An Ode... Chapter 6 - Page 14 19/2/15

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Oh no pls dont end it like that if you really have something more in your mind... we would love to read more of it...

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Glad that you are back! :)
College life!! :)
Liked it. Superb.

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Can we get your address please😳

nothing serious but it would help us plan ..stealing your diary!

Beautifully written!

Last day of college !!

It is surely one of the memories one would never forget!

Thanks for coming back to complete your works🤗

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Nitya

@ChanandlerBong

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Practicality oozes out in every single word you write, every single scene you portray.Although this what what happens in most of the lives , dont you think this one needs to be continued? Because what makes a fiction different front reality is the touch of drama and fantasy , an unreal proceeding in a real circumstance

I could literally see the entire scenario in front of my eyes . Your work shouldn't be confined to the pages of your diary.

Please do continue, because I want to see a vision of them watching the expanse of the beach , going on a bike ride to Jodhpur , share a cup of coffee in his mug ,as friends 😃

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ReelyROSExx

@ReelyROSExx

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

U r back ... Pls update Twines of heart as well

will read n comment for this one

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ramarora

@ramarora

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

welcome back😃
beautiful piece of writing dear!!!!!!!!!!!
do continue it😃

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

part 6 - last day of their collage...he was not aware of her name but he was surprised to know that she knew his name...has he found out that geet is the same girl who has written those words...?

geet was unhappy that their short walk ended so soon...

beautifully written, how they tried to know each other in that small talk...

it felt incomplete...please I am here to read whatever you have written in your diary

pl cont soon, want to know what would be in their future..

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

pl update your other stories also...

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soniaz121

@soniaz121

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

it is so beautiful update and felt so nice to read it after long time always waiting for ur updates keep updating all other stories they are also so good wish u lot of luck and i will be so happy if you give this a proper end keep writing such stories an tc of urself bye