..

Well furnished..Beautifuly decorated Bedroom..The light was peeping through the door of terris..He moved further nd opened it..The harsh snow fall and wind was blowing in virulent puffs..
His eyes twinkled seeing the light coming from back side Window of the house build on haveli's back side.. He shook his head nd turned back but wait..
He stopped..Does his sight realy witness her beautiful face or its his illusion.. He immedietly turned and yes He could see her immense beauty through her dressing mirror..He took steps more he could to the Terris edge.. Her angelic face was more glowing in the golden light of hearth.Calmly rubbing her arms sitting beside to seek warmth from it..Once again he stopped breathing seeing her, ruffling her silky hairs.. Instead of Minus temprature his palms became sweaty..His fingers started itching his side to touch her once..he didnt come to know why his hand wanted to reach her.. He was never ever heart throb but this time he could feel his heart ready to flew away..
He could hear his heart hammering inside his mascular chest under five layer of cloths.Lucky drops of snow that had touched her in Garden,were melting, creasing her beautiful back downward..Her innocent smile on her angelic face,Oh her little dimple.. "Saab aap yahan kya kar rhey hein?" Maan jumped on his voice nd immedietly turned.. Bahadur added "Aapka kamra tayar hai chalie.." Maan thought for a moment and ordered "Umm.., Mujhe ye room chahie.." Bahadur shocked "ye? Lekin yahan to itni thand hai.Aap.." Maan cutted "Mera saman yaha rakh do.." Saying this Maan left Bahadur dumb folded..
Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can we have character sketch please😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting concept.. Loved it...Pls continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love the prologue and concept!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its so interesting!!!!
do continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh thanx alot everyone..Now will suerly continue..
If u wanna pm add "SMILEY_" to ur buddy list..Will try to update tomorrow.. 😊
And character sketch u cant have dear..I dnt wanna reveal more but only can tell u that its a mysterious story!
I'm sure u guys will have fun nd enjoy reading this..and by the chapters u'll be able to visulise characters more clearly nd wud be easily understand the realationships of them to eachother..Thank u..M so glad u like my concept..
Actualy it was my bday 31st july whn i wrote this..And ur replies are not less thn a bday gift for me..
If u want pm Add 'SMILEY_" to ur buddy list
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intersting
is geet a ghost r wat?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnx frnz..
😆 u hv to read for ur ansrs 😉

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