MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 4 part epl 1,2,3 on 23, 29,35

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achu66

@achu66

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

first tale me medicin li kya

just thank dear you suport give me courage to
write like this and yes dev punishment is my dream that in our country
also criminal get punishment like this which is needed

medicine le liya mahiii... Kitni kadivi hain na... Amma will mix it with honey ...
Such punishments are needed for the criminals who act like animals..

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gunjar

@gunjar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

@achu66
hi welcome back...
abb apki tabhiyath kaise hai...
get well soon dear...

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Gudiyeet

@Gudiyeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

epi 2

geet complained to babji her hubbyy

she saw messed up her room remembered both are happily passion

she told to naina veer dream both are shocked sitting arrangement

all friends pair dance enjoying the song

musky missed her dada geet blushing maan teased her indirectly

lovely update

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

yes criminal hould get punishment so other people can learn lesson and socity can live in peace. Aaj sachai apne sath hote hue bhi hum kanoon ka sath leneko gabharate hai aur bahot log hai jo chup chap sitam sahan karke baith jate hai kyounki use malum hai is curupt world me insaf milna namumkin hai aur agar kanoon ke darwaje khdkhataye to insan ki jingi case ladte ladte khatam ho jati hai aur akhir me justice milta hai ya nahi wo to bad ki baat hai ,jab ki agar culprit paise wala ho to paise se kanoon ka munh bandh kar deta hai aur victim ki to puri zindgi barbad ho jati hai chae wo rap case hot,burglary ho ,ya consumer and goods related ho sab jagah pe paisa bolta hai ise liye wo log paise ke pitche padte hai kyunki is duniya mein insaniyat,athic,moral sab mar chuke hai jis kanoon ki hum respect karte the wo kanoon aaj criminal banne laga hai aur logo ka wiswas usme se uth gaya hai jab bahot anyay badh jayega tub hoga ek bada andolan usme na jaane kitne ki aahuti ho jayegi.
Aapne jo fiction me bataya agar wo reality me sach ho jaye to log firse kanoon ki kadar karne lagege,kanoon se darenge aur galat kam karne se pahele sau bar sochenge.
thanks for update and good buy to fate...!

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

#305

Very nice part !!!

Sr Khurana doesn't deserve any forgiveness for what he did to a 5 year old boy.

Dev is hanged.

I have a suggestion, while writing long long dialogues write it in English, pleeej.

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Wow great story epilogue
I'm really going to miss reading this story of your so much

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Madhu

@Madhu_31

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Posted: 11 years ago

#307

super update mommy!!

really awesome😳

musky...she is a cute pie😃

maaneet moments☺️ hayee...😉

pinky adi scene🤣...veer ka idea 😉aur uski consequences🤣

bechara veer🤣

good shot for pammi and his son👏😃😆

maan's father i hate him😡chii...koi insan aise kaise ho saktha hai😡

how much maan must have faced😭

i wish his father to die😡

so all back at MV😃so maaneet can do romance anytime ,anywhere🤣

dev's case😡...i am very proud of geet...

how much she is courageous...her each and every words were true👏

👏 👏 👏...mahi dear...for court scene!!

really our society need a change😊

DEV HANGED!!🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

geet feeling dizzy...choti musky or chota maan🤣

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sakshi

@tanvi04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#308

for last part update

mahiii wt is happing in the fate ek to main ine dino baad ache mood main online aayi then fate padha to i m sooo shocked n literlly cried hw can maaneet died us waat muje tumpar gussa bhi aa raha tha ki kyun sad ending ki but for laga ki har story ka end happy ho ye jaruri bhi nahi
is story main humne starting se dekha ki kaise maaneet ne apne fate se humesha ladai ki hai n itni ladai karne ke baad bhi sad ending but u know mahi is ending main ek real life thing bhi chupi hui hai maaneet atleast ek sath gaye thats the best thing kyunki pata hai jab life partner nahi hota sath dene ke liye to jindagi bahut akeli ho jayti hai kyunki jo baate aap apne life partner ke sath share karte vo shyad aap kisi ke sath share nahi kar sakte

for epi 1 & 2

happy that u had changed the last part bec i don't want maaneet ending to be sad n jis life ko sath jine ke liye unhone itni ladai ki agar vo aise khatam ho jati to bahut dukh lag raha tha