MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 4 part epl 1,2,3 on 23, 29,35 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Congrats for new thread!! I am reading all parts but never comment..sorry for that..Geet is behind Pammy..let see how pammi make mistake..she can clear Maan's name..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update dear Mann you are becomeing shameless dear infront of every one you kissed geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
read part 42 to 46
awesome maaneet married
n stay in km
geet take a oath to prove maan innocent
making maan belive himself n geet love n trust
he is ready now
dr pinky n adi hehehhe cute love story
maan n geet romance in the air
hehehhhehe maan become more shamless then veer
paami is the killer of her own sis
chi
hope geet planing not back fire her coz pami is an old player
love friend teasing
waitng for nxt
sorry for late reply
i am reading only weekend
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Posted: 11 years ago
45
uff...
maaneet being so naughty naughty 😳
aajkl meri lyf me bhi peace nahi hai 😛

loved their romance...
more to it i think
was them making each other calm..
and make the other one feel
"m always there for u"

geet has a full fkedged plan to trap pammi..
with her bros..
n maan n hus father also agreed
that the truth should come out...!

ppammi all red n yellow
with anger n helplessness
geet id doing awsm job ...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
46

hayye...
this i call as an awsm upd 😳
sooo...cute..
their teasing maaneet...
n not to forget MSKs shameless acts 😳
the bst ws tht veer caught pinki red handed 😆
lovedd the whole of it..

n whats dhamak in nxt up..
m waiting for that...

don't make me emo saying fate ending again n again..😭
m already sad abt it..
waise wht happened to dev i forgot..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh love the sherni geet tooo good pammi ko to aise hi sabak sikhana chahiye n oh good maan sudhar ja devil to besharm hai ab tum besharam ho gaye ki sabke samne shuru i hope ending will be happy pls sad ending mat karna eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsom updt
pammi true colour is coming in front of aan father.
all teasing maaneet
and maan kiss geet infront of all
pinky is so lost
waiting fr nxt
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 45
nice part...
very good Geet...
that woman grrr...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Note


hi everyone

Time pass , in this story many trouble with
language so i think i stop for while so
i am taking brake for time pass

journey

it is small ss so it will be finish
in next 6,7 part , in next week i will
finish that story also so enjoy
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Last part


adi really fear for her reaction ,he just push veer who is busy in hooded and saying come on maan too good maan when adi nug him he give angry glare to adi but adi pointed to pinky and veer first time smirk after saw so lost pinky he again start recording and went near pinky without sound and mummer in her ear , you also want like this kiss from Adi na and pinky who is lost in kiss and day dreaming of adi nodded in yes and say I will love it in upset unconscious mind

and veer make victory dance on his dance , pinky come out from her la la land and look her side there is no one , she look for veer but he is away from her pinky mummer control your thought doc else ... at last geet just bite on maan lips and he parted away from geet with baby face poor girl turn red in shyness , she just give angry glare to maan and maan like to main kya karta geet feel like run from there


veer - ok ok hey no one tease my sis ok she is my di and jiju you have pay for it geet di you decided punishment for jiju


geet just look to maan his carefree face , big smile and naughty eyes veer punishment is for your jiju is he have to smile daily like this ok

maan make thoughtful face and say ok for that you have to give this tonic daily he pointed to geet lips geet just hug maan and say please maan stop it na

veer - ok ok now iwant to show some movie to all , and he turn to doc and say doc you have some time na

pinky nodded in yes and all sit in sofa , on floor and veer just start TV and adi and pinky eyes pop out with shock first time pinky face turn red in shyness , her talk with adi , now she so much lost in kiss all recorded in that , poor adi he turn red like cherry



pinky just stand from her sit and went near adi and bend in front of him and say



muje jada romantic hona nahi aata hamesha mera haat pehel bath karta hai than my mout he give look to veer and veer just remind pinky slap poor boy just went near naina like small boy can you marry me pinky say loudly and poor adi just gap her like fool


maan just come near adi and slap him and say ullu ki jaise ku dekh raha hai ans de


adi - yaha meri fati padi hai and kya ans de


maan - come on adi be a man at list nodded in yes look she looking with so many hope yaar


adi just nodded in yes and pinky just hug adi and next moment pinky just kiss hard to adi and poor boy just verge of fainting all just froze in their place

veer mummer kya yaar aj kiss day hai kya and he give look to naina



and naina just say sochana bhi mat nahi to shaddi ka pata nahi divorce pehel ho jayega just than phone start to ring and geet just went to took that call and just lost color of face


next day all just have serious face so tense today is hearing of geet dev case , she just make sweet in house , make puja take blessing from dadi and rano and went to maan father room where he all lost in thought because last few days pammi real face start to come with that cc camera and he ...


