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Chapter 5
Indescribable moments n unexplainable feelings.
A little more than admiration yet not as strong as love.
To be just another face in the crowd for someone who has been constantly appearing in your thoughts and the reason of your smiles.

But destiny has a way to surprise you with a golden chance at most unexpected times.

In the form of a walk with that person who stands afar yet is always near.

Empty and hollow.

I dont know if those words are suffice to express one feels when "The End " is put on display for a certain phase embarking the way to a new beginning.
There is sadness combined with fear along with excitement for the beginning of journey.

There is something in sharing talks.
Talks that come straight from heart.
And then there is something about sharing walks.
Walks under the bright sunlight.
Because then your eyes appear more beautiful and twinkle with light.
And then when you walk and talk lost in your world i am lost in the beauty of your face , in the simplicity of your heart and the clarity of your thoughts.

My hands and feet have a mind of their own...
While i come near you i see you are nervous yet i cannot stop without carressing that face of yours even if on the pretext of removing the petal that stuck to your face since i first saw you under that tree.

Good bye had never been sweeter.
You go away but leave behind a precious treasure.

Hope.

Of smiles and frowns
love and laughter
that can be mine
waiting for me to take a step ahead


Thankyou for being a part of this forum!
thankyou for writing stories!
thankyou for sharing them with us!!

I had passed this phase and it's exhilarating to know someone has put their thoughts to it. Due continue it.

I cant help but ask will there be a sequel for this?

ardentfitzcy:

I hope that this story does not remain just in your diaries and that we get to read it too...

Re-read it. It makes you feel I don't know the word but it is a pleasant feeling...light.

read in one go like it will you be able to give further updates called desiring end?thanks

it was pleasant feeling for me dear
loved it pls continue dear
waiting for it