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Posted: 11 years ago
bchare maan
when will geet gussa kam hoga
nice part dear loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wah kya Baat hain.. Geet has shown her rudravtar to NT first time.. NT is really nutcase. kuch nahi ho sakata uska.. Dadi is happy at least Dev will try.. she is thinking Maneet have normal relation.. may be that's why she is thinking Maan will stand for his wife if Dev n NT will try to insult her. but dadi wake up.. ur great grandson is not much saint.. he too has given her pain.. n still giving her..
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 55
awesome dear...
excellent...
Geet is letting out all her frustration...
its all good when it comes to Dev and NT and Maan...
but Daadima is not happy with it...
she will be angry at Maan when she comes to everything between them...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can some one kick nt's ass???
I wonder how dev tolerates her!!!
Now maan fully understood who partial he is :|
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello friends...🤗





Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
chalo maaj tumhaare saamne hi comment de deti hoon
Ye Geet to tezi se badal rahi hai but she is not wrong in saying all that
maan was really Partial to geet and NT.. she was doing nothing in office other than taunting geet and ordering her Husband..maan too had rejected her without knowing her once

But I m glad that she finally got her chance to answer them back
Nice update Babie
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

chalo maaj tumhaare saamne hi comment de deti hoon

Ye Geet to tezi se badal rahi hai but she is not wrong in saying all that
maan was really Partial to geet and NT.. she was doing nothing in office other than taunting geet and ordering her Husband..maan too had rejected her without knowing her once

But I m glad that she finally got her chance to answer them back
Nice update Babie



🤗 Thanku dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb part
loved it
finally maan realised what he did with geet ..he dont have any idea how to mend his mistakes...he really feeling helpless...
geet saw him tired and offerd him coffee maan agreed is she also take with him ...waiting to see if they talk with each other properly or not
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


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Part - 55



Part - 56





Geet went nd prepared coffee for both,, she came nd handed him a mug ,,, Maan took that quietly nd started sipping thinking how innocent nd pure heart she has ,, she was angry with him at dinner time but now caring for him even got ready to have coffee for him nd what was doing for her ,, nothing .

Geet looked at him nd find very quiet nd lost like something bothering him nd eating him inside.

Geet: kya hua , koi prob hei kya ?

Maan: huu,amm nahi to , why ?

Geet: u r looking disturbed nd tense ,, aap theek to hei na ?

Maan was deeply touched nd felt guilty ,, he gave a painful smile to her nd nodded in a no .

Maan: mai theek hu Geet ,, bas thoda tired hu .

Geet: agar eccha nahi hei to matt peo ,, so jao .

Maan: huummm .

He left d remaining coffee nd put d mug in tray , stood up with heavy heart nd came back in his room to sleep ,, lie down on bed nd closed his eyes placing his arm on eyes.

Geet felt that he was really very tired ,, had lots of work in office nd work like a robot ,, she got up , took out d bottle of olive oil from her cupboard nd went in d Maan's room.

Geet: aammm , hello ,, aap so gaye kya ?

Maan removed his arm nd looked at her : nahi , Geet , koi kaam ?

Geet: haan , aap kafi tired lag rahe ho ,, aapke pair me thodi massage ker du , araam milega aur need bhi acchi aayegi, Dadima bhi karati hei , jab jyada tired hoti hein .

Maan: nahi Geet , tum pareshan matt ho , it's OK ,, thanks.

Geet: apni har baat condition rakh ke manwaty ho aur meri ek bhi nahi manty ?

She replied with a frown ,, awweee ,, Maan's heart melted seeing her complaint with that frown ,, Gussa.

Maan: tum bhi to thak jati ho , so jao mai theek hu .

Geet: mujhe to nahi lag raha ,, see ur face .

Maan sat on bed : Geet tum ku mere liye etna sochti ho , mai deserve nahi kerta.

Geet: ye meri jimmedari hei ,, aap let jaeye mai foot massage de deti hu aapko aaram milega.

Maan didn't argu nd lie down ,, Geet sat on d foot side , took his one foot nd kept that on her knee nd started massaging that taking oil in had hand ,, she did one nd then other ,, covered his leg with sheet nd came back switching off d side lamp ,, Maan was lying quietly closing his eyes ,, he was strugging with his emotions nd when Geet left from there ,, few drops slipped down from d corners of his eyes .. God !! I hurt an angel .

Now it was clear to him that it was all his mistake ,, he blindfolded his eyes nd didn't try to see d reality ,, Geet was his present nd future nd in d shadow of his past he ruined his present happiness , not only his but Geet's too ,, his love for Pari was an illusion which gave him a glympse nd left him in d desert ,, Geet came like a shower to sooth him but he pushed her away ,, in d dismay of his broken dreams he broke all her dreams too ,, She was adjusting from d day one , completing all her responsibilities perfectly , even better than him ,, he was failed , wrong nd irresponsible .. Maan singh Khurana was failed in front of Geet .

Maan was lost in his thoughts ,, his heart sunk how he hurt Geet at every step ,, made everything difficult for her nd him ,, a sorry is not enough for this ,how cd a mere word healed a wounded heart ? d massage worked nd he didn't know when he slept thinking about her.

Next day was usual for all but not for Geet ,, in morning when she was doing pooja a pair of eyes wr adoring her from d door ,, Maan left his exercise in mid nd came to check Geet nd find her engrossed in prayer , he stood there taking support against d frame nd waited for her ,, Geet finished her prayer , offered bhog to God , took d thali nd turned to come out but find Maan looking at her ,, 1st she startled seeing him there but composed he nd moved ahead ,, Maan stood in mid way with a smile ,, Geet quietly forwarded thali for Arti , he took that nd spread his hand for Prasad ,, Geet placed a sweet piece on his hand nd tried to go from Maan's side but he blocked her way ,, Geet looked at him confused .

Maan: not fair Geet .

Geet: what?

Maan: u stole my blessing for a good start of day .

Geet: me !! why sd I ?

Maan: then why did u change ur pooja time , I felt so good when u gave me arti nd Prasad .

Geet: aapko meri koi bhi cheej kabse acchi lagne lagi ?

Maan: Geet , mai galat tha lekin tum to sahi thi , tumne ku rasta badla ? ek bar meri galti ka ehasaas to kara deti .

Geet: maine koi rasta nahi badla ,, appne apna rasta aur manjil pahale se hi tai kiye hue thy ,, aur mujhe kya pata aap galat hein ya sahi , aap aur mai to ek dusre ko janty bhi nahi .

Maan: essa nahi hei Geet .

Geet: accha , to kaun hu mai ?

Maan: tum Geet ho .

Geet smiled faintly : sirf Geet na ,, aapki Geet nahi .

She placed her hand on his upper arm , moved him aside to make a way for her nd walk out living a defeated Maan behind ,, he looked at d way from where Geet left nd than at his hand where she put Prasad ,, his eyes turned towards d idols of God in d room nd mumbled ... ab aap hi koi rasta nikalo , mai jo kadam uthata hu galat ho jaty hein aur Geet ko dukh pahuchaty hein ,, He went to his room to get ready her words wr ringing in his mind .. sirf Geet na ,, aapki Geet nahi .


Precap ---- Geet got a gift ...

Mujhe aap dono se kuch kahana hei ,, plzz pahale meri puri baat sun lena ...



Part - 57



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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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