geet just say till now you get 50% idea how is that women na now think about maan a boy age 5 year please and she just come out


all just went to court and hearing start dev vakil try to abused geet with questions but she bravely handle all , just like GMSK and judge declared death punishment for dev , he just went out of control and geet sit on chair a big part of her pain , her agony come to end she just look to maan with tearful eyes like look we do it we won , you change my fate and fate which is shapp for me so unfortunate to me now become fortunate ...


maan nodded in no like don't cry but next second geet face turn whit in horror , dev just took gun from police officer hand and just punch hard on maan head and maan just faint with sudden attact and before veer , adi make any move , dev just went near geet and just put gun on her head and say loudly

dev - put your gun down , just down


all just worried for geet , veer want to make move but dev just fire a bullet on his leg geet cried in horror


maan wake up maan please wake up maan she just speak loudly but no response , she just cried please maan ab tak sath diya , aise haat mat chod do ye devil ko jitane mat do please maan


she say with angry tone maan this is not time to sleep maan , do really love me , musky maan ut jao maaan


geet just cried her heart babaji you cant do it to me please , maan maan wake up maan who lost his hosh and not giving response to geet voice


cout room feel with sound of laugh of dev , nahi utene wal hai wo , geet wo to gaya babaji ke pass

geet just want slap him hard , she greeted her teeth and say mind your word Dev


dev - wow I like it isne to tume sherni bana diya hai ha geet muje pata hai ye log mera encounter kar denge , ya phir fasi denge , lakin usse pehel , I will kill you and your yaar , tere yaar ka to pata cut ho gaya hai , mar gaya hai wo geet ,he is died hilake dekh usko ruko main karta hu and he just push maan body with his leg but no moment from maan dev give smile devil smile to geet and say bola na mar gaya hai wo tera maan mar gaya hai



geet just run to dev took gun from his hand and just say loudly maan nahi mara hain , mera maan nahi mara hai with that she just shoot dev , she just empted all bullet in dev body , she just saying wo nahi mar sakta , mera maan nahi mera sakta samje tum when bullet finish , she just start to hit dev dead body with her leg , mera maan muje chodke nahi jaayega wo mere aj hai kal hai ,nahi ja sakta muje chodke , mera annewala fate hai ku chodke jaayega wo


babaji aisa nahi kareng mere sath unki kya mere se dushmani hai kya wo nahi karenge mere sath aisa mere maan ko mere babji ne beja hai mer liye , tumse bachane ke liye samje dev


geet just sit near maan and caresd his face with so much love and say dekho maan kuch bahi bol rah hai wo apko to nid ayi hai bus apko kuch nahi hua hai , app bahot thak gaye hai na ...isiliye soye hai na app


veer just want to go near geet but adi stop him and say with painful voice wo nahi sungei hamari bath wo bahot aage nikal gayi hai veer bahot dur

veer adi stop it kya bol rahe ho tum stop it


just than court room feel with voice of geet she just put maan head in her lap and singing it is same song which maan sing for her and musky in hospital

Surmayee Ankhiyon Main

Nanha Munna Ek Sapana De Jaa Re

Nindiya Ke Udate Paakhi Re

Ankhiyon Maon Aaja Saathi Re

Raa Rii Raa Ram O Raaree Ram

Sachcha Koi Sapanaa Dejaa

Mujhako Koi Apanaa Dejaa

Anajaana Sa, Magar Kuchh Pehchaana Sa

Halka Phulka Shabanami

Resham Se Bhi Reshmi

Surmayee Ankhiyon Main

Nanha Munna Ek Sapana De Jaa Re

Nindiya Ke Udate Paakhi Re

Ankhiyon Maon Aaja Saathi Re

Raa Rii Raa Ram O Raaree Ram

Raat Ke Rath Par Jaane Vaale

Neend Ka Ras Barsaane Vaale

Itana Kar De Ki Meri Aankhen Bhar De

Ankhon Main Basthaa Rahe, Sapana Ye Hasthaa Rahe

Surmayee Ankhiyon Main

Nanha Munna Ek Sapana De Jaa Re

Nindiya Ke Udate Paakhi Re

Ankhiyon Maon Aaja Saathi Re

when she stop to sing veer and adi look to her she sit there with closed eyes and her back touching to wall veer took so much courage and just went near her and called di di and he put his hand on geet shoulder , geet body limp like lifeless , she just ...



kuch fate adoore rahe jate hai but geet give perfect sath to maan , she just went with him for long journey jaha unhe koi alag nahi karata ...har ek pain, dard , hurt se dur jaha koi dev nahi hurt karne ke liye na hi koi maan father this soul get always hurt from other but they only give happiness to other most people say you cant change your fate but maan change geet fate and brought her from her black and painful life and today geet touch death for her maan , geet ka maan ...

The end

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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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